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FF(MANEET): DIL MIL GAYE Thrd1 upd prt 21 pg 141) (Page 98)

piya- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 24 June 2011 at 12:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by luv_GurTi

jus loving the maan n geet track..
n omg the precap.. plz plz plz update soon!!! cnt wait 2 read it n will geet confess in the nxt update?? cnt wait.. update soon!!

Thanks dear for such a sweet comment…

regarding geet's confession u will hv to wait n watch

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piya- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 24 June 2011 at 12:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tellyme

Wow superb!!!!!!
Great going...ClapClapClap
sorry I was late for Part 15

Thanks anu

Sorry bolne ki koi zarurat nahi hai dear… u commented that's enough for me

piya- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 24 June 2011 at 12:32am | IP Logged
sorry guys right now i m not able to reply individually to all d comments  bt i promise i will reply to each of of u later on... right now first let me update d next part
love - piya
piya- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 24 June 2011 at 1:47am | IP Logged
Banner: Shivangi (CIDManeetNaksh) & Sthuthi
Hello frnds. I have tried my level best to make this rain sequence special and I really hope u will enjoy this part. Guys I really want to know ur views regarding today's update this is really very imp for me. This is a sincere request to all d silent readers n d ones who just press d like button pls frnds atleast aaj ke update pe comment zaroor karna'

And all my dear frnds who always appreciate me with their lovely comments I hope aaj bhi aapke comments padne ko mile. I really need to know whether I hv lived upto ur expectations or not and if d answer is no then I won't plan such sequences in d future updates so that apke expectations tute nahi.

But believe me guys I was actually listening to this song n number of times just to get the feelings of d song right. Mayb I am not good as d cvs but I have really tried to make this rain sequence romanticSo pls whatever u feel abt today's update good or bad pls do comment

Love ' piya

Geet: ( self talk)Ye scooty rukh kyun nahi rahi hai

Maan: Geet  ye kaisa shortcut hain pechle 3 ghanto se tum yaha waha mujhe gumaye ja rahi ho' aakhir tum batati kyun nahi ke humhe jaana kaha hai?

Geet: Maan ye shortcut hi hai' tum phikar mat karo main tumhe sahi jagah lekar jaa rahi hoon

Maan: Geet jald hi raat honewali hai aunty fikar kar rahi hogi

Geet: Maan mumma tho mausi k yaha gayi hai' ab wo direct kal shaam ko hi aayengi

Maan: Geet wais eek baat tho hai adi ne tumhari scooty ka kaam badi acche tareke se karwaya hai dekho ek baar bhi rukhi nahi

Geet: ( thinking) Issliye main sochu ke aaj meri scooty rukh kyun nahi rahi' Adi bhi na kya zarurat thi scooty ko repair karne ki

Maan: Geet lagta hain ke bearish honewali hai chalo ghar chalte hain

Geet: (suddenly stops her bike)

Maan: Kya hua geet ye kaha rokh diya

Geet: Maan maine kuch nahi kiya bike khud b khud rukh gayi

Maan: Ok let me see what happened

Geet: (immediately removes the key n places it in her purse) nahi maan ab iska kuch nahi ho sakta

Maan: geet  mujhe ek baar tho dekh lene do

Geet: Maan this is my scooty aur mujhe iske baare mein tumse zyaada pata hain'

Maan: But...

Just then it starts raining

Maan runs and takes shelter beneath a tree

Geet : Maan tum waha kyun chale gaye... yaha aao

Maan: Geet mujhe beemar girne ka koi shauk nahi hai

Geet: ofho tumna bilkul bhi enjoy nahi karsakte jaante ho pehli bearish mein bheegne ka maaza hi kuch aur hota hai. Tum wahi baitho mujhe tho bearish mein bheegna hai.

Song starts

Hmm' hmm' ye ye ye'.hmm'hmm' aa aa'.

Geet is enjoying the rain

Music starts

Maan is admiring geet. He is completely bowled by her innocence and charm.

Maan starts walking towards geet. Today he doesn't wish to control his emotions

Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara

(Maan places his hand on geet's stomach . Geet didn't expect maan to b this close and hence she is somewhat surprised)

Hmm'hmm' hmm' hmm' la la la la la la'

Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara

( Maan slowly opens geet's  hair )

Dheemi Si Dhadkan Ko Badne Do Zara

( geet turns to face maan she tries to say something but maan places his finger on her beautiful lips and doesn't allow her to speak)

Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye

( geet's heart beat starts increasing. She tries to go away from maan)

Hum'. Hum tum'.

(Maan holds geet's hand and doesn't allow her to go)

Tum'. Hum tum'..( maan again gets close to geet)

 Aankhon Mein Humko Utharne Do Zara

( This time geet starts responding and looks lovingly at maan)


Baahon Mein Humko Pighalne Do Zara

(She places her hand on maan's shoulder)


Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye

( maan caresses geet's face with full love geet starts blushing)

Hum'. Hum tum ( maan kisses geet's forehead)

Tum'. Hum tum'..( maan kisses geet's eyes) 

Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara'..

( maan looks passionately towards geet's lips . Geet immediately feels shy and moves away from maan)




 ( geet comes and stands besides a tree. Uski aakhen jhuki hui hain aur chehre pe ek bahut hi khoobsurat muskurahat hain.)


(Maan comes and touches her. Her heartbeat starts increasing. She turns and faces maan)

Salvatein Kahin Karwatein Kahin


( maan lifts her face and gently moves her hair from her face)


 Phel Jaaye Kajal Bhi Tera ( geet opens her eyes and maneet eyelock)

Nazron Mein Ho Guzar Tha Hua


(maan places a kiss on geet's cheek)

Khwabon Ka Koi Khafila(Geet caresses maan's face and maan kisses her palm)

Jismo Ko Ruho Ko Jale Do Zara

Sharmo Khaya Ko Machalne Do Zara (maan geet ko apne baho mein le letha hai)

  Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye

Hum'. Hum tum

Tum'. Hum tum...

Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do ZarA...Music

 Choolon Badan
( maan gently moves his hand on geet's back sending shivers throughout geet's body)

Magar Iss Tarah Jaisa Surila Saaz Ho ( Geet closes her eyes as she wanted to engrave each passing moment in her heart permanently)

  Andhere Chupe Tere Zulf Mein ( maan geet ke baalo ko ek taraf kar deta hai)


Kholo Ke Raat Azaad Ho (He kisses her collar bone)


Aanchal Ko Seene Se Dhalne Do Zara

Shabnam Ki Boondein Phisalne Do Zara


Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye



Hum'. Hum tum'.

 ( they hug each other)

Tum'. Hum tum'..

 ( they get lost in each other's embrace)



Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara( they break their hug)



Bahon Mein Humko Pighalne Do Zara


( they slowly start approaching each other)


 ( they cm more closer)



Hum'. Hum tum'.

 ( they r just few inches away from a kiss)

Tum'. Hum tum'..


( more closer geet closes her eyes)


Hum'. Hum tum'

( finally they sealed their distance with a beautiful kiss)



Geet wanted their first kiss to b special and here it was she felt that it wasn't raining but actually the entire universe was showering the most devine blessings on them


This thought itself made geet happier and the kiss deepened and became a more passionate one.


Precap: Maan( self talk) tum chahe lakh chupha lo geet lekin aak mujhe yakin ho gaya hai ke tum bhi mujhse utna hi pyar karti ho jitna ke main"


 Part 18 :pg 120

Edited by piya- - 09 July 2011 at 3:08am

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minnie_tweetie IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 24 June 2011 at 1:55am | IP Logged


wow...what a rocking update that was piya...was waiting for it desperately...hum tum song sequence was too good...!!
precap was too too gud.. so maan has come to know geet too loves him...
sahi jagah bike ruk hi gayi yar m mean rok di bike geet ne...!!
well now even m singing the song...hum tum...hum tum...!!Wink

continue soon yar...!!

Edited by silkyarora - 24 June 2011 at 2:08am

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kahkashansakina IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 June 2011 at 2:04am | IP Logged
so romantic
loved it

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maansee IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 June 2011 at 2:13am | IP Logged

Clap awesome maneet love them yaar

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