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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by sonu4ever


Wooww amazing FF πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜³

Thanks a lot for pming me, otherwise i would have miss such a great FFπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜³
Love ur writing style 😊

Part 1 :
Started so romantically πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜³
Yet while reading i was like what is it, is it a dream ? πŸ˜†
But it turned out better than what i expected πŸ˜³πŸ‘
Geet isnt loving Maan ... Lets' say YET at least πŸ˜‰

Part 2 :
I like the way u unfold the story..
So Geet wants to set her career before anything else hmmm
And i guess Maan hit her car πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰

Part 3 :
Hehe stupid Prem dekh khar chala na car ko πŸ˜†
Wow Maan is a real Gentleman yaar
Love the way u portrayed his character πŸ‘πŸ˜³
Like the way he took himself for her chauffeur hehe shoo cute of him 😳
Yaar u are killing me slowly but surely with those close lovely moments πŸ˜³πŸ‘
Maan is totally fida over her 😳

Part 4 :


Yaar ur updates are amazing, they are getting more and more hot and romantic, mast hai re, lage raho... πŸ‘
Maan is just too cute, healing her wounds πŸ˜³πŸ‘
He brought her car, oye Maan control, he's going to get beaten πŸ˜†

Part 5 :
Hayee Im loving ur FF yaar.
Maan bara fast nikla, he pestered her mom for fixing the wedding πŸ˜³πŸ˜†
Hehe Geet is all set to bhagao his dhulla πŸ˜†
But on the other side our cuty is dreaming of Maan πŸ˜³πŸ˜†
Hehe Geet is shocked to see Maan thereπŸ˜ƒ


Part6:
Whoa what a part
So i guessed right, its Geet who is closing her heart's doors close..
Still she cant stop herself falling for Maan 😳
Maan is such a darling, willing to wait for his lady love πŸ‘
Absolutely Hot and romantic part.
Very well written.

Love your story.
Keep up the great work.
Cant wait for the next part πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ
Will send u a buddy request, do pm me please πŸ˜ƒ

Love,
Humera πŸ€—


Awww, you're very sweet, thanks for all the comments on each partπŸ˜ƒ, glad you're enjoying the story.

-love,
Marvee
Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by itsreallyreal



Awww, you're very sweet, thanks for all the comments on each partπŸ˜ƒ, glad you're enjoying the story.

-love,
Marvee

wen r u goin 2 update the next part...??
i really like ur ff its awesome...πŸ‘πŸ‘
hats off 2 uu...
plzzz do continue soon
Posted: 12 years ago
will be updating in a couple of hours πŸ˜Š

thank you guys so much for all the love😳

cheers,
-marvee
Posted: 12 years ago
nice ff
loved the concept very much
plz continue soon
Posted: 12 years ago


Untold Emotions

Part 7



I WILL NO LONGER BE WRITING ON INDIA FORUMS, PLEASE REFER TO MY BLOG TO READ MY STORIES.

https://marveesfictions.wordpress.com/

Next Part: Part 8


Edited by marvee-khan - 11 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Yaaay me first
Loved the update...
Oh that would have been so tourturous for maan poor thing hehe
She does feel something for him but doesn't want to admit it...
Cant wait for more
Edited by MsMovielover - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
That was hot😳... wonder why Geet is so adamant about not giving in to the relationship.. her temper with the proposal is definitely not something m looking forward to.πŸ˜•

great update. Thanks for the pm.
Posted: 12 years ago
aww! last lines were really sweet!
"Nothing had changed and he didn't care if it never did, all he knew was he had her and he loved her and maybe one day she would love him back. He knew that he could easily wait all his life for that one day."
 
Edited by TinkJia - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful update dear
loved it...wonder why geet is still holding herself back
update soon
Posted: 12 years ago
Hi ...Marvee...thanx a lot for PM...

Aaah what a update...Maaneet's comfort level is good with each other but how they are able to control their feelings after so much proximity.
Lovely ,awesome, passionate update...loved it.
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Thanx for answering my post. Waiting for next part.

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