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Wow superb dear. Last line was very true sumtimes we need sudden pain to understand true happiness. Do continue soon

wowww amazing...do continue...

emotional update but loved it . maan is so sweet to b pillar of strength to geet. precap seems to b interesting

So that y u killed poor mr handa. . . How crule. . . Lol. . Very well written part.

OOHHH! ME FEELING LYK CRYING ND IT JUST REMIND ME D DAY MY DAD LEFT DIS WORLD...U REALLY WRITE IT  BEAUTIFULLY...

Awww...dat was sad very emotional yet beautiful...

awesome
loved it...!!!

Hey Marv!

Omg he died. Dude I was so upset! I feel the pain Geet is going through. Losing your father is heart wrenching. I am just happy that Maan is with her. Now maybe their love track will expand.

aww!! its s gud,..PRECAP,interesting interesting,..thanxxx!!!

just read parts 11 n 12 now...awesome, please update soon. part 12 was emotion n sad! precap is interesting