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FF(MANEET): DIL MIL GAYE Thrd1 upd prt 21 pg 141) (Page 92)

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Posted: 22 June 2011 at 2:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by palakchopra

pls update soon dear waitinggg
will b updating rght now dear

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Posted: 22 June 2011 at 2:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by piya-

Originally posted by CIDMaaneetNaksh

Wow...actuallly didn't fine my resd post...so making a new one...loved the Update to the core...Geet was actually teasing Maan...aww...lovely...reallly nice
thanks shivangi... i really love reading ur comments dearSmile
and I love reading yours...!!!!

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Posted: 22 June 2011 at 2:52am | IP Logged
 
Banner: Shivangi (CIDManeetNaksh) & Sthuti
 
Thanks 4 ur appreciation dear frnds. Here is d next part i hope u will like it. Do let me know ur views regarding d update as well as d precapWink
 
Love - Piya
 
 
PART 16
 

Geet: ye lo romeo tumhara mobile. Waise tumhare mobile ka ringer wakai mein achha hai.

Romeo: Dekha adi sir geet bhi maanti hai ke mere mobile ka ringer tune sabke hosh uda sakta hai.

Maan comes

Geet: Haan mere aur maan ke bhi hosh udd gaye the kyun maan?

Maan: Kis baat se geet?

Geet: Are wahi "bahar se koi andar na aa sakhe"

Everyone starts to sing "andar se koi bahar na jaa sake socho kabhie aisa ho tho kya ho socho kabhie aisa ho tho kya ho hum tum'.."

Maan was recollecting all d incidents that had occurred just few moments before' d way both of them got lost in d song' geet's proposal' which made him believe that yes he was d one made for geet'. n then how his dream just turned out to be a new segment of geet's show'

Everyone still singing " hum tum ek kamre mein bannd ho aur chabi kho jaaaye"

Maan coming out from his thoughts

Maan: Romeo abhi ke abhi iss ringer ko change karo

Romeo: Par kyun sir

Geet: Haan kyun maan itna romantic song hai' bhool gaye tum andar jab ye song baj raha tha'

Maan: (does not allow her to complete) Geet mujhe sab yaad hai.

Geet gives a naughty smile

Maan: aur aap sabhi log apna kaam kijiye aur romeo dubara mainiss office mein ye song nahi sunna chahta samjhe tum.

Romeo: Yes sir

Geet: ye kya bachpana hai maan tum kyun aisa'

Maan: Geet agar main galat nahi hoon tho tum mujhse kuch discuss karna chahti thi right agar tumhe romeo ke mobile ke baare mein discuss karna hai tho main tumhe batadu ke mere paas aur bhi important kaam hai' so can u pls excuse me.

Geet: achha baba galti ho gayi naaraz mat hona pls

Maan (smiles) Chalo batao tum kya kehna chahti ho

Geet: Yaha nahi

Maan: Yaha nahi tho phir kaha geet

Geet: (maan ka haath pakadkar) Tum chalo tho sahi sab pata chal jaayega

Maan: Lekin geet '

Geet: Chup maan bilkul chup main achhese jaanti hoon ke tumhari koi bhi meeting nahi hai aur haan kahe deti hoon tumhari ye nautanki mere saamne nahi chalnewali'

Maan: Ok madam batai jaana kaha hai?

Geet (happy) chalo

Outside khurana constructions

Maan proceeds towards his car

Geet: Maan ye tum waha kaha ja rahe ho?

Maan: Geet tumhine kaha na ke hum bahar ja rahe hai tho jaahir si baat hai ke hum chalkar nahi jaayenge issliye main apni car lene ja raha hoon

Geet: Haan maine tumse kaha ke hum bahar jaa rahe hai lekin maine tumse ye kab kaha ke hum tumhari car mein jaayenge

Maan: Tho kya hum chalkar jaa rahe hai

Geet: (looks up towards d sky) Hey babaji jab aap akal baat rahe the tho kuch mere maan ke hisse mein bhi de dete' dekhiye na kaisi baate kar rahe hai. Mumbai ki itni kadakti hui dhoop mein bhala koi jaanbhooj ke chalke jaayega kya.

Maan: Wahi toh main bhi tumhe samjhane ki koshish kar raha hoon geet chalo ab car mein bait jaao

Geet: Hello meri baat abhi puri nahi hui' maan hum naahi chalke ja rahe hai aur naahi tumhari car mein jaa rahe hum tho meri scooty mein baitkar jaa rahe hain

Maan: (shocked) What!!! Geet u must b joking hum dono tumhari uss khatara scooty mein bahar ja rahe hain' no way aur waise bhi main aa tak kabhi bhi kisi two wheeler par nahi baitha

Geet: (angry) Stop calling my scooty khatara' (thinking) tum jaante nahi ke meri scooty ne mujhe meri zindagi ki sabse badi khushi di hai

Maan: Geet kya soch rahi ho?

Geet: Main kuch bhi nahi sunna chahti maan hum dono scooty mein hi jaayenge

Maan: Geet mere car mein AC hain tumhe garmi ka bilkul bhi ehsaas nahi hoga

Geet: Maan AC ki artificial hawa mujhe nahi chahiye are kabhi toh nature ko enjoy karna seekho

Maan: Lekin..

Geet: Lekin vekin kuch nahi agar tumne meri baat nahi maani toh main tumse kabhi bhi baat nahi karungi

Maan: Tumhare saamne meri ek bhi nahi chalti geet' Thik hai chalo chalte hai

Maan sits behind geet

Geet: Are maan scooty mein aise thodi na baiththe hain

Maan: Aise nahi toh kaise

Geet: Maan mujhe baar baar break lagane ki aadat hai issliye agar tum thik tareke se nahi baithe toh tumhe takleef ho sakti hain

Maan: (tries to position himself properly) Haan ab thik hain

Geet: Ofho maantumhena sab kuch samjhana padta hai (places maan's hand on her waist)

Maan: Geet ye tum kya'

Geet: Maan tum pehli baar scooty pe baithe ho na toh bus mere instructions follow karo chalo mere aur nazdeek aao

Maan: Geet '

Geet: Tum aise nahi manoge (pulls him towards herself) Haan ab thik hain ab aise hi baithe rehna

Geet: (thinking) meri pyari scooty aaj bhi apni parampara kayam rakhna kisi aise jagah jaakar bannd pad jaana jaha ke mere aur maan k alawa aur koi bhi na ho' u know main maan k saath kuch pal akele bitana chahti hoon

Maan: Kya hua geet chale?

Geet: Haan chalo

Geet starts her bike and both of them leave

Maan: Geet tumne bataya nahi ke hum kaha ja rahe hai?

Geet: Tum bus baithe raho tumhe khud b khud pata chal jaayega

Maan: Geet lekin tum ye kaunse raste se ja rahi ho' yaha dur dur tak koi nazar nahi aa raha

Geet: Maan ye shortcut hain yaha se hum jaldi pouchenge

Geet: (thinking) Are meri bike bannd kyun nahi ho rahi hai? Pls yaar jaldi se rukh ja pls '

Meanwhile,

Meera's house

Meera is heartbroken and is constantly crying

Pari: Kya hua Meera? Yash ke baare mein soch rahi ho na?

Meera doesn't reply

Pari: Yaad hai meera maine tumse kaha tha ke tumhare ke jhooth se kahi baat aur na bigad jaaye' dekha wahi hua na

Meera: Lekin Pari yash ne ek baar bhi meri baat nahi suni

Pari: Meera jis rishte ki neev hi jhooth par thiki hui ho wo rishta zyaada der tak nahi sahi salamat nahi reh sakta

Pari : Tumne Yash ke saath jo kuch bhi kiya wo galat tha' Ab yaha rone se kuch bhi nahi hoga ho sake tho apni galti sudharne ki koshish karo

Meera: Main kuch samjhi nahi

Pari: Yash se jaakar mil kya pata shayad wo tujhe maaf kar de

Meera: Shayad tum thik keh rahi ho' main kal hi usse milne jaaungi' main apne pyar ko itne aasani se nahi kho sakti

Precap: Lamho ki guzarish hai ye paas aa jaaye hum' hum tum (rain sequence of maneet)Embarrassed

 

Awaiting ur precious commentsTongue

part 17: page 107
 


Edited by piya- - 09 July 2011 at 3:05am

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Posted: 22 June 2011 at 2:59am | IP Logged

wow partyParty time finally Dancingi manage to be first on your post.Smile... i m loving it...Big smile

lovely part.Clap... geet maan ko itna kyo tarsa rahi hai...Confused
 
 
and hai Blushing waiting for precap withDay Dreaming


Edited by maansee - 22 June 2011 at 3:13am

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Posted: 22 June 2011 at 3:19am | IP Logged
AWESOME.PRECAPS SEEMS INTRESTING

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Posted: 22 June 2011 at 3:20am | IP Logged
Awesome update
loved scooty ride 
loved it 
pls cont

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Posted: 22 June 2011 at 3:26am | IP Logged
Wow...wonderful

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Awesome update

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