FF- Katra Katra- Part 25-141, Pt 26-145, Pt 27-148 - Page 47

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Posted: 12 years ago

You know what your story reminds me of?

A beautiful summer evening

Sitting on the wrought iron swing in my backyard, watching the setting sun, the breeze picking up the sky turning from pale blue to yellow to orange, hundreds of birds flying above in one formation or another.

Suddenly my sprinklers turn on and mix with the breeze, spraying me with water

Thats it!

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purvi08

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IF-Rockerz

Posted: 12 years ago

saaz di loved the update.shaan's friends are too funny

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nk.mail

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Goldie

Posted: 12 years ago

Lovely...

They're jus meant to be together...

He is so infatuated by her at this stage but is totally clueless about it!

M lovin it! 😳

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Daebak

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Posted: 12 years ago

I officially loveee Shaan ke friends !! Mere college ki yaad dila dete hain harr part me...

LOL...Sach me...this must be the first FF where I look out for the ensemble cast as much as I do for the lead couple's interaction...

There is NOOO low point in your FF re...!

I love regional language touches in FF's...Jessi gives me the Gujju dose and you gave the Marathi touch with Dharan here...It was awesomeee...Kharass !!😳😳😳 There nuances give such a realistic touch to the proceedings...

I love the way the guys are behaving with Khanak...they have accepter her as their own gang member...I want her to interact all buddy buddy with them...they can bring in her free spirited and fun side...

Loved their discussion at the beach...Very simple and adorable...Of dreams and passions😊 Passion for Mechanics and Music...!! 😳

I loved how he was looking for Suraj's pic everywhere...LOL...Pagal ho gaya hai😆😆😆

CONTINUE SOON !!

Luv,

Vandu

Edited by togepe30 - 12 years ago

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IF_rida

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Posted: 12 years ago

Excellent update 👏

Luv their comvo at the beach... especially when he said "bbarish paani checked"
he remembers 😊

shaan's frndz are really funny actually sweet

he uses her shampoo... 😲 hope a sweet convo for wed be4 the meets tina or avoids it

their good nite and gud morning is more like a ritual now... its really cute

em luvin it !!!

waiting for the next...

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christmas

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Posted: 12 years ago

far too high...to be able to come down and gather thoughts to say anything!

loved it!!

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SachDJ

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Goldie

Posted: 12 years ago

Great update saaz!!

Really enjoyed reading it. at least it looks like a friday night update...and not a friday night katra.

Just enjoying it...with a smile on my face.

😊

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khwaish

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Posted: 12 years ago

See that is y i wrote in anticipation so that u understand my feeling and make something romantic on beech but u brought dharam there and i was so sad but this gradual moving ahead is nice thought in this love story
loved ur every update
boys convo is too gud
and this mess thing ,did everywhere d same complaint, i mean when i was in hostel i too use to say this to our mess anty 😛 😛

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jyothi1989

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IF-Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

hey saaz loved the beach experience of shanak both of them feeling something which they hadnt felt before .and in the room there cute nokh jhokes regarding the shampoo that was funny .loved the update dear

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Shanaksansar

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Posted: 12 years ago

Your story reminds me of days gone by. Am reminiscing the moments we spent in college campus or small simple things that we did at the time. B'bay ki baarish esp Marine Drive pe chalna aur ice-cream khana was truly a delight.

Have not read any Indian romance novels; hain bhi patha nahin, but this surely is a treat. Something we can relate to.

It is nice to see both Shaan and Khanak have started to feel something different of course realization will take some time. Shaan is so caring and always thinks of her well being. Don't know what he had going with Tina but he definitely needs to sort that out.

Love his friends, it makes for a very warm and cordial atmosphere where Khanak seems to have fit in well.

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