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FF-Meri nanhi Dulhan.-Thread -5-note-pg 154 (Page 26)

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i hope geet's dosent take it wrong way... although maan is there to take care...but this is geet she can think anything...

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hi hi few hours ko bhee jaldee bana diya ... fairy u are begaading us ..thank u ..sweet heart tomarrow i have most important exam for a  job ..and mera dil hee nahee rah raha hi padaee meim..

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oh fairy i saw updating status...
as precap was ahemDead waiting eagerly!

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                                      chapter 58

Geet went to maan's room, he was  sleeping peacefully '..

She sat on floor at one corner, watching him and thinking''.'''

what is actual relation of husband and wife''''.
what is this physical relation'.?.
is it true ?did I have to ?

did maan will also do that to me?
then she  remembered all their intimate movements''. his desperateness  in his     every touch'I always thought it was his anger'
 he was actually expressing his desires for me ''?
she shivered recalling their kisses, how his hands hungrily roam on her body'
nahi nahi 'woh aisa kuch nahi karenge hai naa''..
Out house incident started haunting her
what was actually happening in out house, I didn't understood much? Just that they were necked 'and'..?
Should I ask maan about suhaag raat'.?.
Instead of theoretical clarification what if he gives me practical explanation'', nahi nahi'''..
Par puchna toh padega naa''.?
jaldi mat kar geet, haule haule'(.not now, ask him some other time'.).

Lost in her thoughts she rests her head on wall and drowsed off ''..
Morning she woke with jerk'..when maan was carrying her to bed''
where is U taking me'?
to bed'
why? She asked shocked..
What type of question is that? Why people go on bed'?

She gulped
he laid her''

She quickly got up to sitting position.
maan sat beside her'
 Why was U sleeping on floor'?
I was thinking about something, and I don't know when I  slept.
and what was so important that U were lost in it whole night'.?
she looked down embarrassed'
maan raised his eyebrow''.are U hiding something?
she got up and ran to bathroom ''.
he smiled and left room thinking there much be some childish reason behind her behavior''..'

dadi and jaya had breakfast early and sat in garden''.

 Geet serving breakfast  to maan Vicky and prem'..
she was moving back to kitchen when maan  held her waist'
she felt current with his touch'as if he was touching her for the first time..
 are U  not eating with us?
I will eat later'..she freed her hand and ran to kitchen'panting.. she  held her waist smiling '' what did I felt just now'everything is same then  why I am feeling the difference  '''.?
prem leaned on Vicky, what's wrong with geet?
Yesterday night she witnessed '' and prachi making love.
What? prem chocked food
vicky passed him water
Maan---U okay?
Vicky sat looking down, embarrassed unable to meet maan's  gaze'..
What if bhai comes to know about me? He will definitely throw me out of this house'.
prem looks him sympathetically   '..
maan finishes his breakfast and left to study'
vicky'I think I must start looking for new place'
soon bhai will throw me out..
prem---don't worry that situation will not arise'
vicky'thanks yaar'U really think bhai  will forgive me'
No I think he will kill U  so there is no  need for looking new place'prem said smiling mischievously'by the way what's your  last wish..?
vicky ---glares him angrily' " I want to kill U"'salley Its because of U, I caught in this situation'
prem'hello did I told U to make love and that to openly'.
hogana naa it was a mistake'now what..? Did I will be hanged for that? Vicky said with a puppy face'.
prem'U are alive till geet is quite' keep your fingers crossed'
hope U get saved this time'god bless U' come lets go out 'and  enjoy your bachi kuchi life'..
vicky----U are comforting me or scaring me'.
prem---what ever, lets go'. they left''..

Whole day Geet avoided confronting maan'''.
she was going through mixed feelings '.little shy  and scared too''..

Shy for understanding his hidden desires''.
 and scared with his passion''..
 she decides  to stay little away''..
it was maan's coffee time '
she stood thinking whether to take coffee by herself or to send with some one'else''..
kisi bhejo''.
kyun tum  khud nahi de saakti ? maan said standing behind her'..
geet turned to him shocked'.aap

 are  U avoiding me ''.?.he stepped forward
while she moved back'.till she hit back shelf''
then why  didn't  u showed from morning ?even now U were looking for some one to send this coffee to me''.
I was little busy''..
I can see that?

she looked down'..
he raised her face holding her chin'trying to read her eyes''.
she jerked his hand and turned away''..
maan ---after dinner, come to my room we need to work hard''..
geet turned  to him shocked'what for?
maan--- irritatingly what we do every night? Study'
she took a relief breathe''..ji
he left '''.

All finished dinner and left to their rooms one by one'''
geet stood   out of maan's room little tensed ''
maan opens door and found her standing and playing with her dupatta nervously''what? Do U need any invitation?
.she got in '..And was about to sit on couch when maan asked her to come on bed '
she hesitatingly went '''
he taught  her lesson 'and asked her to note   important points''..
Geet laid on bed facing down'..her dupatta fell off, exposing her cleavage '
she is so  immersed didn't noticed it ''but maan's heart skipped a beat witnessing the breathe taking sight 'though he tried avoiding it but failed '''.her extremely beautiful white curves were tempting him to touch and feel them'his  throat went dry  with  desire of tasting it''..

After noting points geet looked up to maan  'and caught him drooling over her cleavage'..
she quickly got up to sitting position and covered herself with dupatta''..
maan turned dark pink in embarrassment''..
What I was doing?   he took a bottle of chilled water, drank  and sprinkles     some on his face to get back to his sense''.
he turned to geet hesitatingly'. ''
geet fumbles---mujhe neend  aarahe hai main jaaoo''
maan'wont U sleep here'..?
no,I mean what if someone see me here'.?I better go to my room'
with that she left''..
maan is curious now 'her reaction is not something like her'..
Yes I did wrong, what wrong? She is my wife what if I saw her''.
why is she acting wired?

        Hi friends here is part 58...hope U all like it...
                   sorry for mistakes
        and please comment. it inspires me a lot...




Edited by fairyland_1234 - 31 May 2011 at 2:40pm

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