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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 3:25am | IP Logged
so touching!!!! whn s next? will wait patiently ... i know it is not nice to rush u for u are writing so great!  but it is tough to wait. iam used to reading 300 - 400 page novels at one go. so waiting...Day Dreaming

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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 3:29am | IP Logged
nice pert... very emotional update.Cry...
continue soon...

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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 3:32am | IP Logged
hiii
awesome update
loved it
poor geet
sooo sad 
loved maaneet
maan is sooo supportive
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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dhani24m Senior Member
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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 3:37am | IP Logged
this part just remind me,my past.my dad...
i now how that feel...
ok no sady sady now...love this update.maan is very loving and caring husband
hope I also found husband like maan
is twist se woh dono or pass agaye
next one sound interesting
pls update soon


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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 3:38am | IP Logged
Marvee very well written... though the update had sad parts, u wrote very well... just one question... y does maan call geet's parents uncle and aunty and y does geet call maan's mom aunty??? rnt they supposed to call them maa , papa???
 
anyway it was nice to see geet's inner turmoil about her feelings...
 
precap...ahaaa... so now geet herself wants to share the bed with maan... ahem ahem...

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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 3:39am | IP Logged
Very emotional prt,i was not xpectng death of smbody but as u hav already said that pain helps to connect us,pics r so well matched.felt so bad 4 geet n maan also.overall nice prt,,,nw precap is intrstng,lets see geet kab tak maan ko resist kr pati h. Clap

Edited by mandymore - 17 June 2011 at 3:43am

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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 3:46am | IP Logged


I'm really a super emotional person Cry .
There was a sheen of moisture throughout the sad part Cry . Heart-wrenching Cry
Gosh !!! I'm shaken by the turn of events Ouch

*sob sob* ... Broken Heart

Very powerful writing Clap
The emotions ... pain , loss & helplessness surfaces beautifully Clap
Loved it love wings
Thanks for pm ...

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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 3:47am | IP Logged
Marvee, this is so utterly butterly beautiful! Sadness with a cause! Mwwah! :)

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