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Hey guys,
Like the idea, Maaneet childhood companions.
Portraying a 12 year moody & like always innocent Geet
Got a gilmpse of Maan's protective nature towards Annie & Geet, lets see what happens with Geet's friendship offer
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interesting updates...eager to know if maan will b friends with geet...i hv sent buddy req can u pl add me to ur pm list thankspl cont soon
M&G... Lambi Judaai... Part 5
Geet woke up early and ran over to open her curtains. The sun was shining and birds were tweeting and Geet felt happy for two reasons. The first reason was that after so much persuading, Maan finally agreed to be friends. And the second reason was that today, Geet was going on a school camping trip.
(FLASH BACK)
Geet was so scared to hear what Maan would say, she was just hoping he would say yes and not shout at her. Maan was actually quite shocked by the sudden offer; he didn't know what to say.
Maan (self-thought): Yaar isse kya hogya achanak se, dosti ka haath badha rahi hai, aur woh bhi mujhse, kya kahoon, arre kahan fasaa diya
Geet was looking at him with high hopes, which made Maan more confused to what he should say.
Maan (self- thought): If I say no, the poor girl will be heart broken, wait what did I say 'poor' and Geet. Oh God what shall I say
Geet understood that Maan wouldn't want to be her friend so she just put head down dejected.
Geet: Main samajh sakti hoon, tum mujhe jaise pagal se kyun dosti karna chaaoge, main bhi pagal thi jo eik minute ke liye umeed kar baithi
At that moment Geet did something that neither would expect, Geet had tear in her eyes, she was actually crying for the first time. Geet was the kind of girl who never cried in front of anyone, especially Maan.
Maan was taken aback by the tears in Geet's eyes; he had never in his lifetime seen Geet crying. For the first time he felt he had done something really bad and he had to sort it out.
Maan: Geet please rona mat, tum pe aansoo suit nahi karte, look I didn't mean to hurt you
Maan: Geet wipe your tears and listen to me' maine kuch kaha tumse ke tum rone lag gai, I haven't even told you yet if I want to be your friend or not why are you assuming things?
Geet: It obvious you don't want to be my friend, other wise you wouldn't take so long to answer
Maan: Actually I was a bit taken aback by your sudden offer that's why
Geet: Ohh so what have you thought then. Mujhse doti karoge. Geet brought her hand forward for a hand shake
Maan had no choice but to say yes, so he brought his hand forward to and shook her hand.
Maan: Friends
They both smiled at each other
Maan: Lekin eik condition pe
Geet: Condition? Kya?
Maan: You have to promise that you won't argue with me for no reason
Geet couldn't help but laugh
Geet: Okay I promise, but then you have to promise not to shout at me
Maan (smiled): Okay promise
Geet: Thank god that's sorted, mujhe toh laga ke hum zindagi bhar larte rahenge
Maan: Yeah, lagta toh aisa hi tha
Geet: Waise eik baat phoochu, gussa toh nahi hoge na
Maan: Nahi...phoocho
Geet: Tumne mere liye uss larke ko kyun maara, I thought you hated me
Maan: Geet I never hated you, It's just you always do things which I don't like, I mean we're completely opposite
Geet: Haan woh toh hai no wonder we never get along. Par tumne mera sawaal ka jawaab nahi diya tumne mere liye uss larke ko kyun maara
Maan: Kyunki woh mera farz tha, jaise main Annie ko leke protective hoon waise hi tumme leke bhi protective hoon. Samjhi?
Geet: Toh kya tum mujhe eik behen samajhte ho.
Geet was terribly confused and surprised that Maan considers her as a sister. Maan couldn't help but smile at her innocence, and ofcourse he never thought that.
Maan: Nahi mera matlab yeh tha ke tumhara koi badha bhai nahi hai who could look out for you, but that doesn't mean I consider you as my sister. Don't worry main tumhe raakhi bandnai ke liye nahi kahoon ga
Geet: Uff thank god, mujhe toh eik minute ke liye laga ke tum mujhse sach mein raakhi bandnai ke liye kaho ge
Both looked at each other for a moment, and then burst out laughing.
Geet: Acha eik aur baat phoochni thi
Maan: Ab kya hua?
Geet: Kya main sach mein moti hoon. Geet said whilst making a baby face
Maan couldn't resist the temptations of pulling her cheeks, she looked so cute whilst making that expression. So before he knew it he was pulling Geet's cheek.
Geet: Uff Maan, yeh kya kar rahe ho main bachi nahi hoon ke tum mere gaal kheech rahe ho
Maan: Aww but you look so cute when you make that face.
Geet: Maan! Mazaak karna bandh karo aur mujhe batao ke kya main sach mein moti hoon?
Maan: Nahi yaar, main toh ainvayi tumme tang karne keliye kehta tha
Geet: Kya? Aur maine sach mein dieting shuru kardiya, uff sahi kehthi thi main tumko, dushst dhanav
Maan (laughing): Kya? Tumne sach mein dieting shuru kardiya tum bilkul pagal ho, main jo kahoon tum sach man leti ho
Geet: Haan haan hass lo, tumme to bohot funny lag raha hoga
Maan: Ok ok sorry, aur ab phirse larna shuru mat kardena, abhi abhi to dosti ki hai humne
Geet: Haan woh toh hain, anyways main chalti maa ne kahata ke jaldi aana aur maine toh kitna time laga diya
Maan: Haan yaar tum jao isse phele maa gusse se laal ho jaaye
Geet: Uss gusse ko thanda karne keliye mere paas eik bohot badhi kush khabri hai
Maan: Kaunse?
Geet: Tumhari aur meri dosti! Maa kitni khush hongi sunn ke
Maan: Haan haan, puri duniya ko bataa ao ke Maan Singh Khurana aur Geet Handa ne dosti karli
Geet: Haan acha idea hai, main papa ko kehke radio pe telecast karvati hoon. Ok bye
Before Maan can say anything Geet leaves.
Maan: Uff main mazaak kar raha tha! Geet! I swear yeh ladki mujhe pagal kardegi
(FLASH BACK ENDS)
Rano: Arre Geet, tum itne early kyun uti?
Geet: Maa, aaj mere school trip, remember?
Rano: Oh haan, chalo phir tum jaldi se ready ho jao phir nashta karlo
Geet: Aacha Maa, me abhi aathi hoon
Geet quickly got dressed and raced down the stairs. Rano and Mohinder were waiting for her at the table. Geet quickly began eating.
Mohinder: Beta tumne, saab kuch pack karliya na?
Geet: Jee, Papa
Rano: Make sure you remember to phone us when you arrive
Geet: Aacha Maa
Geet gave her Mum and Dad a big hug and left to meet Annie.
Mohinder: Take care of yourself
Geet: Bye, love you
Annie was already waiting when Geet arrived.
Annie: Arre jaldi karo, waisse Pinky se bhi milna hai. Maan bhai aaj Arjun ki saat jaa rahe hain
Geet: I'm soo excited; we haven't been on a good trip for ages
Annie: I know it's been so long, so what happened yesterday between you and Maan bhai
Geet: Well, Maan finally agreed to be friends
Annie: Sach, wow that is great, now there won't be so many fights.
Annie was over the moon, her dream for Geet to become her bhabi was coming closer.
Geet: Hopefully
Meanwhile, Maan was walking to the school with Arjun.
Arjun: This should be a good trip, away from family for 3 days
Maan: Yeah
Geet and Annie arrived at the school and met Pinky who was already waiting for them by the coach.
Pinky: Where have you been? I have been waiting for ages, quick we need to make sure we get the good seats before they are taken
Geet, Pinky and Annie got onto the coach and sat in their seats. They were all excited as each other. It was the first time they were going on a trip away from their family for 3 days. Just then, Maan and Arjun arrived and sat in their seats.
Annie whispered to Geet.
Annie: Trust the boys to come late.Geet giggled
Just then the doors of the bus closed and they set of for their journey. They were going Manali, they had heard Manali was a very beautiful place, and it was December so it would be snowing. They were all really excited.
After 2 hours, they finally arrived and everyone began to get their belongings.
Pinky: Wow, look at this place, it is beautiful
Annie: This is going to be so much fun. I can't wait
Geet: I know, you guys go ahead I'll catch you up. I just need to ring my mum and tell her that we have arrived.
Pinky: Okay, see you soon
In the mean time, Arjun and Maan were also getting of the coach.
Arjun: Doesn't this place look cool, surrounded by woods?
Maan: Yeah, hey I just need to tell Daadi that I have arrived, I'll meet you later.
Arjun, Okay, see you dude
Geet was walking around with her phone, trying to get signal.
Geet (self-thought): God, how am I meant to tell Maa, that I have arrived? Woh kitni pareshan ho rahi hongi
Maan was also not having any luck.
Maan (self-thought): Daadi, is going to kill me if I don't tell her that I have arrived.
Maan continued to walk around aimlessly with his phone in the air, when he bumped into Geet.
Geet got scared when she realised it was Maan she bumped into, afraid he was going to get angry.
Geet: Ohh, sorry I didn't see you
Maan: No, it's my fault; I wasn't looking where I was going. Are you trying to get signal as well?
Geet was shocked. For the first time, Maan had actually apologised to her. She couldn't believe it.
Geet (self-thought): Did he just say sorry? I'm amazed. Maybe Annie was right, maybe there will be less fights. Who knows.
Geet: Yeah, I am trying to get signal too
Maan: I don't think we can over here
Geet: Oh no, how am I meant to tell Maa that I have arrived?
Maan: Don't worry I'm sure the school will contact them
Geet: Yeah, I suppose
At that moment, Geet began walking off when she realised she had no clue as to where she was going. She turned around and started walking the other way, but couldn't recognise that side either. She couldn't even call Annie or Pinky, as there was no signal. She started to panic. Maan was lost as well. He too had forgotten where he was and didn't even know how to get back.
Geet: Maan, I'm lost, how am I meant to get back?
Maan: I don't really know either
Geet: What am I going to do, I can't call anyone and its starting to get dark as well. Babaji, help me please
Maan: Geet, don't worry you're not on your own. We will just have to wait until someone comes looking for us.
Just as Maan said that, the clouds in the sky began moving closer together. Thunder started to rattle and balls of rain started pouring.
Geet: Oh, no, my clothes! Why is this happening?!
Maan: Quick come under this big tree
Geet: Uuggh, there's insects and bugs here. Aaah, there's a spiders as well! Babaji, please save me
Maan: Stop panicking, we have to stay under here until the rain stops, or you could walk in the rain if you want?
Geet: Nooo, I'll stay here thank you
Maan: This is fun isn't it?
Geet: What a way to start the trip
Maan: Yeah
Geet: You know this is like the first time we have actually spoken to each other without fighting
Maan: Yeah it is actually
Geet: I wonder where Pinky and Annie think I am
Maan: Same with Arjun, they are obviously not worrying about us
Geet: Yeah, otherwise they would have come here by now
Maan: You know what...
Geet: What?
Maan: You are actually not that bad
Glad you like it Fatima πThis content was originally posted by: pickachuLoveee the part!!!
Maneet r friends!!Continue soonnn.Thanxx for the pm.Fatima
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