Fan Fictions

India-Forums

   
Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

FF(MANEET): DIL MIL GAYE Thrd1 upd prt 21 pg 141) (Page 25)

piya- IF-Stunnerz
piya-
piya-

Joined: 30 December 2010
Posts: 32905

Posted: 02 June 2011 at 7:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mona1992

awesomeee
thanks dearTongue

piya- IF-Stunnerz
piya-
piya-

Joined: 30 December 2010
Posts: 32905

Posted: 02 June 2011 at 7:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by butterfly.tanu

Awesome update...
like it...
poor yash...
kya socha tha or kya ho gaya...
yash is going to meet meera...
i think there he found real meera...
maan is going to confessed his feeling to geet...
cont soon...
 
thanks for commenting dear. i will try my level best to make maan's confession specialTongue
piya- IF-Stunnerz
piya-
piya-

Joined: 30 December 2010
Posts: 32905

Posted: 02 June 2011 at 7:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -sofiya-

awesome update :D
thanks dearTongue
piya- IF-Stunnerz
piya-
piya-

Joined: 30 December 2010
Posts: 32905

Posted: 02 June 2011 at 7:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mandymore

Luvely prt...wow meera n yash were so cmfrtble wid each other dis is cld dil ka cnnctn,maaneet ka kya hoga.continue soon.fab prt
 
Ys indeed isi ko dil ka connection kehte haiTongue regarding maneet from now onwards in my future updates u will defintely see more of themTongue. thanks for commentng dearTongue
hopehot IF-Sizzlerz
hopehot
hopehot

Joined: 03 December 2010
Posts: 12377

Posted: 02 June 2011 at 9:34am | IP Logged

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

piya-

chsweety22 IF-Sizzlerz
chsweety22
chsweety22

Joined: 01 October 2010
Posts: 12999

Posted: 02 June 2011 at 11:19am | IP Logged

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

minnie_tweetiepiya-

piya- IF-Stunnerz
piya-
piya-

Joined: 30 December 2010
Posts: 32905

Posted: 03 June 2011 at 12:25am | IP Logged
Banner: Shivangi (CIDManeetNaksh) and Sthuthi
 
Once again thanks for ur valuable comments frnds. It helps me to improve my writing skills. Frnds here is the next part of my OS: DIL MIL GAYE.  Hope that i continue to get your support and love. Pls comment frnds.
 
 
PART 7

COFFEE HOUSE

Yash still thinking about Pari (d actual Meera)

Maan arrives

Maan: Kiske khayalo mein khoe hue ho Yash?

Yash: Hey Maan tum kab aaye?

Maan: Acchha ji tho aap kisi ke khayalo mein itne madhosh hai ke aapko mere aane ki khabar bhi nahi lagi?

Yash: Maan tu bhi na.

Maan: Lagta hai aaj Meera ke saath  baat kuch aage badh gayi?

Yash: Nahi yaar main tho usse mila bhi nahi.

Maan: Kya matlab tu uske ghar nahi gaya?

Yash:  Gaya tha lekin wo ghar mein nahi thi.

Maan: Oh so sad.

Yash: Nahi balki main tho kehta hoon acchha hua ke wo ghar pe nahi thi?

Maan:  Kya matlab?

Yash:  Waha pe meri mulakat uski best friend Pari (d real Meera) se hui. O Maan that girl is so unique. Wo kitni sweet , cute aur innocent hai. I am falling short of words to describe her. Wo baki ladkiyoon se bilkul alag hai. Uska nature kuch aisa hai ke pehli hi mulakat mein kisi bhi insaan ko impress kar de.  Tu tho jaanta hai ke main ladkiyoon ke saath especially agar main pehli baar unse mila hoon tho kitna uncomfortable feel karta hoon  you won't believe it Maan ke Pari (Meera) wo pehli ladki hai jiske saath mein ghanto tak baat karta raha aur tab bhi main bor nahi hua balki agar mera bus chalta tho main yuhi uske saamne baitkar zindagi bhar uski baate sunta rehta. O Maan usne tho pehli hi mulakat mein mere dil par ek chaap chod di hai. Sach kahu tho uski saadgi (simplicity) hi uski sabse badi khoobsurati hai. Kaash usne wo contest jeeta hota aur wo meri Date hoti tho sach mein main wo din uski life ka sabse memorable din bana deta. But'

Maan: But kya? Thik hai ke usne contest nahi jeeta par iska ye matlab tho nahi ke tu usse Date par leke nahi jaa sakta? Jo baat pehle nahi kar saka usse ab kar de. Usse dinner ke liye invite kar kya pata wo maan jaaye.

Yash: O yes ye tho maine socha hi nahi. Thanks dude. Chal meri love story ko chod aur apni suna. Geet se apne dil ki baat kahi ya nahi?

Maan: Nahi abhi tak tho nahi kahi.

Yash: What!!! this is not done yaar. Humne kya decide kiya tha ke main Meera ke ghar jaaunga aur tu geet se apni dil ki baat kahega.

Maan: Yash pehle meri baat tho sun le. Maine apne feelings ek cassette mein record kar liya hai aur wo cassette main geet ko uske birthday ke din dunga.

Yash: Sirf ek" I Love U" kehne ke liye tune ek pura cassette use kar liya

Maan: Pyar ka izhaar sirf "I love u" kehne se nahi hota. Us cassette mein maine geet ko ye jatane ki koshish ki hai ke uska meri zindagi mein kya importance hai. Pehle meri zindagi kaise thi aur usne meri zindagi mein kya badlaw laya. Maine usse ye kehne ki koshish ki hai ke Geet ke bina Maan kitna adhura hai. Aur ye saari baate mehez wo teen shabd kehne se puri nahi hogi. Main har haal mein geet ki khushi chahta hoon. Are main tho usse itni mohabbat karta hoon ke uski khushi ke liye main usse khone ke liye bhi taiyaar hoon.

Yash: Maan janta hai Geet khafi lucky hai jise tere jaisa chahnewala mila. I really hope ke Geet tera proposal accept kar le.

Maan: Main kal Geet ke ghar ja raha hoon. Pure 2 dino se meri usse mulakat nahi hui aur ye sirf main hi jaanta hoon ke ye do din maine kaise guzare.

Yash: Aur Main Pari (Meera) ko Dinner ke liye pucch kar dekta hoon.

Yash calls Meera and Meera happily accepts to go out with Yash.

 

NEXT DAY

Maan arrives at Geet's place. He rings the door bell

Savitri: Are Maan bete bahut dino ke baad aana hua.

Maan takes the blessings of Savitri

Savitri: Khush rahiye

Maan: Aunty, bus kaam mein thoda busy tha isliye nahi aa paaya. Aunty waise Geet kaha hai nazar nahi aa rahi.

Savitri: Hum tho samjhe the ke aap humse milne ke liye aaye hai lekin aap tho aate hi Geet ke bare mein pucchne lag gaye. Khair ab kya kare humhe tho koi pucchta hi nahi hai.

Maan: Nahi aunty aisi baat nahi hai'

Savitri: (smiles) Bete hum tho mazak kar rahe the. Geet apne kamre mein hai aap jaakar unse mil lijiye tabtak hum aapke liye aapki favourite Black Coffee banakar late hai.

Maan: Thanks aunty

Maan Geet ke room ki taraf badtha hai

Geet is still upset and is unable to concentrate on her assignments.

Maan: Hello Geet.

Geet: Are maan tum.

Maan: Haan main, kyun kisi aur ka intezaar kar rahi thi kya?

Geet: (tries to smile) Nahi tho

Maan senses that something is wrong with Geet. She is not her ususal self.

Maan: Kya baat hai geet upset lag rahi ho.

Geet: Nahi tho main bhala kyun upset hone lagi. I m perfectly alright maan

Maan: Janti ho geet tumhe jhooth bolna bilkul bhi nahi aata.

Geet: Aisa kyun keh rahe ho Maan?

Maan: Jab bhi tum jhooth bolne ki koshish karti ho na tab tumhari ye aakhein tumhara saath nahi deti aur tum pakdi jaati ho.

Geet: Mujhe kuch samaj mein nahi aa raha Maan ke tum kis jhooth ke bare mein baath kar rahe ho

Maan: Mujhse tho laga tha ke main tumhara kareebi dost hoon aur tum mujhse har baat share karogi. Lekin lagta hai ke main galat tha. Thik hai agar tum mujhe batana nahi chahti tho koi baat nahi shayad mujhe tumne wo hak kabhi diya hi nahi. Thik hai Geet tho main ab chalta hoon apna khayal rakhna.

Maan about to leave

Geet: Maan'

Maan stops and turns to face her. Geet runs and hugs him very tightly. Maan hugs her back. Geet suddenly feels very safe and secured in Maan's embrace and was unwilling to break the hug. They stayed in this position for several minutes. A sweet smile aroused on Geet's face and she whispered

Geet: Tumhe hakh hai Maan, tumhe pura hak hai.

Maan noticing this felt very happy . Even Maan didn't want to break the hug but he wanted to know the reason that was making geet upset.

Maan:  Mujhe batau Geet ke wo kaunsi baat hai jo ke tumhe itna pareshaan kar rahi hai.

Geet: (looks at maan) Tears start rolling down her cheeks

Maan: Aasu nahi Geet assu nahi. Tumhare aakhon mein ye moti acchhe nahi lagte. Ab bata bhi do kya baat hai main tumhe yoon tadapta hua dekh nahi sakta. Tum mujhse koi bhi baat share kar sakti ho Geet, chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye humesha yaad rakhna ke main humesha har haalat mein tumhara saath dunga.

On hearing this Geet once again hugs maan

Geet: Maan mujhe lagta hai ke mujhse kisi se pyar ho gaya hai aur wo mujhse dur chala jaayega , aur yahi baat mujhe andar hi andar khaye ja rahi hai.

Maan feels heartbroken on hearing this. But somehow he controls his emotions.

Maan: Geet kya tumne usse ye baat batai ke tum usse pyar karti ho?

Geet: Nahi maan ab tak to nahi

Maan: Is mamle mein deri karna achhi baat nahi hai geet. Main tumhe yahi salah dunga ke tum usse jaakar apne dil ki baat keh do kahi der na ho jaaye.

Geet: lekin'

Maan: Lekin vekin kuch nahi geet tumhe mujhse ye waada karna hoga ke tum jis kisi se bhi sacchi mohabat karti ho usse apne dil ki baat bejijak aur saaf saaf lafzo mein jald hi batadogi.

Geet: thik hai Maan jaisa tum kaho

Maan : (changes the topic) Geet tumhare assignments ka kya hua?

Geet: Abhi tak kaam chal raha hai maan

Maan: Tho chalo main tumhari thodi bahut help kar deta hoon

Geet: Tum bahut hi sweet ho maan.

Maan: tho chalo batau mujhse kya karna hoga.

Savitri : Ye lijiye maan bete aapki black coffee aur ye aapki favourite dish

Maan: thanks aunty

Savitri : U r most welcome bete

Savitri goes out. She had heard the entire conversation that had taken place between maan n geet

Savitri: (self talk) Geet bete kaash aap wo dekh paati jo humhe nazar aa raha hai. Appke Prince charming koi aur nahi balki Maan hai. Pure do dino se aapke chehre pe muskurahat dekhne ke liye hum taras gaye the aur aaj Maan ke baho mein jaate hi aapki wo mushkurahat laut aayi. Hum samajte hai bete ke aap dil aur dimag ke kashmakash ke bhich mein jhool rahi hai. Hum tho yahi chahenge ke aakhirkar jeeth Dil ki ho. Lekin ye sachhai ke aapYash se nahi balki Maan ko chahti hai aapko khud realize karna hoga. Hum bus yahi dua karenge ke aapko apne jazbaato ka ehsaas jald hi ho.

PRECAP 1: Luck in favour of Maan

PRECAP 2: Yash : " Tumne mujhse itna bada jhooth kaha"

 
PART 8:PAGE 34
 


Edited by piya- - 09 July 2011 at 2:52am

The following 73 member(s) liked the above post:

snehag10laila889pyarisaheliswtpoonehavashimaaneet_mansiCandy_jsangeljyotifatiya52110Sanjanareddy84shruthiruchspallavisarkarcue1mons_mbanaum91prstbhakbhartifancrazedfan19srikrithidmg_roks_antaraam_sweet_paridreamy4everLadyArwen-eiya-mansijani21anky_sdh_riticutemishtiritusoni2233Amrtinajeyanthi123nats0101mayaparitellymesheetalvasabutterfly.tanuamzu32maanujaanuputhkomlikaluv_DDminnie_tweetieAsh1991paponecon-Veritaserum-ritzy09angel-ki-shona-Zahra15-impoojavermamaaneetsangelsanum23Remya_Pillaiprava55663rs12345kahkashansakina6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6preethiahopehotnahtani88maaniqrasun-naaaaaaaaachsweety22yoga23priyaswetha10mandymoremitzi11..hinal..shah10rsroopalimaanseeiznaaabinash079Downhill

ninavi IF-Dazzler
ninavi
ninavi

Joined: 07 October 2010
Posts: 4211

Posted: 03 June 2011 at 12:41am | IP Logged
Smile

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

piya-

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
My Untouched Desire (Maaneet) pt 18 pg 87

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 82 83

Author: kweetrockstar   Replies: 660   Views: 169635

kweetrockstar 660 169635 20 January 2013 at 5:22am by amandadsouza95
Maneet FF- Contract wife- ch17-pg103

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 110 111

Author: nehara   Replies: 884   Views: 227150

nehara 884 227150 15 December 2012 at 8:34pm by amandadsouza95
FF Maneet Scenes- after marriage Updt Pg 20

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 23 24

Author: palluluvsmaan   Replies: 187   Views: 76020

palluluvsmaan 187 76020 25 January 2012 at 11:01pm by Dazlingdivya
Mayur FF:The Blind Date:New thrd Link Pg 150

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 151 152

Author: thenarcissist   Replies: 1210   Views: 88235

thenarcissist 1210 88235 04 September 2010 at 6:02am by seemamittal
The Lost Love[AR]PT1-10 + Link new thrd Pg 150

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 145 146

Author: Rohit86   Replies: 1162   Views: 68291

Rohit86 1162 68291 22 April 2009 at 2:55pm by Lovely_Diva

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index