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FF(MANEET): DIL MIL GAYE Thrd1 upd prt 21 pg 141) (Page 75)

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Posted: 18 June 2011 at 2:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Klutszy_KaShian

Wow! I read the whole thing in one go!! Love it cometely! Do upd soon!
thanks dearSmile

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Banner: Shivangi (CIDManeetNaksh) & Sthuthi
 
 
Hello frnds here I am with the next part of my ff. Hope u will enjoy reading it. From next part onwards I will be introducing yash and meera track once again along with maneet track. Maneet ke scenes likte likhte main yash aur meera ke bare mein bhool hi gayi thi kya karu maneet ka jaadu hi kuch aisa hai. I hope to get your support and love and I promise meerayash ke wajah se maneet ke love story mein koi bhi farak nahi aayega I will try to put good romantic moments of maneet in my future updates but uske liye aap logo ko thoda sabra rakhna hoga. Do press the like button this makes me really happy but agar aap comment bhi karenge then that would make me happier and would act as a tonic that will help me to pen down d next part as soon as possible. Suggestions are most welcome.

Love- Piya

PART 14

Geet : Maan tum yaha meeting mein baithe ho aur waha tumhari girlfriend mujhe call karke ye keh rahi hai ke agar tum isi waqt usse milne ke liye nahi gaye to wo suicide kar legi.

Everyone shocked to hear what geet was telling

Adi: Maan sir aapne pehle kabhi bataya nahi ke aapki koi girlfriend bhi hai

Geet gives a satisfactory smile and thinks ab dekhna bacchu geet tumhara kya haal karti hai.

Maan: (angry) Adi'

Geet: Adi, Maan ne tumhe bhi nahi bataya ke uski ek girlfriend hai tum tho maan ke right hand ho na atleast tumhe tho batana chahiye tha

Adi: U r right geet' lagta hai aaj kal meri koi value hi nahi hai'

Maan: Adi ye drama bannd karo aur ye jaan lo ke meri koi girlfriend nahi hai.

Romeo: Ofho sir isme itna hishkichane ki kya baat hai ab accept kar bhi legiyena

Maan: Meri koi girlfriend nahi hai aur naahi kabhi future mein hogi

Geet: Kyun koi dostana type hai kya?

Adi: (starts laughing) Huh huh huh huh'.

Maan: Geet ye tum kya keh rahi ho aur tum aise kaise andar chali aayi pinky ne tumhe rokha nahi

Geet: Pinky kya,  tumhara pura staff janta hai ke main tumhari best friend hoon kisi ki bhi itni himmat nahi hai ke mujhe tumse milne se rokh sake' Samjhe tum

Maan had no answer to this.

Pandey: Waise manishaji ek baat tho hai, geetji ke samakshya aate hi maan sir puri tarah se asamarth aevam asahaya ho jaate hai

Manisha: (stands up) That's it, Adi sir iss office mein aapki koi value hai ke nahi main nahi jaanta magar aaj mujhe pura bharosa ho gayahai ke iss office mein meri value ek paise ki bhi nahi hai. U know koi mujhe kuch batata hi nahi har cheez mujhe pandeyji se samajni padti hai' abhiki hi baat le lo'kisi ne bhi mujhe  "samakysha" "asamarth and who was the third one o ya "asahaya" ke bare mein kuch bhi inform nahi kiya' I am so depressed u know

Romeo: Pandeyji aapse kitni baar kaha hai ke apni hindi dictionary manisha ke saamne mat khola kijiye' ab itna important discussion divert ho gaya na

Adi: Hum kuch discuss kar rahe the?

Romeo: Offcourse, Maan sir ki khufiya girlfriend' so geet tum kuch keh rahi thi..

Geet: Haan main keh rahi thi ke maan ki girlfriend mujhe call karke dhamki de rahi hai ke wo suicide kar legi

Tasha: Silly me. Geet tum mujhe ye batau ke maan sir ki girlfriend tumhe kyun call kar rahi hai usse toh maan sir ko call karna chahiye na?

Geet: Ab kya kare tasha maan ne us ladki ko ye keh diya hai ke aaj ek bahut important meeting hai jo ke der raat tak chalnewali hai aur iss meeting ko wo kisi bhi haalat mein chodkar nahi jaa sakte aur wo nahi chahta ke koi usse disturb kare ab aise haalat mein bechari kar bhi kya sakti hai kisina kisi ke through message tho pouchana tha na tho isiliye usne mujhe contact kiya

Adi: (laughing) Are geet yaha koi meeting veeting nahi ho rahi hai ye tho sab dikhawa hai

Maan: (getting angry) Adi'

Geet: Are Adi pe gussa kyun nikal rahe ho isse kehte hai kare koi aur bhare koi

Maan: Maine kya kiya hai geet

Geet: Are waah, Pyar tum karte ho uss bechari abla naari ko jhoote sapne tum dikhate ho aur mujhse pooch rahe ho ke maine kya kiya

Maan: Geet achha tho tumhare kehne ka matlab meri ek girlfriend hai right' tho zahir si baat hai uska koi naam tho hoga hi na?

Geet: Off course ye bhi koi puchhne ki baat hai

Maan (smiles) Haan tho batau uska naam kya hai?

Geet: Naam' wo' haan' uska  naam'.

Maan: Haan haan batau

Geet: Haan uska naam "khwab" hai

Manisha: Wow such a unique name na

Maan: "khwab"' kabhi kisi ladki ka naam tumne khwab suna hai' geet tumhari iss baat se hi pata chalta hai ke tum jhooth bol rahi ho

Geet: (getting irritated) Kyun agar aaj tak nahi suna toh aisa zaroori nahi hai k aage kabhi ye sunne ko na mile

Maan: Geet dekho main tumhari ye baat maanne ko katai hi taiyar nahi hoon' tum apni shararate bannd kardo koi bhi aisa naam rakhtha hai kya?

Geet: ye lo' tum tho aise keh rahe ho jaise ke uska naam maine rakha ho ab mujhe kya pata ke uske parents ne kya sochkar uska naam khwab rakha hai' naamkaran karte waqt uske parents mujhse salah lene ki liye nahi aaye the' samjhe tum

Maan: Haan ye baat Solana sach hai ke ye naam tumne abhi isi waqt rakha hai' main na tho koi khwab ko jaanta hoon aur naahi uske parents ko' ab maan bhi jaao geet tumhari chori pakdi gayi hai.

Geet: Pehli baat naa tho main koi chor hoon aur naa hi tum koi CID officer aur rahi baat naam kii tho main tumhe batadu India is a free country yaha har kisi ko pura haq hai ke woh apne manmutabik apne bachho ka naam rakh sakhe aur let me make myself clear right here ke jab humare bachhe honge naa tab main hi unka naam rakhungi tumhari ek bhi nahi chalnewali' haan (smiles satisfactorily)

Maan: Kya kaha tumne kiske bachhe?

Geet: (bites her lips) Mere kehne ka ye matlab hai ke jab meri shaadi hogi na tab apne bachho ka naam mein apne pasand se rakhungi apne pati ki ek bhi nahi sunungi

Maan: Lekin tumne tho abhi'

Geet: Lekin kya maan tum kya chahte ho ke saare parents apne bachho ka naam rakhne se pehle tumhari permission lene aaye  tho chalo government se kehkar ek bill pass kar dete hai jiske according har ek ma baap ko apne bachho ka naam rakhne se pehle shriman maan singh khurana ki permission leni hogi kyun thik hai na

Adi: Waise sir aisa bill paas karnwana itna aasan nahi hoga we need to plan some strategy'

Maan: Adi tum kuch samay tak chup rahoge' geet tum baat ko kaha se kaha tak le jaa rahi ho

Geet: Baat ko tho tum bada rahe ho main tho ek bechari nanhi si jaan kya mere chehre ko dekhkar ye lagta hai ke main kabhi bhi jhooth bol sakti hoon' haan bataiye (makes an innocent face)

Adi: Nahi geet tum tho bahut hi bholibhali ho' don't worry we all trust u

Maan: (thinking) Isse pehle ke geet ki nautanki koi aur mod le le mujhe apne staff ko bahar bhej dena chahiye

Maan: ek kaam kijiye aap log bahar jakar apna kaam samhaliye mujhe geet se akele mein kuch baat karni hai.

Romeo: Sir humhe bhi apni love story sunaiyena shayad aapki story se mujhe koi tip mil jaaye aur mere pyar ki naiya bhi kinare tak pouhach jaaye

Maan: Romeo tumhe tho main badme dekhtha hoon filhaal jaisekaha gaya hai waise karo samjhe tum

Romeo: Yes sir

Everyone leaves d room

Geet locks the room from inside.

Maan: Geet ye kya bachpana hai aur ye girlfriend ka kya jhol hai?

Geet: Huh' Girlfriend tumhari aur jhol main kar rahi hoon

Maan: Geet tum ye ache se jaanti ho ke meri koi girlfriend nahi hai aur agar hothi tho kya main ye baat tumse chupatha?

Geet: Achha tho iska matlab hai ke tum mujhse koi bhi baat nahi chupate kyun?

Maan: Haan

Geet: Tho batau kyaa  tumhari life mein aisi koi bhi ladki nahi hai jisse ke tum jaan se bhi zyada pyar karte ho?

Maan silent

Geet maan ki taraf badti hai but then suddenly she loses her balance and she lands up sitting on maan's lap.

 
 

Precap1: Hum tum ek kamre mein bannd ho aur romance ho jaayeWink

Percap2: Pari: " Meera kisi bhi rishte ki buniyaad agar jhooth ho tho wo rishta zyada der tak thik nahi sakta"

part 15 page 90
 


Edited by piya- - 09 July 2011 at 3:01am

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Wow ...

Nice part 

Update soon ...

THNX FOR THE PM 

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Geet ab maan ko bata bhi do apne dil ki baat kitna tadpayogi bechare maan aur humko.,nice prt.cont soon n ya me also forgot abt yash meera kya kare maaneet k alawa kuch sujhta hi nahi h.thnxs 4 pm

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