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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great start...like the humor and thier nature differences.
 
just one request looking at the title - please dont makt it really sad...i am a sucker for happy FFs and get emotional reading sad ones. Ups and Downs are ok but not those ones where sadness just doesn't end
 
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: ritzy09

Great start...like the humor and thier nature differences.

 
just one request looking at the title - please dont makt it really sad...i am a sucker for happy FFs and get emotional reading sad ones. Ups and Downs are ok but not those ones where sadness just doesn't end
 
 

hey thanks for the great comment
and to be honest we havnt really thought it all through, yes there will be some sad parts but not yet so enjoy the humour and cuteness of maneet
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

M&G... Lambi Judaai... Pt2

 
Geet was getting ready for school, when she heard someone call her name out the same voice she hears every morning. A young girl same age of Geet came running into Geets room;
 
'Why aren't you ready yet?'
 
Geet: 'Annie, bus ek minute tujhe patha hain na, I don't like rushing '
 
Annie: 'tere yeh nakhre humein hamesha late karatein hai'
Geet: 'ok I'm ready, main kaise lag rahi hoon'
Geet was wearing a very pretty blue salwar suit and had done two plaits, she looked adorable.
 
Annie: ' yeh bhi koi puchne wali baat hai, as always you look very nice'
 
Geet: 'thank god, you're not like your kharus brother maan. Kitna dusht hai woh' 

Annie couldn't help but laugh; she had always seen this happening since they were very young geet and maan had very different personalities, however geet and Annie were like sisters, and Annie would take Geets side more than her own brother maans side for which maan called her 'chamchi' of geet.

Geet: 'you're laughing?, tang kar ke rakh diya hai usne mujhe aur tu hai hai ke hass rahi hai'

geet was super annoyed because of the previous fight she had with maan. What happened was geet had gone to maans room to ask him if we had any colouring pencils, and maan shouted at her for entering his room without knocking. Geet got angry because of his rudeness and started shouting back. Then maan called her 'moti' to which geet got even more irritated and went rushing to daadima to complain.

Annie: 'yaar, don't take his words to heart he doesn't mean to say all that stuff to you, anyways chal hum school kai liye late ho rahain hain, and you know Maan bhai, he doesn't like it when we're late'

Geet: 'haan haan, waise uss kharus ko kuch pasand hai bhi ya nahi'

Maan was getting annoyed as time went by, he hated it when he had to wait

Maan: 'god whats taking them so long, zuroor woh moti ready hone mein der kar rahi hogi'                                                                                                
 
Maan gets so frustrated that he is about to walk away when he sees the two coming

Maan: tum dono ne itna der kyun lagaya.. hmm ?'

Annie: 'woh bhai geet ready ho rahi thi' geet just gives her a glare to be quiet

Maan: 'ohh to mera shaq sahi tha, iss moti ne hi itna late karvaya'

Geet: 'oh hello, moti kis ko kaha'

Maan: 'ab koi aur moti toh dikh nahi rahi hai, toh tum ko hi kaha hoga'

Geet: 'uff dusht dhanav'

Maan: kya kaha tumne

Annie:' please ab aap dono phir se mat shuru ho jaaye... geet tu mere saath chal bhai ko chor tu toh jaanti hai na kitne moody hai'

Maan: 'Whatever.'                                                                                                                                          Maan gets annoyed and starts walking ahead

Geet: 'Annie kya main sach mein moti hoon'

Maan:'toh kya main jhoot bol raha hoon'   Maan shouted from in front smirking to himself

Geet: yaar how can he hear that?' geet whispers this time.

Annie: 'I really don't know'

Geet and Annie reach school and meet their best friend Pinky who is as just as bubbly as they are. Pinky, Annie and Geet had been friends since they began school. They knew everything about one another and they were all loyal to each other. They would talk for hours to each other on the phone until their parents came in and told them to sleep. No one could ever separate them.

Pinky: hi guys, how are you?

Annie: 'I'm fine'

Geet doesn't reply as she is in a bad mood because of maan.

Pinky notices that she looks irritated so she asks her what is wrong

Pinky: 'arre kya hua geet, tu itni irritated kyun lag rahi hai?'

Annie: 'yaar tu toh jaanti hi hai maan bahi aur geet to hamesha jaghra karte rehte hain, to bus aaj bhi kiya'

Pinky: 'ohh ho yaar geet tum dono hamesha larthe kyun ho'

Geet: 'dekh pinky mera mood phele se bohot kharab hai, aur mat kar'. Saying this Geet walks off in a strop

The bell goes and everyone goes to their first lesson.

Maan began walking to class when he heard Arjun calling him. Arjun was one of the few close friends Maan had. Due to Maan's attitude, many people stayed away from him, afraid of doing the wrong things. The look he would give them was enough to make them steer well away from him. However, Arjun was tougher than that and managed to become Maan's friend as Maan liked the way he was able to stand up for himself.

Arjun: 'Maan, dude wait up'

 
Maan: 'Jaldi karo, waise bhi late ho rahai hai' anger was clearly visible in his voice
 
Arjun: 'Kya hua, tum itna moody kyun lag rahi?
 
Maan: uss Geet ne mujhe tang kar ke rakhe diya hai yaar
 
Arjun: Tum ne phir laraaye ki uske saath, why don't you just stay civil'
 
Maan: 'Mujhe koi baat nai karni hai uske barre mein, ab jaldi karo class shuri ho gayi hai'

 

As soon as Maan walked in, the class fell silent including the teacher. Maan liked the way his presence changed the way how people acted in front of him. It made him feel important. No one could ever damage his reputation. If there was anyone who would actually talk back to him, it was geet, geet was only person who could actually fight back and maan couldn't stand it

He was the top scorer in all his exams throughout the school. He didn't have time to be messing around with people younger than him. All he cared about was him and his reputation. Nothing else.

 Next part:Part 3
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hope you guys like !😉

Edited by XMaanxGeetX - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: tere_liye_10

nicee

Glad you like it 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: Shalve

nice update...

Thanxs glad you like it 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
really nice part!!
Thanks for the PM..
Continue soon!