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Posted: 12 years ago
M&G... Lambi Judaai... Pt 1
 
'Daadi!' A girl in a pink salwar suit came running in.
'Mamma!' A young boy came running behind
'Kya hua?' said a elegant elderly lady
'Why are you two shouting?' A pretty woman in her 30s said
Maan: 'Rano mamma, Geet mujhe tang kar rahi hai.'
Geet: 'Daadi, yeh jhoot bol raha hai, phele isne shuru kya.'
Rano: 'Geet, Maan ko tang karna band karo.'
Maan: 'Dekha Mamma mere side lehrahi hai.'
Maan stuck his tongue out at Geet... Geet made an annoyed face and complained to Daadi.
Geet: 'Daadi, aap toh mere side loh gi naa.'
Daadi: 'Geet, tum iss moody kai baate me mat ao, main hoon na.'
Geet came rushing over to Daadi, and hugged her tight, this time she stuck her tongue out at Maan.
Maan: 'Daadi, aap iss jhooti ki baat sun rahe hain.'
Rano: 'Tum log kyun hamesha larthe rehte ho.'
Maan: 'Mamma, mujhe kyun keh rahi ho, Geet ko samjhaye.'
Geet: 'Maine kya kiya.'
She stomped her feet and went off to her room.
Maan: 'Daadi, main bhi gahr jaa raha hoon, but please tell this stupid girl to stay away from me.'
Rano: 'Uff, agar aisa raha, toh hum Priya ki last wish kaise poori karein ge.'
Daadi: 'Baache hain abhi, don't worry.'
 
Geet lay on her bed, staring at the sky. 'Woh apne aap ko samajhta kya hain, mujhe moti kehta hai. Uff, babaji. Has he seen himself, all moody and arrogant. Why doesn't he just take a chill pill for once. Dusht Dhanav
 
Maan returned home in an angry mood.
Maan: 'Nakul, where are you? Bring me some food now, I'm hungry!'
Nakul: Yyyesss, chote saab
Maan went to his room and lay on his bed. 'God, that girl annoys me so much! Whenever she speaks her voice is so irritating. How am I meant to put up with a stupid girl like that.'
 
next part: Part 2
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Edited by XMaanxGeetX - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
great part
sounds really intresting cant wait 2 read da next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

great part

sounds really intresting cant wait 2 read da next part

Thanks.Glad you like you like it 😃