:O :O :O :O !!
BIG SHOCK !!
So sudden !!
Wow !
I mean I was wandering how you would get the two together but this was unexpected ! I thought it might be him falling for her whilst she comes to meet Suraj or something but this is something else. That would have been typical. Not your style :D.
Wow. Brief but yet so full of detail.
Lets see how the two will fall in love. What with both of them having lost a person that they love. Would they feel guilty for doing so ?
Wow. Shes going to be living in the hostel, huh ? Interesting.
And its nice how she tends to go to Shaans stuff first. First the bed then the desk. She does so unknowingly.
I love the way Kartik is looking after Khanak. The subtlety of it. Very nice.
You have portrayed Shaans uncomfortableness well also ! and it seems like he is already confused as who Khanak is. Surajs posession or his wife ?
LOL ! See you soon wifey ?! Loved that !
I really loved the bedroom conversation. It was natural and the better thing was that Khanak started the conversation. Haha funny when he asked who she was asking for when asking if Akshay got married, I even thought is she asking Shaan ? 😆 and how shes not shy to talk. Shes quite stubborn isnt she ? About wanting to stay in Surajs room. I loved the way she she said Shaan is her husband so why shouldnt she stay in the room ? Really liked Shaans reaction to all this. He's had his best friend die, married her fiancee and is living with her now its like WTH ?! Loads of stuff must be going through his mind and to have counselling on top of it it must be like 'are you joking ?!'
She does music ? Nice. Looking forward to see what your going to do with that.
So far it seems like Shaan wants to avoid confronting whatever has happened so hes keeping himself busy. Its like a shock thats come but he doesnt wanna face it. Khanak it seems wants to hold onto Suraj but knows Shaan is her present and future but Suraj cannot be forgotten. Not for now. Its going to take time.
I just got a thought. A scene LOL of Shaan and Khanak laying on their own beds at night and Shaan asking her what they would talk about every night OR him realising how Suraj could talk to her every night since it seems that she talks alot.
3 chapters today ! A 1/5th of a promise complete ? 😳 I wanna take it slow
Will be back