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M&G FF- You and I ? ch 5 pg 15 updt 28/07/2011 (Page 3)

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 9:26pm | IP Logged
lovelu update n finally u updated,,,,,plz pm me d next time u update,,plzzz,,continue soon

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 1:47am | IP Logged
gr8 start
awww geet had loved maan from childhood but maan never gave her any love
cont soon Xx...

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 2:57am | IP Logged
nice one
loved it!!!
did maan love someone else??Ermm
i guess that question has to wait
anyways add me in your pm-list
and update soonSmile

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 8:43am | IP Logged
interesting concept...
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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 12:36pm | IP Logged
Chapter 2 a


Maan was back home after a hard days work and like any other day she was busy in the kitchen giving instructions to the cook 'he heard her say 'Kaka this is too sweet 'itna try kiya phir bhi zyaada sugar padh gayi .this kheer mein wo taste nahin  aap keep it back'he doesn't eat things that are too sweet aur taste bhi maa jaisa nahin hai'


Kaka(the cook)- 'Beta usse too  sweethi khana chahiye  tabhi  apni Zindagi ki kadhvahat door ka rpayega ''


Geet '' Kaka that's not fair '.u r being too harsh '.aisa nahin hai 'despite not having too much of sweets and things too sweet he is such a sweet talker '.'


Kaka- "haan ..haan ..tumhein to apne pati ke aas paas ek halo ring dikhta hai '..Humne to use bachpan se dekha hai ..sach hi bol raha hoon " he continued


Geet -"Kaka ..ab aap isse to andar rakh dein '.For Sweet dish we can have trifle pudding '.."


Kaka- 'Ab itne pyaar se kheer ..poora din lag ke banayi to let him have it and judge it na,'..he isn't going to dislike it


Geet-'khali dinner karte hain ghar pe and wahan bhi bekaar khaana mile 'not fair 'atleast in my opinion


Kaka gave Geet a look of disbelief ..while she checked on the cutlery


Maan was'nt shocked at the conversation but still he was quite taken aback '..once back to his normal usual self he decided to make his presence felt


Maan-Kaka one glass of water please ''he said as he made his way up the stairs to his room to freshen up


Geet ' Kaka jaiye '.yr kadva karela is here '..and with that Geet burst into laughter


The sound of her laughter made its way into his ears as he was freshening up 'this was the first time she had laughed ever since she had come here 'infact it was the first time anyone had laughed in this house 'since the day it was made 'historical moment indeed he thought



Dinner was as usual  'the quiet yet immaculate affair '..with the occasional meeting of their eyes ,sooner rather than later the trifle pudding made its way out to the table as well 'and while Geet served the pudding to him she asked 'Mumma called in today , Buaji is having a lunch party to celebrate her Bday and has invited us '.so Mumma wanted us to come along , I said I'll ask u and let her know'


He continued to stare at her as she talked and then as if suddenly the trance was broken


Geet- Aap Mumma ko fone kar ke tell her whatever is yr decision


Maan- I cant make it and if u want to go 'then I have never stopped u and never will ..its yr wish'tumhi Mumma ko fone kar dena "With that he focused his attention to the pudding while his mind started to think abt the kheer and its where abouts.


Once the dinner was done Maan spent some time in his study while Geet called up her MIL  and then  decided to call it a day '''.when Maan came into the room 'Geet was still awake ..he knew she was despite her back facing  him  '.. '..he walked up and took his side on the bed '..hours passed both lay awake on their either sides 'silence and darkness filled the  room 'there was nothing unusual about this night 'it was like all their previous nights together ''though for the first time the silence bothered him unknowingly.


To be continued

Thankyou all for the lovely comments and likes they do mean a lot to me ...detailed replies will follow  ...and the pm list will b up soon Embarrassed

This is part one of chapter 2 ...the other will follow ...soon thought of posting this ...lemme know what u guys think Embarrassed

Edited by rdfan - 30 May 2011 at 12:37pm

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 12:53pm | IP Logged
interesting add me to yr pm list...

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Oooh add me to your PM list please

Sounds interesting :-)

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