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FF M&G... Lambi Judaai... Thread 1 (Page 22)

rsroopali IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 3:35pm | IP Logged
wowww luved ittt
it was rocking n awesomeee
n yeahh maan n geet r best frnds  nwww

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XMaanxGeetX Senior Member

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 3:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by rsroopali

wowww luved ittt
it was rocking n awesomeee
n yeahh maan n geet r best frnds  nwww
Thanxs, glad you liked it Big smile
simi91 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 5:41pm | IP Logged
their friendship getting well
love when they were asking
one another what like & dislike
so cute
if i'm not wrong this past
& later on gonner separate
that what the tittle mean
sorry for inpatient
ur damn good writer my
love how the story progressing
thanks 4 pm
waiting next part

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butterfly.tanu IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 2:37am | IP Logged
awesome update...
love it...

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XMaanxGeetX Senior Member

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 10:02am | IP Logged

M&G' Lambi Judaai'Part 7



Geet: Kya matlab hai ,kyun? Of course I would care you're my friend and I look out for all my friends


Maan just adored her innocence and kindness; she was much different that he thought. In maan's mind there was this immature and silly little girl who only knew how to annoy people, he always wondered why so many people are fond of her, but now he knew why.


Maan: Tum sach main bohot alag ho sabse

Geet: That's a compliment right?

Maan: Yeah that was a compliment

Geet: Well then thank you. Geet said while flashing her million dollar smile at him.

Maan: Ab chalo, varna phir raasta bhool jaaingay

Geet: Yeah let's go

When they got there everyone was sat down near the tents having breakfast, Geet and Maan also joined them and had their breakfast. Maan sat next to Arjun and nearby were Geet, Pinky and Annie were sitting.


Maan: God, I am so hungry man, kal se kuch nahi khaya hai

Arjun: Yaar lekin tum dono gum kaise gai, aur who bhi together, what's going on hmm?


Geet eyed Maan as if to say 'I told you so' and Maan just rolled his eyes.


Geet: Nahi Arjun aisi koi baat nahi hai aur waise bhi maine kaise time guzara iss kharus ke saath woh to sirf main hi janti hoon.


Geet looked at maan and winked, Maan couldn't help but smile at her antics.


Maan: Uff tumne kaisa time guzara ya phir maine tumme kaise jhela yeh moti toh sach mein kitni annoying hai


Annie just looked at them in disbelief, thinking what went wrong.


Annie (self thought): Geet ne tho kaha tha ke dost bangai, then what is going on here, yaar mera toh sapna ab pura hona mushkil lag raha hai, kitne muskil se dono ko dosti karvayi thi maine, ab gayi bhains paani mein, uff


Annie elbowed Geet and told her that she wanted to talk to her.


Geet: Umm tum log baitho main aur Annie zarra haath saaf karke aathe hain

Annie: Haan we'll be right back

Pinky: Chalo main bhi chalti hoon

Annie & Geet: NOO

Pinky: Huh?

Geet: Hahaha, woh actually Annie koh mujhse koi private baat karni hai, tumme hum baad mein bataa denge, tum yahan betke in dono ko company do ok

Pinky: Ar..

Geet: Bus hum abhi aate hain


Geet took Annie aside to wash their hands.


Geet: Kya hua Annie, tu itni pareshan kyun hai?

Annie: Pareshan kaise na hoon, tum meri bhabhi kaise banogi ab

Geet: Kya?

Annie: Nahi nahi, pata nahin maine kya boli jaa rahi hoon, nahi mera matlab tha ke tum aur Maan bhai ka phirse arguments shuru hogaya.


Geet: Nahi yaar, woh toh hum acting kar rahe the, actually maine hi maan se kaha ke agar logon ko pata chal gaya ki hum ab friends bangaye achanack se, toh woh hazaar sawal poonche gein, aur tumme kaise lage ga agar maan ke bare mein koi ultha seedha baat karega. Mujhe toh bura lage ga

Annie: Arre toh yeh sab acting tha, toh matlab mera sapna abhi bhi poora ho sakta hai

Geet: Kya? Kaunsa sapna?

Annie: Haan' woh.. main' haan! Ke sab khush rahein aur sab kuch teekh rahe.

Geet: Yeh hai tumhara sapna? Geet looked very confused

Annie: Haan aur kya chaiye, bus sab kush hon toh main bhi khush

Geet: Arre wah! Annie tu toh bohot ache ache baatein karne lagi


Geet hugged her while Annie just gave a fake smile


Geet: Ab  chal, varna kahin Pinky naazraz na ho jaaye

Annie: Haan lekin hum Pinky ko kya bataayenge, kuch toh kehna parega na

Geet: Haan who toh hai, chalo chalke sochte hain


Geet and Annie go and join the others who are all getting ready to do some trekking.


Geet: Wow, hum trekking karne jaa rahe hain, yeh kab decide hua

Pinky: Jab tum dono gum hogaye the, tab

Geet: Ohh haan

Pinky: Anyways, tum aur Annie kaunsi baat karne gaye the

Annie: Haan' woh' hum..

Geet: Arre yaar itni kyun sharma rahi hai, actually iss ken a who shuru hogaye hain


Annie looked really confused, and so did Pinky.


Pinky: Kya? Woh' matlab?

Geet (whispers): Arre TOM

Annie & Pinky: What?... TOM?

Geet: Haan don't you know time of the month'

Pinky: Yaar seedha seedha bataa na

Geet: Uff, periods yaar, tum kitni dumb ho

Annie & Pinky: KYA?

Geet: Arre Annie iss me sharmane ki koi baat nahi, haina Pinky

Pinky (giving an uncomfortable smile): Haan' ofcourse


Just then the boys come


Maan: Kya baate chal rahe hain.

Arjun: Haan yar tum log itne chilaa kyun rahe ho

Geet, Annie & Pinky: KUCH NAHI

Maan: Oookaaay, tum larkiyan bhi na ajeeb hi ho

Geet: Haan, haan aur tum larke bhi koi kam nahi hain

Arjun: Anyways guys, we're going trekking so we'll have to be in groups

Maan: So we were thinking that we group up together

Annie: Yah, that's a good idea, hum sab saath mein honge toh mazza aayega

Pinky: Haan

Geet: Yeah whatever


Geet was purposely showing no interest because she didn't want to give away that she and Maan are friends now.


Maan and Geet look at each other and smile, then as soon as the others come they put their blank mask on.


Arjun: But we need to be in a group of 6, and there are only five of us

Pinky: Let's ask Adi to join us, he has no one else


Adi was a guy that was in there class. He was and nerdy and quiet, causing him to get picked on most of the time. Pinky felt sorry for him as he had no friends.


Pinky: Hey, Adi come and join us



Just then the teacher informed them that they have to trek together in pairs which have to be one boy and a girl. Then when they meet up for something to eat, they go back to their group of 6.


Annie: Great, it has to be boy girl doesn't it

Pinky: I'll go with Adi

Arjun: I'll go with Annie

Annie: Fine, whatever

Maan: Looks like I will have to be with Geet then

Geet: Whatever, I don't care

Pinky: Come on then guys, let's go

Next Part: Part 8

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Edited by XMaanxGeetX - 05 June 2011 at 9:37am

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 10:05am | IP Logged

Yaaayy first post!!

Woohoo lol

Anyway awesome update...but just to be clear...are they 12 years old??? cos sometimes it seems like their older and other times it doesnt :/

Anyway im looking forward to this trekking...and i like how you have the 3 jodis lol

Cant wait for more!! 

Edited by cue1 - 01 June 2011 at 10:09am

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 10:18am | IP Logged
wow maan & geet putting
up black mask so nobody get
doubt them there friendsLOLLOL
anie funny worried about her
dream geet to be her bhabhi
thanks 4 pm


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