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I really like your story and can't wait for the next update

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Originally posted by Traxy101

I really like your story and can't wait for the next update


thanks for liking the story and i sure will update very soon.Smile
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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 3:41pm | IP Logged
hey guys here is part 7 i have been busy with exams but i found time to update hope you guys like itSmile

Next morning Gopi slowly opens her eyes and sees her hands joined with ahem's. She was confused as to what happened because last thing she remembered was something had hit her feet. But she didn't know what it was. She tried to pull her hands from ahem's and by doing that ahem woke up saying its morning already. He looked besides him and sees Gopi awake and confused. He gets worried and asks Gopi how are you feeling? She says I am fine ahemji what happened. But before he can answer anything he called room service and asked for something to eat as he knew Gopi was a little weak. He said I am sorry but you have to eat something to regain your strength. Gopi said thank you ahemji for doing that and then she said but what happened to me I don't remember anything. He said while we were walking in the jungle a snake bit your feet and you fainted. But everything is ok now the doctor gave you a shot and you should be normal in a week that's all. Till then we are staying here for a few nights. Gopi said that's all fine ahemji but there aren't two beds in here where will you sleep. Ahem thought why gopi of course with you where else. Ahem quickly snapped out of his thoughts and said don't worry I will sleep on the sofa ok. Gopi said ok ahemji should we call maaji and tell her what happened she is expecting us home. He said ok I will tonight don't worry. Someone was knocking the door and ahem said come in it was the room service people bringing the food. Gopi said ahemji you didn't have to. Ahem said Gopi you need to eat to regain strength your weak. Gopi smiled and ahem told the waiter to just leave the food and go. Ahem went to bring the tray to Gopi and said here today I will feed you please eat you need it. Gopi was smiling and said ok ahemji. Ahem forced the first on Gopi and kept feeding her but Gopi was already full and said that's enough ahemji I am full. Ahem said with a stern voice you better finish this whole plate till the time I come back from the shower. Ahem went to take a shower and as soon as he went to take a shower Gopi got up and put aside the food and began cleaning the bed but her feet were still hurting a little. But she couldn't help it this was how she was always at her aunt's house. Ahem was done taking a shower and forgot his pair of clothes on the sofa. So he just grabbed the towel put it around him and peeked out the bathroom door and what he saw made him come out without even knowing he was half naked. He saw Gopi cleaning the room and she seemed so busy into her work that she didn't even notice him. he went over to her and pulled her by her hands and Gopi was shocked so she fell on him they both fell on the bed ahem on top of Gopi and Gopi on top of ahem. She looked at him and said ahemji what are you doing. He said I told you not to do anything and eat but here you are working instead. Gopi was blushing thinking of the position they both were in. ahem noticed her blush and said sorry and got up pulling Gopi to stand up as well. But when she did stand up she noticed he was in a towel and quickly turned around. Ahem smiled and said sorry I came out to grab my clothes and I was going to tell you to give it to me but I saw you cleaning so I had to stop you. Ahem quickly got his clothes and ran off to the bathroom. Gopi laughed and that's when a call came on ahem's cellphone. See saw that it was ahem's mom she picked up the phone and said jay shri Krishna maaji when Kokilla heard her voice she said hello Gopi beta are you guys ok I was so worried and I have been expecting you guys home are you guys ok. Gopi said yes maaji we are fine and something happened here so we will be coming home in a few days don't worry maaji its nothing to worry about as soon as we spread your friends ashes we will come home ok maaji do you want to talk to ahemji. She said ok beta yeah is he there she said yes maaji hold on ahem got out the bathroom and Gopi said ahemji maaji is on the phone she wants to talk to you she handed him the phone and ahem said thank you ahemji she said you're welcome. He said jay shri Krishna maa how are you she said I am fine ahem dikra how are you is everything ok he said well you know the boy that wanted to marry Gopi was in the bus we were traveling and then wee escaped but gopi got bit by a snake so we are in a hotel right now after hearing all this Kokilla said oh god I hope she is ok please take care of her ahem dikra and have  a safe trip I will talk to you later ahem said ok mom and don't worry everything is fine I will be home soon. Ahem hanged up the phone and said oh I hope mom isn't too worried.

let me know what you think thanks Smile

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 4:39pm | IP Logged
Just read all of your ff. It's really good. I love how caring your AHem is towards is gopi. He is so     Thoughtful . Looking forward to the next update. Smile
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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 5:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Simz786

loving it Day Dreaming

awww  i am glad you like it thanksBig smile
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Originally posted by winter30

Just read all of your ff. It's really good. I love how caring your AHem is towards is gopi. He is so     Thoughtful . Looking forward to the next update. Smile

thank you for liking the ff i wrote and yeah i know i wanted ahem to be more nicer in this becuz poor gopi deserves love i will update soon thanksSmile
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loved this caring aham...

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