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FF(MANEET): DIL MIL GAYE Thrd1 upd prt 21 pg 141) (Page 45)

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Posted: 09 June 2011 at 10:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by luckystar007

still Sleepywaiting
thanks frnd wellu won't hav to wait for much longer i will b updating it tomorrow

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Posted: 09 June 2011 at 10:55am | IP Logged
Well frnds because of ur love and support today my OS has been converted into an FF. i AM SO TOUCHED FRNDS IT WAS JUST BECAUSE OF D FAITH THAT EACH ONE OF U HAD IN MY WRITING THAT THIS HAS BEEN POSSIBLE.
 
IT IS INDEED A VERY BIG BOOST FOR A BEGINER LIKE ME.

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NICE PART. PLS UPDATE SOON

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Banner: Shivangi (CIDManeetNaksh) & Sthuti
 
Dear frnds because of ur love and support my OS has been converted into an FF. Thanks a ton for ur appreciation and encouragement guys. Now I would be extending my story and as I promised, u will witness geet's reaction in today's update but again each one of u will have to wait for geet's confession and believe me she will confess her love for maan in her own style. Looking forward to ur valuable and precious comments. Love- piya

PART 10

The tape stops.

Geet closed her eyes. Tears of happiness started rolling down her cheeks. Today was the best day of her life, a day that would remain close to her heart & her soul till her last breath.  

Maan's confession had made a very big impact on her heart.  His words had forced her to believe that she was indeed a very special person. Yes she always use to feel that she is destiny's favourite child and today she knew she was exceptional to get the love of her life in the form of Maan her Prince charming.

Wrapped with happiness and tied with the strings of joy God had sent her the most precious gift of her life in the form of Maan her dream man. He had all the qualities that a girl would love to see in her man, She knew his love for her would always be eternal and unconditional.

She always hated her scotty and wanted to get rid of it but today she was grateful to her bike that it stopped working at the right time, if it hadn't stopped working then she wouldn't have been in this car and she would have been deprived of the happiness that she was now experiencing.

She was recollecting each and every word that maan had recorded in his confession and was reliving the most cherishable moments of her life that guided her in an absolutely new world, a world that was built on the 4 strong pillars of love, trust, happiness & respect, a world which solely belonged to her and her Maan. Yes her Maan.

Mere Maan Sirf mere'

This was the first word that she had uttered after listening to the confession. Slowly she opened her eyes.

She removed the cassette from the tape and placed it close to her heart. This was her most prized possession and she would value it till her last breath. She placed the cassette in her bag.

Just then she heard Maan's voice. He had collected the file and was giving instructions to adi about some meeting that was going to take place the next day

She couldn't take it any longer. She got down of the car and was looking at Maan with absolute love and respect. Maan ended the call and started approaching his car. He realized that geet was standing outside and wondered if anything was wrong. But before he could approach geet'

Geet sealed their distance with a beautiful hug. Maan was totally taken by surprise. He realized that there was something different in this hug. The hug was so tight that there was even no place left for air to pass through them.

The hug was extremely passionate both of them seemed to melt into each other. Maan once again lost his control and he started to respond to the hug. Both of them were feeling safe and extremely comfortable in each other's embrace. It almost seemed like a perfect dream. This embrace produced a warm, protective and sensual feeling it almost gave an impression that their hearts were desperately craving for this occasion from many generations. This hug was bonding two souls together.

Geet (thinking) Maan aaj se hawa ko bhi humare darmiyaan aane ki ijajat nahi hai (smiles) and further tightens the hug.

Tears of happiness were still flowing down her cheeks. She slowly started placing her lips on maan's chest. This was the first time that maan had felt the touch of geet's soft lips. Her lips started travelling in an upward direction she just went on pressing her lips but never kissed maan she was about to touch maan's lips when suddenly maan's mobile started ringing.

Both of them opened their eyes. Maan immediately took a step behind and was cursing himself to let such a thing happen. But this time geet was not at all embarrassed she knew exactly what she had done and was badly cursing maan's mobile.

Maan: (did not have the courage to face geet) Ghar chalte hai geet.

Saying so he quickly sits in the car.

Geet smiles and decides that she won't let maan escape so easily. He had given her the most beautiful day of her life and hence she will also confess her love for maan in a special way.

On the entire way geet was simply admiring Maan. She was constantly looking at him with her mesmerizing eyes that were filled with love and passion.

Maan was trying tremendously hard to keep his emotions in check. He firmly decided that he won't look at geet since it would then become extremely difficult for him to control his feelings.

Geet was happy to see Maan in this situation.

Finally they reach geet's house.

Maan opens the door for geet. Geet apna haath aage badathi hai. Maan uske haatho ko thamkar usse bahar aane mein madat karta hai.

Maan: (Still avoiding eye contact) Ok Bye Geet.

Geet maan ke haatho ko kaskar thaam leti hai.

Geet: Maan' (she takes his name with full passion)

Maan is forced to look into geet's eyes. Geet is overjoyed to see this.

Once again she approaches maan. Maan immediately closes his eyes. Geet is very happy to this reaction. This time she directly approaches his lips. Maan could feel the warmth of her breath. He was trying to win a battle that he had already lost.

Their lips were merely an inch away from each other. Geet was dying to feel those lips but then she decided that their first kiss has to be extra special.

She slowly deviated her path and placed a soft kiss on maan's cheek and from there in one of his ears she whispered "GOOD NIGHT" on hearing this maan's heart generated a thunder beat .Geet gave a satisfactory smile and once again followed the same path and stopped on reaching his lips.

It was becoming more and more difficult for maan to handle the situation. Geet exactly knew the effect that her proximity was generating on Maan.

She now moved towards his second ear and in a sexy tone she uttered "SWEET DREAMS" and placed a beautiful kiss on his cheek.

Once again she stopped at his lips and gently placed her hand on his face and caressed it with all her love. Geet's closeness was making maan mad. She was actually torturing him and he was absolutely not in his wits to come out of this situation. Geet placed a final kiss on his chin and uttered " SEE U SOON"

With a naughty smile on her face she released Maan from her embrace and started walking towards her house.

Maan stood there completely frozen like a statue. He just failed to understand geet's behaviour. This was the first time that situations had overpowered Maan Singh Khurana. Apne car mein baitkar chupchap bina kuch soche samjhe Maan apne ghar ki taraf rawana ho gaya.

PRECAP: Geet: (self talk) " Maan tumhe satane ka mauka roj thodi na milta hai, tumhe apne dil ki baat batane se pehle main tumhe thoda sataungi zaroor"

 PART 11: PAGE 56

 


Edited by piya- - 09 July 2011 at 2:55am

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Loved it Smile
awesome
cont soon

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awww poor maan..such a sweet torture...go on geet...lekin zyada mat satana...update was awsm..loved it...glad that it s nw a ff...thank you sooo much...would love to read it...do continue soon...

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