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                                chapter 57

Geet took time from dadi for handling priya issue'saying maan is not yet ready and she needs some time for pursuing  him'''
Dadi agreed as she too knows how stubborn maan is''

geet got busy on concentrating family specially Dadiji'..
and  spends hours, in his room talking and entertaining him,  every evening she takes him to their backyard garden for a walk'
there was an remarkable improvement in dadaji's  health '
and everyone knows the reason is mishti's care and effort''
though maan changed back again, but only for geet, prem and Vicky'for others his behavior was same ''..
it was very difficult for him to forgive them for parting him from his geet.

he stopped going on business tours completely, as he was very much effected by their separation, don't want to loose her again'even most of the time he works from home to prepare geet for her exams''

while working he prepares her notes at day time and teaches her at night'.
' after whole day exhaustion she gets so tired that mostly she falls sleep on his lap while studying''leaving maan  to fight with himself'.. it was not easy for him to control himself facing  Geet's  ravishing beauty all the time' every passing min,  she very innocently tortures  him'.
many of the time he feels an urge to crush her under him, 'show her what exactly she is doing to him'.
but he fought with himself and suppress his physical desires. As he very well know how much their intimacy affects her nave mind.  And he doesn't want her to get distract from studies ''''

prem is now working in sanjevini as a doctor and dating heer''
vicky working with maan but his love story was little messed up as he ignored prachi a lot , due to family tensions and specially disturbed with   geet's absence''..

It's been a month Geet living as mishti''.

One Afternoon

ladies were in kitchen while maan working in his study'
prem and Vicky were watching tv''..
prem.---what happened why are nervous?
vicky how do U know?

Prem'U are chewing nails and U does it when U is nervous'..
vicky'true. Today is prachi's birthday and I don't know how I am going to face..her,I have avoided her a lot, I  want to patch up now.
prem'today is her birthday right, then why don't U give her a surprise?
vicky---What surprise?

Prem---Romantic evening'
vicky'but in such short notice, where will I get booking?
prem'humm'he thinks for a while '''
why don't U call her to our out house''
vicky 'gets excited yes, very good idea'.but what about family members?'
prem'don't worry no one goes there, and rest I will take care'''
vicky jumped on prem hugging him'U are a true friend'''.
prem---ok ok now stop drama and go for arrangements '..
vicky ran off''.

All had dinner together except Vicky '.
maan'prem  where is Vicky? dadi  jaya  and Geet were also curious to know'
prem'he went to  close friend's  birthday party and mishti don't wait for him, he will be late tonight'..
All left one by one, maan indicates geet  to come to his room''.
After finishing her works geet went to maan's room''..
maan is sitting on his bed and checking geet's notes''

Throwing away her dupatta she jumps on his bed''.
I am tired I don't want to study tonight.

Maan lay besides her and took her into his embrace '.then what do U want to do?
he caress  her cheek lovingly'about what?
Geet---about everyone'.
maan'rolls his eyes,'there she goes again family'
she started telling him about all family members, their acts, hobbies etc''
''.he patiently tries to listen her'
but she seems no where to stop getting bored maan fell sleep''

geet checks him making a puppy face'did I bored him?she was about to sleep
when she remembered about Vicky she went downstairs to check, whether he came yet or not'''
he was still not there?
she waited for him till 11 pm
then went out waiting for him''
watchman ---mam, are U waiting for someone?
Geet---yes vicky'
but vicky sir is in out house'
what?  geet was surprised ?
she went to out house'to check on him''..
After a romantic dinner vicky and prachi end up on bed making love''..
They forgot to lock door'
and  geet entered without knocking'''
she ws shocked beyond limits ''..
Everything over there was so shocking to her'..
prachi and Vicky's clothes were shattered throw  out the room  even their inners..
After scanning room her eyes fell on bed..Where Vicky was on top of prachi

only there lower bodies were covered with a white thin satin''..
but it was easily visible  that there are fully necked''..
vicky was moving in rhyme on prachi'..and  enjoying like anything''.prachi seems to be in pain'.
Geet even forgot to blink'''
As soon prachi's eyes fell on geet   she was shocked''
and cried out covering her face''I hate U vicky'..
vicky ' don't worry  sweetheart I 'am using protection nothing will  happen
 just leave me,'now bhaiji will never accept me as bahu of  khunana family''
vickcy'U are spoiling my mood, how can U think about bhai right now''.?
just forget everything and feel me..
prachi shouts 'vicky'Geet?
now this is limit first bhai and now geet?stop it prachi..?
geet answers 'I think, she is trying to tell U that I am standing here.
vicky got off  in jerk,. Trio was shocked   and hell embarrassed.
vicky---why its always me who get caught by her? And have she ever missed any of my intimate movement''?
Their bed sheet was slipping off revealing them'..
both quickly covers them self's'.fighting and pulling it from each other'.

Geet came back to her sense and ran from there..
Vicky took bath gown from side table wore it and ran after geet'.
he stopped her'blocking her way''he was panting heavily''..
gudiya where are U going?
unn ke paas..
kyun ?
I need to ask about all this?
Geet bhai will kill me''
just sit here'he made her sit and  sat beside her'catching his breathe  
he knows today there is no escape 'and he need to be honest''
'look gudiya I know what are U going through right now? But please don't tell to bhai '..He will definitely kill me'.
vicky U are scared because U have done something very wrong? Isn't it?
geet I am not the first man on earth who did it'.
vicky----Every married couple do it geet'..and also few unmarried like me?
Though its not right before marriage. .but soon I am going to marry her..
geet----it cant be true'
yes it is U always wanted to know what couples do behind closed doors right so this is it. ''.he said with closed eyes feeling embarrassed'.

Then how come I don't now anything about it?
Geet U are very innocent, U don't watch tv except cartoon, U don't have bold friends  and bhai  always kept U safe and away from all this things''

 I know its hard to believe but geet'every married couple has physical relation'which starts from their marriage night known as suhaag raat'.
But  I am also married..I mean..

I know what U are trying to say'..?
Some couples take time for all this''..
Now just stop thinking,I don't want your health to get effected by it '.
she nodded and left .. lost in her thoughts''''.

updating next part in few hours..
Hi friends here is part 57
hope U all like it...
sorry for mistakes
and please comment...

Edited by fairyland_1234 - 27 May 2011 at 1:58pm

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wowww awesomeee
im d 1st one 2 comment
geet caught vicky n prachi making out
tht must b fun 
oh god 
im blushing like mad imaging d sceneee

Edited by rsroopali - 27 May 2011 at 2:01pm

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awesome update ... 

poor vicky .. he always end up getting caught ..  LOL

haye rabba ab Maan ka kya hoga ... how will he answer Geet's innocent questions  LOL

wating for the next update Day Dreaming


Edited by sindu555 - 27 May 2011 at 2:04pm

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loved the update 

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Awesome !!!
I wonder how Geet will handle this !!!

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