Originally posted by: saaaz
nahin re...roshni..actually Priyacool is abso right...guys dont buy for each other..roomies aur guys in hostels mein its free for all...the conversation betn shaan and suraj could have been something like this..Suraj wearing shaan;s shirt..which was lying around..Suraj is getting late for a class...Shaan: woh t-shirt mera haiSuraj: Oh shit! tera hai...baad mein leleShaan: Nikal mat..rakh le..I hate blue anywaysMy observation...GUYS often treat their friendships like a FOOTBALL...they throw it, kick it, bounce it, dirty it and it stays in a corner...UNLIKE GIRLS who treat their friendships like a porcelain plate...traesure it and if it breaks..they glue it but the crack remains...and I have learnt that if you can strike a balance between the two...you shall have everlasting friendships...like I just this is MHO...
oye the story started now how can she end n unlike b4 she clearly mentnd its ff n nt ss😆😆😆😆she better keep updatng like disOriginally posted by: Roshni_Momg 3 updates in one day...
u knw wat the updates r approaching to update 10... im scared... u'll finish the ff soon...nooo...😭ok back to ur update...superb ya...loved the way she is mixing around wid shaan's friends...and both r slowly opening up...naice naice...👏👏👏👏👏
Originally posted by: Yasharanrocksoye the story started now how can she end n unlike b4 she clearly mentnd its ff n nt ss😆she better keep updatng like dis
THANKS TO EVERYONE ESPECIALLY
@DJ: No No..I love grunge..It makes me feel soopercool..I once remember a fellow forum friend had said my stories remind her of a 'script style'..I thought it was so effusive..it almost made me conscious..but grunge makes me feel cool..so grunge it is…hehehe
@Vandoo..chup be..but you know you are right..I titled it Katra Katra for so many reaons..hehe
@ Souma..RIGHT NOW…even I do not know..but you keep commenting..maybe we can both find out..mwahaahahah…I agree completely on 'J' factor being important for love stories..
@Rooji: Thanks so much for your comments..I liked your line they are connected in one way or the other..how true..Shaan is nowhere to 'showing' interest re..
@ Dish: I knew you would appreciate them talking about HIM..it was a deliberate move to keep a lot of you happy..Awww..on the friends..I miss mine too..but there are so many ways to keep in touch..FB, email etc..
@Varsha…umm..then don't expect..ab main apne mooh se kya boluu?
@Purvi: Thanks sweetie..even I don't know
@ Vat: I like her mingling with his friends too..I think every girl should have male buddies in her life..they are like the best ever
@Shal: Thanks so much..wanted to write something away from RBO..even departure from Golden..let us see how it pans out
@ Naveen: Thanks re
@Lana: Maydam.."he lets her be"…and that is the key ..to me the guys are more than comic relief..in many ways they bring them closer..make them more aware of each other..all unintentionally..thanks so much Lana..for making my story that much more special with your lines and as for making the story longer..dekhte hai..cannot promise..but dekhte hai..
@ Vandoo..No sweetie, he did not cal her at 10..around 10pm..they were having dinner with Murli and Karthik..and he tried to cheer her up..after dinner..much later than 10pm, his phone rings..it is a SMS tone ring..from his gal pals..and the rest as they say..I knew you would love the boys..Amit..I have planned something for him..let us see..
@ May…YOU DO??? I do too…I love the boys..as I have said a million times before..they are completely inspired by my college buddies..I know there is something to the bhabhi dewar relationship ..so unadulterated..and yet crazy fun..thanks re..
@ Jyothi: You are mech too? That is cool..thank you re..
@Ramani: Nahin re..His gal pal on the phone called him sweets..he did not..those are my favorite lines of the song too..See she did not think much of who to ask..she was with them..she throws the question..of course Shaan in his mind had hoped she would say something 'only to him'..but that was not to be..WHAT to do?? Murli showed only Karthik the messages..I did not see them either..ehehe..she said 'kiss and make-up' as tho to tease..becos she knows the boys are so close..so it was like teasing him..
@ Candy..PLEASE tell me this is better than shaan with duck and sam..thanks for saying 'interesting'..but please tell me it is superlatively better..I mean those convos were nothing like how friends chat..no depth at all..that was the worst phase of RBO..
@IF Rida: Thank you so much..as for whether he is planning to meet his friend..hmm..lets see..
@Jess..Kuthe hotees? Patkan ye tu.,.
@Shriyaa: Thanks re..heheh..I don't know your Russian comment always cracks me up..Arrey Aditee jaisa koyee nahin..her FF is a legend boss and she is a superlative writer..I wish I could learn from her..I shall tell her you said so,,she will be real glad..hehehe
@ AG: thanks so much re..
@Shiksha: Thank you my dear
@ zaara: Yeh le..update coming up in some time
@Aussiegal: Yaar tum log bhi na..let me see how much I can drag this..I am trying hard to do an update today
@ Deepali:: thanks so much re..
@ Priya cool: Oye greedy ki bachee..your comments better be more than three lines next time
@Roshini: (and Varsha ki bachee): Thank you so much..don;t be scared re..it is a story re baba..aur kuch nahin..silly goose..lets see how long I shall last
ALL THOSE WHO PRESSED LIKE: me likeee..
Next update shall be awhile..maybe an hour..thanks guys..
Murli: Abey..baith jaa..canteen uncle chillayaga..dus ke aage bajj gaya hai..
Shaan involuntarily looks at his watch..Khanak stops smiling..and stares at her food..Shaan notices her..
Shaan: tho tumhe Tripathi achhi lagi?
Khanak: (surprised at him asking): Jee..??
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