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aaawww !! she is so innocent  :)

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i came onl9 just 2 read ur update...but u hav not updated!!!!!!!!Cry
but now i see u r updating,plz update fast...i m waiting!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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                                      chapter 61

maan woke and found room empty'..he , took bath  got ready and went out..
prem and vicky were on dining table waiting for breakfast'''
, maan joined them'''
vicky---what is today's plan bhai'.?
maan --- well,.we all cant go home together''so I will leave for office ''U guys take geet home'..then  I will return at night ..
prem'ok so U are going office now ..
prem and vicky exchanges look as they have some imp plan for today ''..
geet came with breakfast'
finishing breakfast maan went to his room for getting ready'
After few min  geet entered his room and found him shirtless as he was changing..
She quickly turns away''.
maan noticed and smiled at her'..

Am I that bad?
nahi woh main''..
Relax bacha just joking,' he changed and hugged her'.
kya hua?
aap office  jaa rahe ho'?

mat jaoo naa'
jaan 'I need to look after business also 'hai naa'..
after all its your favorite dadaji and papa's dream''..(he knows now she will not stop him')'.
aacha,..toh aap jaao'.Par jaldi aana'
 Definitely 'he kissed her forehead and left''

Afternoon :
Geet got ready for KM' when vicky came with prachi''.
prachi---screams excitingly Geet
prachi tum'..
they hug'.
.vicky----- mujhe bhi hug karna hai,' he too joined them''.
geet pushes him away and  hides prachi back of her'''.
U better stay away from her''and prachi U don't worry I am here to save U from this devil''.
prachi--- thanks geet'U are such a sweetheart''
vicky'are yaar main prachi ko geet ka mind change karne laya tha .,
lag toh  raha hai,ki  geet uska mind change kar dege?

he pulls prachi aside''what I asked U to do and what  are U doing ?
prachi---oh haa main bhool gaye thi''
geet came and stands in between them'with folded hands, tapping her foot'
vicky sorry I am going' he winks at prachi and left. '''
geet 'turns to prachi..-I am sorry
for what geet?
that day I should have helped U
prachi blushes, Geet U are so innocent'.she took geet to bed'sit here'
U doesn't need to feel sorry''.

What ever happened, it was my wish too''
Geet----then why U was crying'I saw your tears'.
 those tears were out of pleasure'..

Geet  gets confuse, 'why  is she defending vicky?
she turns away in disbelief ..Prachi pulls her back'believe me geet
He was not forcing me  'just expressing, how deeply he loves me''
we were  enjoying  each other''.

As love making is the most beautiful and pleasurable experience of life ''
where two lovers get so close to each other that even air couldn't pass from them'''

Breaking all barriers, Not only bodies their souls gets mingle  'making them one'.
geet  moves uncomfortably'realizing  the meaning of  all her unknown sensations  and hidden urges for maan'.though she was experiencing them from years but understanding it for the first time '''..
And U know what, geet
marital life is incomplete without physical love''
Though it's not everything but a very essential part of marriage''

Geet---what if husband is not interested?
Geet---how do U know? May be Vicky is different'?
Geet all men's are same'always desperate
.infact they crave for it badly'..
geet'par pata kaise chalega'.ki unke dil main kya hai''.?

Haven't U seen, bhaiji's longing in his eyes, in his touch 'didn't U ever noticed his body reacting different 'something odd'..

Geet remembers all their intimate movements, hungry kisses. his hands desperately roaming on her body,' how is body gets hard, even getting wet.'.
and his words ' " It was not childish but something else. Something very adult and matured'. '. "U wants me to prove it to U Geet"
Geet blush hard and looks down''..
prachi hugs her'.I think U got,.. What I am trying to tell U''.
for now this much is enough 'if U ever have any question ask me 'I will clear it'..
geet nodes'..

vicky knocks'hello if U girls have done '

May I join U''
prachi---Vicky please drop me before bhaiji comes back'
Geet'why is U scared..? He doesn't know anything about U both'..

Prachi'he is too intelligent geet'no one can fool him '..
vicky'pulls prachi aside '. 
have U explained everything to her''about s**.
are U crazy vicky'.she is very innocent  I only explained  the importance of physical relation in marital life'''.
If I would have told her about s**'she will again get hell scared'..they are few things need to be experience without knowledge'''..
vicky---fine can we experience it now he smiles naughtily.
shut up vicky and drop me home''.
they turns to geet'who stood lost in her thoughts''.
prem comes  running---maan'
geet kya?
are yaar tumhara maan ..he is here and coming up to your room'..''.
prachi cries'Vicky I hate U 'if bhaiji  find me here, he will understand everything' '''.
vicky---shut up prachi even I am scared 'let me think'.U hide in other room

prem'no ways he may see from stairs ''
prachi'should I hide under bed..
vicky---no no 'bhai know that place very well'they are experienced in hiding under bed''
geet ' uff jaldi karo..
vicky took prachi and both hides behind door'''
prem and geet quickly pretends to pack  bags
maan enters room'
geet and prem turns to him acting to be surprised'
. aap?
haa'I was missing U'so I came back'.theek kiya naa..
geet smiles nervously '
maan 'tumhe kya hua'are U hiding something'
prem'murmurs'seriously, iska naam maan nahi, james bond hona chahye tha..


Kuch nahi ,I think I should leave U both alone'he left'
maan was about to turn towards door'when geet clings on him'

stopping him from turning'..
she indicates Vicky to take prachi out''.
they tiptoe's and left room  ''.
maan  was so lost in geet, didn't notice anything'.''.
geet  felt awkward with his intense gaze'as now she knows his reason
Freeing him she ran out blushing'

maan came to his sense 'ab isi kya hua?
yeh phir badle badle kyun lag rahe hai''
he shook his head, God save me''

After finishing lunch'maan got busy discussing  general topics with prem
geet sat little far, admiring him by stealing glances now and then'.
maan observes it  and thought,  this must be her one more childish game'..

               (Geet wants to attract maan)

      Hi friends here is part 61...hope U all like it...
                   sorry for mistakes
        and please comment long. it inspires me a lot...

Edited by fairyland_1234 - 01 June 2011 at 9:52pm

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         !!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!


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