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FF(MANEET): DIL MIL GAYE Thrd1 upd prt 21 pg 141) (Page 59)

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PART 12
Savitri gently caresses geet's face. Geet's smile widens and d first word that she speaks is

Geet: Maan..

Savitri: (smiles) Geet hum aapke maan nahi aapki ma hai zara apni palko ke aachal ko kholkar humhe dekhiye tho sahi.

Geet: (immediately realizes that she was having a dream and opens her eyes) wo.. ma.. actually mera matlab tha ke... wo..

Savitri: Aapka matlab ye tha ke aapko aaj finally aapke price charming ke deedar ho hi gaye kyun?

Geet: (Blushing) Wo maan actually

Savitri: o tho haalat aise ho gaye hai ke abhi aap humhe ma ke bajaye maan kehkar bulayengi ( starts laughing)

Geet: doesn't know what to say. Wo apni palko ko jhukar baith jati hai

Savitri ( goes and gets a mirror) Bete zara apni nigahoon ko utakar apne chehre ko ek baar zara aaine mein dekh tho lijiye.. zara dekhiye tho sahi ke maan ke khayal se hi aapke chehre mein kya ruhani raunak cha gayi hai

Geet looks into d mirror. Her whole face was glowing. She just couldn't believe that maan could have such a dramatic effect on her. She smiles and hugs her mom

Savitri: Jaanti ho geet aapke iss faisle se humhe kitni khushi ho rahi hai. Humne toh aapki dil ki baat bahut pehle hi jaan li thi bus hum issi din ka intezaar kar rahe the ke kab aap apne asli jazbaato ko mehsus karengi.

Geet: Ma agar aap ye pehle hi jaanti thi ke main maan ko chahti hoon toh aapne mujhe ye bataya kyun nahi mujhe iss baat ka ehsaas kyun nahi dilaya?

Savitri: Aapke dil ki baat ka ehsaas humhe usi din ho gaya tha jab maan ko apne se dur jaata dekh aap apne aapko rok nahi payi aur fauran hi maan ke baho mein ja pauchi aur jab aapne muskurahate hue kaha ke " tumhe haq hai maan tumhe pura haq hai" tab toh hume yakeen ho gaya ke maan hi aapke sapno ke shehzade hai.

Geet: Ma aapne mere aur maan ke bhich ki saari baate sun li thi?

Savitri: Haan aur aapke liye maan ki aakhon mein nathamitnewale pyar ko bhi humne dekh liya tha.

Geet: Toh ma aapne mujhe usi din bataya kyun nahi?

Savitri: Bete zindagi ke kuch faisle insaan ko khud hi karne hote hai aur hum chahte the ke aap ko khud hi ye ehsaas ho jaaye agar hum aapko usi din batadete tab aaj aapko wo khushi nahi milti jo ke aapke chehre se saaf saaf jhalak rahi hai. aakarshan aur pyar in dono mein kya antar hai iss baat ko bhi aap kabhi bhi realize nahi kar paati.

Geet: O mumma I love u

Savitri: I love u too bete acchha abhi ye bataiye ke aapko apne true feelings ka realization kaise hua? Uss din aapne maan ko jo kuch bhi kaha usse humhe toh pura yakeen hai ke maan ne tho khud apne dil ki baat aapse nahi kahi hogi kyunki wo toh aapse itna pyar karte hai ke aapki khushi ke saamne unhe kuch aur nazar hi nahi aata.

Geet: Ma ye sab meri scooty ka kamaal hai.

Savitri: Ab ye scooty kaha se bhich mein aa gayi? Hum kuch samjhe nahi geet.

Geet: Wo hua yu ke meri scooty humesha ki tarah bannd pad gayi''she tells everything how maan gave her d lift' maan goes to collect d file'. She plays a cassette which had maan's confession in it'.. she gives a detailed explanation to her mom

Savitri: Yaad hai na bete humne aapse kaha tha ke thode faisle waqt par chod dene chahiye dekha aaj aapki kismat ne aapke saare uljano ko suljha diya. Achha toh ye bataiye ke aap apne izhare mohabbat maan ke saamne kab rakhengi?

Geet: (with a naughty smile) Ma bahut mushkil se maan ko pareshan karne ka mauka mila hai main thode itni aasani se usse jaane dungi.

Savitri: Geet humhe aapki aakhon mein shararat nazar aa rahi hai hum bus itna hi kahenge ke maan ko zyada pareshan mat kijiyega. Chaliye ab aap taiyar ho jaayiye hum aapke liye nashta ready karte hai.

Savitri goes.

Geet gets an idea and picks up her mobile and dials maan's number.

Maan: (still half asleep) Hello

Geet: (in a sweet and loving voice) Good morning maan

Maan (immediately opens his eyes): Geet.. tum.. itne subah.. kya hua.. sab thik toh hai na..

Geet: Maan maine tumhe good morning wish kiya aur tum ho ke uska reply karne ke badle mujhse ajeeb o garib sawal kiye jaa rahe ho. Tumhari tabiyat toh thik hai na kal raat neend toh achhi aayi thi na (smiles)

Maan: haan '. Kal raat (starts sweating on recollecting d incidents of d previous night)

Geet: kya hua maan tumhe paseena kyun aa raha hai?

Maan: (starts looking here and there) Geet tum kaha ho aur tumhe kaise pata chala ke'

Geet: Maan tumhe wakai mein paseena aa raha hai'(starts laughing)

Maan: (trying to control himself) Kal raat ki baat ko chodo Geet ye batau kuch kaam tha kya?

Geet: Haan bahut important kaam tha

Maan: Kya?

Geet: Tumse milna tha who bhi akele mein

Maan: (shocked) Kya? Akele mein. Nahi ek kaam karte hai yash ko bhi bulalethe hai

Geet: wo duffer yash pata nahi kuch dino ki chutti lekar kaha chala gaya hai pura kaam mujhe akele hi samalna padta hai. Khair tum mujhe ye batau ke tumhe mere saath akele mein dar lagta hai?

Maan: (unknowingly speaks)Haan'

Geet: Kya wakai mein

Maan: (starts cursing himself) Mera matlab hai nahi main kyun tumse darunga (more than geet he was trying to convince himself)

Geet: (giving a satisfactory smile) Achha toh chalo thodi der mein milte hain wo bhi akele mein koi aisi jagah jaha sirf hum dono ho.. kyun thik hai na

Maan: Nahi nahi bilkul bhi nahi

Geet: Maan abhi tho tum keh rahe the k yash ko bhi saath le lenge aur ab tum milne se mana kar rahe ho

Maan: Wo geet'actually ( trying to think) haan 'aaj office mein meri bahut important meeting hai

Geet: achha to pehle kyun nahi bataya?

Maan: (thinking bt does nt realize that he is actually speaking loud enough for geet to hear) abhi ek second pehle hi toh ye bahana dimag mein aaya hai toh iss so called meeting ke baare mein jab mujhse khud hi nahi pata tab main tumhe kaise batata

Geet: Kya kya kya' zara phir se ek baar kaho

Maan: Kuch nahi geet main aise hi badbadaraha tha

Geet: achha chalo ye batao ke tumhari ye meeting kab khatm hogi hum uske baad millenge

Maan: geet ye meeting der raat tak chalegi infact shayad kal subah tak bhi chal sakti hai' koi guarantee nahi hai kab khatm hogi. Acchha geet adi ka phone aa raha hai main tumse badme baat karta hoon. Bye and take care

Saying so maan disconnects the call.

Geet ka muh khula ka khula reh jaata hai

Geet: tumne mera call disconnect kiya ab toh tumhari khair nahi.

Door bell rings. Savitri opens the door

Savitri: Are adi bete aap

Adi takes her blessings

Savitri: Khush rahiye

On hearing adi's name geet comes out

Adi: Aunty main geet ki scooty lekar aaya tha ye rahe uske keys

Savitri: Aap andar toh aayiye hum aapke liye chai late hai.

Adi: hello geet kaisi ho?

Geet (smiles) perfectly fine adi waise aaj ki meeting ki taiyari ho gayi

Adi: (starts laughing just imagine adi sir laughing guys) Meeting kaunsi meeting geet aaj tho koi bhi meeting nahi hai.

Geet: kya.. lekin

Just then adi's mobile rings.

Adi: Good morning maan sir

Maan: good morning adi. Achha suno kuch bhi karke aaj ek meeting organize karo

Adi: meeting kaisi meeting sir?

Maan: wo main kuch nahi jaanta bus ek asli meeting lagni chahiye wo kulkarni's ka jo project hai na ussi par discussion le lete hai

Adi: lekin sir wo project ke saare details already worked out ho gaye hai.

Maan: main kuch nahi jaanta adi kuch bhi karke ek meeting organize karo aur ye meeting raat tak chale aisa kuch bandobast karo aur yaad rahe ye meeting asli lagni chahiye. Is that clear.

Adi (stammering) yes...s..s sir don't worry sir main puri koshish karunga ke ye meeting asli lage.

Call ends

Geet: kya hua adi?

Adi: pata nahi geet ye maan sir ko kya ho gaya hai kehte hai ek nakli meeting organize karo jo ke asli lage aur der raat tak chale' pata nahi unke dimag mein kya chal raha hai' job hi ho nuksaan tho mera hai na ab nakli meeting kaise organize karte hai iski padai maine ki hi nahi' aur upar se humara office staff kisi bhi kaam ka nahi absolutely no help. Khair aunty se kehna ke chai phir kabhi pee lunga ab jaakar ek nakli meeting organize karna hai. Ok bye geet

Geet: bye adi

Adi leaves.

Geet (self talk ): Achhaji toh ye baat hai. Ab dekhiye Mr. Maan singh Khurana ke ye geet ab kya karti hai.

Precap1: Geet " Maan tum yaha meeting mein baithe ho aur waha tumhari girlfriend mujhe call karke keh rahi hai ke agar tum usse milne ke liye nahi gaye to wo suicide kar legi"

Precap 2: Adi " Maan sir aapne kabhie bataya nahi ke aapki koi girlfriend bhi hai"

 PART 13 PAGE: 72

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Edited by piya- - 09 July 2011 at 2:57am

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The update was super-duper cool Piya... Thanks for the pm... Love geet-savitri sweet mother daughter convo... And the Maaneet convo was also very sweet with Maan stammering... And then adi spoling the entire bahana of Maan... You are very exquisite in the use of words which makes you ff very different..loved the way you write... The precap
Looks really hilarious...

And yes me first!!!!!!! Yippee... Balle Balle ... Shava Shava...

Sorry for editing late

Shivangi

Edited by CIDMaaneetNaksh - 14 June 2011 at 8:40pm

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Thnx For the Pm...

So Maan is scared of meeting Geet ...Pls Jaldi se dono ko confess karva do ...


STATUS-WAITING DESPERATELY 

UPDATE SOON 

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Posted: 14 June 2011 at 3:06am | IP Logged
loved the update...
bechara maan phas gaya...
poor him kal raat ki baat se kitna darr gaya hain...
geet ke call se hi ussey darr lagne laga...
aur upar se nakli meeting ki arrangement...
maan ki time hi karab chal rahi hain...nahin toh adi teek ussi time per wahan nahin hotha...
eagerly waiting for the next update...
pl cont soon

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awesome part...ClapClap
love it..
cont soon...Smile

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Awesome update
wow maan sing khurana geet se dargaya
bechara nakhli meeting rakhli
precap was intersting
loved it 
pls cont soon

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Poor maan,bechara kitna dargaya geet se,abhi age dekho hota h kya,geet maan n maan adi phon convo is hillarious.luvd it.

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