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Posted: 04 June 2011 at 2:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mons_bhatia

i hope u r not SLEEPING fairyAngryAngryAngry
coz i m waiting CryCryCry
 
 
mee too!!!!! It's 1:22 AM over here in America and I can't sleep without an update...my mom is yelling at me:p PLEASE HURRY UP DEAR!!!!!

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Posted: 04 June 2011 at 2:26am | IP Logged
 
Originally posted by iluvblue0812

Originally posted by mons_bhatia

i hope u r not SLEEPING fairyAngryAngryAngry
coz i m waiting CryCryCry
 
 
mee too!!!!! It's 1:22 AM over here in America and I can't sleep without an update...my mom is yelling at me:p PLEASE HURRY UP DEAR!!!!!
really yaar someone through the jug of water if she is sleeping peacefullyAngryAngryAngry
without letting us sleep Wink

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*cries* Chal theek hain, mainu ta neend aandi payi aa...Main ja rahi hoon...kal ko parlongiCryCryCry
IM VERY IMPATIENT!!!!!!!

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                                        chapter 64
Morning

 maan woke and found room empty,he gets ready and came for breakfast''..

geet was setting dining table' trio joined her''..
After serving ''
she sat next to maan looking him lovingly'''
maan   notices it and indicates her to concentrate on her plate'
she nodes for no'?'.
 Eat properly shona 'U are getting very week '

nahi I am fine''..I don't want to get fat'Vicky says I look sexy like this..
maan mouth fell open, sexy'? Does U know what it means?
haa it means very very '.cute'
maan gasp and turns to vicky angrily'
,
vicky hides his face in napkin''
geet suneye,'
kya hai..?

Aap bahut bahut sexy ho'
vicky and prem giggle teasingly '.oye ,'hoye
maan'maan rolls his eyes'.what's wrong, with U both ? Why U guys are behaving 'like I got married today'
prem---what's difference, U both are still virgin'''
geet jumps in conversation'virgin means what?
and why are we  still virgin''..
prem Vicky broke into laughter


while maan turns pink in embarrassment'
chup geet'
geet 'shows fake anger'U don't answer me anything'

 maan looks at prem and Vicky'
prem---I am doctor, I know everything, so U can talk in front of me'
vicky--- I am also growing, I too need to learn about it'so please explain'
 
prem'haa maan U  can ask geet how innocent Vicky is?
vicky'gulps, ..prem'tu chup kar'

Maan'shouts'chup  ek dum chup'..

 --- aur bacha zid  nahi karte 'kha lo'.
nahi ..First U has to tell me its meaning'? Then I will eat. Or else I won't..?
geeet
she pounds her feet and  walked off to  room..
 prem'jayee' patidev'manayee''.
giving them annoyed look maan left to his room''..
he came to her geet'''
 she turns away'from him''
maan turns her to him, and raise her head'holding her chin''.


U really wants to know'?
she nodes'.
theek hai suno''..
"Virgin is someone who never had physical relation with anyone'"
someone like us'.samjhe'?
 kya?..hum married couple se virgin hogaye'ap kuch karte kyun nahi''.?
kya..?maan turns dark pink in embarrassment'kya matlab?

 I don't want to be virgin'''.
maan  is confused now' '.
neither she wants physical relation nor she wants to be virgin''?
yeh ladki mujhe pagal kardege''..
 aap kuch bolte kyun nahi..''..?

geet stop all this non sense'I told U I am not interested'that's it'
he left room'.
geet stomps her foot childishly..' No I am not going to stop till U give me all my rights''.

its been a week now, with every passing day geet ''.
annoys maan  hell''.
she left no place to torture him'
whole day rushing to him with silly excuses'.
sitting on his lap. and distracting him from work''in study room'
when ever he gets into kitchen for taking coffee''..
'.
she seduces him by small kisses on his exposed chest'and neck'

He used all his controls and holds himself back from touching  her'.
he even works  late nights till she gets tired and sleep'
every min he was cursing himself for accepting her demands which were no more childish.. ''


One more torturous morning''

prem and vicky left early for their works ''..

maan  is 'in gym room 'trying to concentrate on his exercise  but couldn't ..as whole week incidents and her  seducing behavior was distracting him..
Hearing geet's payal sound,'maan pretends to be busy in his tai chi

She came wearing a red sari '


Placing milk glass on table, she stood taping her foot and making payal sound to get his attention..'
maan avoids looking at her and replies'  can't U see geet'
.I am busy ' '

 she moves closer and hugs him from back''''.

why are u doing this to me geet''?humm

maine kya kiya'..?
kya kiya haa?he pulls her front'
seeing her in sari'he was loosing'but controlled himself  and replied
"as if U don't know what U are doing"'?huh geet?

 She smiles and circles her arms around his neck, pulling him closer''.
he was taken a back by her boldness''.
her eyes were again and again slipping to his lips.. he ignored looking into her desire filled eyes,  fearing to loose himself in them' ''.
.Seeing him not responding she tip toes,, and  sensually rubs her lips on his lips''..
maan closes eyes and groan geet don't please'..
she didn't stop instead tease him more by licking his dry lips with her tongue'''
then  trails kisses all over  his  sweaty chest'and neck..
Licking and tasting him''..he was loosing all his controls''
he held her waist tightly 'she moans 'his name driving him crazy'

He moves his hand from her waist to upwards '
 pressing  her more on him''.moving his hand in her open hairs he clenches them tightly 'she wrench  in pain '
hearing her painful whisper he
 roughly pushes  her away...and  glares her frustratingly''
'''

she feels really  hurt by his constant rejection and runs from there crying'''..

maan   feels  bad for hurting her'but he did it, as there was no other option  to stop her ''.


 

Precap---most awaited part aheem aheem'
  maneet's consummation of marriage


Hi guys here is part 64..hope U all like it..
sorry for mistakes and please comment...
sorry can't pm now...will pm tomorrow...


 










Edited by fairyland_1234 - 04 June 2011 at 2:35am

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wow  For The first Time Me First LOLLOL






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YAYYY!!!!!!!!!!! YOU UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU!!!!!!! AMAZING UPDATE!!!!!!!!!

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nice part...liked total update...

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Yupiee awsum part bt precap is mst awaited hayee

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