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FF-Meri nanhi Dulhan.-Thread -5-note-pg 154 (Page 53)

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pleaasee quickly
cant wait x

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                            chapter 60

 Month passed
Geet exams were starting, so prem made an excuse saying '  "for some urgent work mishti need to go back to her village for few days"''..

Dadi and jaya agreed'''.
dadaji was little upset as he got very attached to her, these days''mishti assured him, she will be back soon'''..
maan too informed he is going for business tour''..
they left'

prem and vicky makes all necessary arrangements for geet and maan at prem's house''..
whole day trio were available for helping geet, but at night prem and vicky left for KM so that, no one doubts them''.
maan  took off  from office and fully concentrates on geet's studies,  day and night  'as for him nothing  is more imp then her. but still  he avoids physical contact  completely'''geet notice it 'she starts longing for him
 her exams started
maan took geet to her center,
While leaving for examination hall. she  hesitating inched closer to hug him ,but  he stops her and  shook hand , wishing her good luck '
she left dishearten ''
he waited out till she finishes her exam'
one by one she gave all papers of bsc 1st year, '

It was her last paper'
As always maan was waiting for her''..
she came out excitingly and hugged him''..
he stayed quite didn't hugged back''.

she pulled away, and handed him her question paper''he checked it'
well done geet ''
she smiled widely '..ab KM chale'''.
aaj nahi kal jayenge'.

He didn't reply and 'Opened car door for her'
she got in '
he drove straight to court '
Geet was little shocked'..
prem and vicky were waiting for them'..

maan got out of car, opened door for geet, holding her hand he took her in'

she followed him silently'.

Registrar. Took  maan and geet signatures ''then prem and vicky signed as witness'
 he congrats  them. ".U both are legally married now"''.

Geet turns to maan surprised, he gave her blank look..'''
her eyes filled up, with happiness''..

Vicky and prem congratulates   and    hugged. them'

she couldn't remove her eyes from him''
she was missing him badly'..repenting her own deeds'..
All reaches prem house''.
prem and vicky settles on sofa watching tv''
maan left to his room '
.geet follows  him. and hugs  him from back'''
his body stiffened by her touch'''
kya hua geet''?
she didn't replied ,just stayed feeling him''..
he removed her hands from his chest'and  moved ahead'.

Tears rolled down her cheeks''aap shadi se khush nahi ho'?
maan'shadi,?mere liye mere shadi tumse 5 saal pehle hi,  ho chuki hai geet'
I don't need and govt certificate to believe in it''..
U are misunderstanding me..?she said  with tears'
he pulled her angrily holding her upper arms'
aacha'then why u were avoiding me'..?
she looked down,
he shook her'answer me?
I was scared'
scared..? Stop giving me silly excuses'? Scared of what? Speak up '?
she hugged him crying '

I am  scared of physical relation, that every  husband and wife have'.
maan was shocked'..

he pulled out of hug and cupped her face with concern'..
How? And what does U know about it?
I saw a couple doing it''and I know every couple do that'..
 maan is shocked beyond limits'..
all these days, she was going through such fears
nahi shona not every couple,. we were married from many years, did  we ever did it''.
some couples takes time ,isn't it'..?she said with hiccups''

He made her sit. On bed and sat down on his knees'..
What exactly U has seen?
both's  clothes were shattered throughout  the room''
and they were fully  necked under the sheet,'.
he was on her ..And the girl was crying'''
maan was getting shock after shock, how can be someone so careless 'to make out, openly' they scared my bacha, how badly it affected her naive mind'..
"Whom U saw geet"?he asked angrily'
she turned away 'I can't tell U, names'.
  but What exactly they were doing? she asked innocently'
he lowered his eyes in embarrassment '
Nothing, I mean there is nothing to get scare of it'.
Geet, it's a way of expressing love'.like we kiss.. ..
Just like that, couples love each others bodies to express their excess love.

I don't like it''.she said'

Yes, I am too not interested in it''he lied to make her comfortable'
 she smiled with relief '

But I am angry with U..Shona U punished me for a sin I didn't  made''
she makes a puppy face, I am sorry
ok'but don't repeat it'

she nodes'

Now U sleep'I have some work '
laying her on bed..he switches off lights and went out''

 prem and vicky were watching tv'
prem'what happened u seems  disturbed'?
maan---yeah few days back geets witnessed something very wrong..
she saw some one making love''.but right now, there is no couples at our house then who can it be?
prem turned to vicky
Vicky eyes were widened in fear and his breathe was struck in this throat''.
prem'didn't she told U names'''..
maan--no I tried a lot, but she is no were speaking about them''
Vicky took a relief breathe''
prem'may be some neighbors..
I don't think she knows more neighbors then rohan and prachi'.
 prem smiles mischievously at Vicky'
Vicky gives him I will kill U look''

Who ever, they may '. Once I come to know their names I will surely kill them '' can, they be so careless''.chii
Vicky looked down in guilt'..
prem--'don't worry she will come out of it soon''
why don't U explain her about sex''.
maan---no ways '..I don't want to scare her more''?
prem--but maan she is growing, she needs to know about it'.and how long U can wait?
I can wait life long, but can't harm her for my pleasure''
prem and vicky admires his unconditional love for her''..
good night
maan left to his room and slept beside geet''.
vicky ---I am feeling bad for  bhai and gudiya''can't we help them?
prem---as a doctor, I can say, geet must  know more about sex,  in a positive way''.
but maan is not ready  to do it 'and we can't talk to her ..on this'we need someone else help''..
fine,'I will ask prachi to talk with geet'about it'
yes,'getting known from a girl is better for her''..
'.but do this in maan's absence'..otherwise maan may doubt prachi'he was almost there''..
Yeah'good night'''

(precap---prachi changes geet's POV )

Hi friends here is part 60...hope U all like it...
                   sorry for mistakes
        and please comment. it inspires me a lot...

Edited by fairyland_1234 - 30 May 2011 at 11:01am

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wow awesomeee
atlast u updateddd
n yaaa geet told maan abt wt she saw
wonder wt maan will do whn he gets 2 know tht it was vicky  n prachi
n hope prachi is able 2 show d positive side of sex 2 geet

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sooo sweet lovely ff xxx

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finally... thee Suhaag Raat isnt too far away...
i wonder how the family will react whn they find out the truth about mishti...
well done x
can't wait for the next part ...
please update soon x

Edited by Nazmaa - 29 May 2011 at 5:02pm

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lovely update
thanks for updating

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plzzz uodate jaldiii

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