FF- Katra Katra- Part 25-141, Pt 26-145, Pt 27-148 - Page 38

wow Saaz! Shantanu was so caring, they are so supportive of each other, loved it!

super good update loved it...😊i am worried about khanak attending sangeetha maha bharthi  she has to get better😊 Edited by sshriyaa84 - 12 years ago

wow awesome update shaan was so sweet and caring pls continue soon

Splendid!

The last 2 parts ...i can just say WOW

10th part fone conv was really cute .. hmm saving the num by ""W" hopes it soon changes ti "WIFEY"😊
 
The 11th part its awesome

Shaan:  You will be fine..I am there..

Khanak: You are always there..

Shaan: Should I leave??

Khanak: You cannot..You won't be able to..

Shaan:  Maybe I don't want to..

Their convo got my mind especially when shan said "MAY BE I DONT WANT TO" ☺️

Luv the comfort level they are sharing ...

Woahh! This one is going fast...on part 11 already!...not that I am complaining 😛

It was great reading all 8 parts in one go...loving every bit of it!

you have portrayed Khanak's grief soo well...love their small conversations here and there...I like how they can comunicate without the awkwardness...they are slowly accepting the situation...consoling each other...

The guy talk is awesome too...love the friends...and their bonding with Khanak!

Caring side of thie Shan is so cute...his concern for Khanak 😳...I wonder if he'll come back before 2pm...

and I would still like to know what was in the text msg...

Keep Updating at this speed...I love catching up on soo many parts in one go 😃

"aur ahista keejiye baatein" by Pankaj Udhas is what comes to my mind!!

Saaz,

Loving it. The subtlety is dripping and loving it to bits girl. It is a wonderful contrast. Everything else is fast, loud, guys, friends, gals. And these 2 are it with ishare. Shaan ki dudeness is awesome, I don't know many people who can stand around seeing their wives heaving into a pot. And yet he is distracted with her hair. 😆

Like I said, your contrasts are amazing... I like that in a story...subtle inflections with full on masti.

Keep writing now...don't run away. Aur lazy bum kise keh rahi...2 updates a day kareegi tab mein manungi.

DJ

Saaz aaj sham ko ek update de de yaar! Friday is too long a wait! Roz ek update toh banta hai boss!! Specially when u have woven such a fantastic tale luring us all in! Now u expect us to wait?!! Hmph!! 😡

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