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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 6:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rsroopali

wow awesomeee
luved ittt
super cool
maan n geet ended up as frnds wowww
n plz pm me
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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 6:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shah10 it.
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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 6:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -dia-

so sweet ...lovely
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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 6:22am | IP Logged
Thank you for all the lovely comments you have given us. We really appreciate the encouragement you have given us so far and we are glad you are enjoying the ff as much as we are Hug.Part 6 will be added later today Big smile Love from Saba and Hiraa xxx HeartStar

Edited by XMaanxGeetX - 31 May 2011 at 6:21am
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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 8:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Iqbal Neha1

great part
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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 10:03am | IP Logged

M&G... Lambi Judaai... Part 6


Geet was shocked, amazed, surprised. Nothing could sum up her emotions.


Geet (self-thought): main kahin sapna toh nahi dekh rahi, Maan, giving me, I mean ME a compliment? I cannot believe it, kuch toh hua hai.

Maan himself was also shocked at what he had said.

Maan (self-thought): Did I just say something nice, to Geet, I mean GEET? Of all people, I give Geet a compliment, mujhe kya ho raha hai?

They were both so lost in their own thoughts, that when Geet heard a noise coming from a nearby tree, she jumped and grabbed onto Maan's arm without thinking.


Geet: What was that?

Maan: I think it was just an owl, could you let go of my arm it's starting to hurt

Geet: Ohh sorry, I just got scared, I hate being out in the dark. All the animals around makes me get frightened

Maan: Girls always get scared when they hear any kind of noise.

Geet: I bet guys get scared as well

Maan: No they don't, guys can handle this things

Geet: Ohh really, we'll have to see then


After saying that, Geet went quiet. Maan thought nothing of what she had said, which made Geet come up with an idea to get her own back on him.


Geet: Babaji! Wahan dekho saanp, Maan kuch karo!

Maan: Where, quick we have to run, let's get out of here. Hurry, Geet!


Geet burst out laughing. Her plan had worked.


Geet: Calm down, I was only joking

Maan: What?! Don't do that again, do you understand? You scared me

Geet: You got scared? I thought guys don't get scared. I thought guys could handle these things

Maan: Well... they can... sometimes

Geet: At least we have one thing in common then

Maan: Yeah


The rain began to ease and stars started to appear, twinkling bright in the sky.


Maan: So, seeing as we have to spend the night here, we might as well get to know more about each other

Geet: Yeah, I suppose we should. We are always too busy fighting normally.

Maan: That's true


With that, they began asking each other about their likes and dislikes. They talked for hours finding out so much about each other. Maan found out that Geet had moved from to Delhi from Hoshiarpur and that she wanted to become an artist and have her own gallery. Geet found out that Maan wanted to become a successful businessman and hoped to visit London. Just then, the clouds began moving apart and the sun began to rise.



Geet: Arre dekho, bato hi bato mein time ka kuch pata hi nahin chala

Maan: Yeah, I can't believe its morning already

Geet: We should start to find our way back

Maan: Yeah, come on let's go


They began walking, trying to remember where they came from. They started to walk north hoping to find the site at where they were staying. After 30 minutes of walking, Geet noticed something.


Geet: I swear we have been here before; this is where we started from.

Maan: No, it isn't, I think we are nearly there we just need to go west

Geet: No, look this is the tree we were sitting under. I think we should go south

Maan: No, west

Geet: South

Maan: West

Geet: South

Maan: I know, why don't we just toss a coin otherwise we are never going to decide

Geet: Okay then, I choose heads


Maan flipped the coin in the air and then caught it


Geet: Yes its heads, come on we are going south

Maan: But, I still think we should go west

Geet: No buts come on let's go

Maan: Okay, then


They began walking south and continued walking that way for about 20 minutes until Geet got frustrated.


Geet: This is no use, we are never going to get back

Maan: I told you we should have gone west, but no you decided to go south instead

Geet: What are we going to do now? Babaji, raksha karna

Maan: Tum fiqar mat karo, hum koi na koi raasta doondh legein


Just then, they heard some footsteps coming towards them.


Annie: Geet, Geet are you there?

Pinky: Where are you Geet?

Arjun: Maan, dude where have you gone?

Geet: Thank God for that, hey guys we are over here

Pinky: There you are we having been looking all over for you

Arjun: What happened to you last night, where did you go?

Maan: We got lost

Annie: Come on let's go, they are about to the lay out breakfast. You both must be hungry

Maan and Geet: Yeah

Pinky: So, what did you get up to last night?


Maan and Geet both looked at each other.


Geet: Well...

Maan: Not much'


Geet and Maan both burst out laughing and the rest just stood there confused.


Annie: What's so funny? Arre kuch toh bolo                                                   

Geet: Nothing, it's just that Maan got scared so you know...

Maan: What? Main nahin tum dar rahi thi.

Geet: Ohh really, toh snake ka naam sunke kaun bagha? Hmm?


Annie: Ok ok stop fighting, tum do phirse shuru hogai, tum dono ka kuch nahin ho sakta, come one guys lets go, in dono ko larne do.


Everyone started walking ahead, Geet was about to walk ahead' when someone grabbed her from the back.

Geet was so scared and was about to scream but Maan put his hand over her mouth.


Maan: Chup, bilkul chup

Geet: Ummm, ummm

Maan: Kya? Teekh se bolo na

Geet: Mmm umm

Maan realized that she couldn't speak because he had his hand over her mouth, when removed it Geet was furious.


Geet: Uff, mujhe marne ka irrada hai kya?

Maan: Sorry, I forgot

Geet: Ab jaldi batao ke mujhe kyun keencha

Maan: You know I should be the one being angry, why did you have to tell them I was scared hmm? Why do you like to go against me all the time?

Geet: Toh main kya karti bataa deti ke hum dono ki itni acchi dosti hogai, and now we're the best of friends

Maan: Haan, I don't see why not

Geet: So that everyone makes a joke out of you, agar dusre logon ko pata chal gaya ki tum mere saath dost ho, toh log samjhenge ke hamare beech main kuch aur hai. I know you have a reputation and I don't want you to lose it because of me

Maan was dumb founded; he never knew Geet would care about him so much. He had so much to learn about her.

Maan: But you know, no one will dare to speak in front of me like that

Geet: Haan par baatein toh karengein na, and I would hate to hear people gossiping about you behind you back.

Maan: Kyun? Why do you care?

Next Part: Part 7
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Edited by XMaanxGeetX - 01 June 2011 at 10:11am

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 10:15am | IP Logged
love the part ...wonderful!!!

Their friendship is budding.

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Originally posted by -dia-

love the part ...wonderful!!!

Their friendship is budding.
Thanxs for the comment! Glad you liked it Big smile

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