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FF(MANEET): DIL MIL GAYE Thrd1 upd prt 21 pg 141) (Page 21)

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 2:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by butterfly.tanu

Awesome update...
cont soon...
 
Thanks dear. i am going to update it right now within sometime. Iwill send u a PMTongue

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Banner: Shivangi (CIDManeetNaksh) and Sthuthi
 
Ok friends here is the next part of my OS. Looking forward for your valuable comments.
 
PART 6

Maan is returning back after meeting Yash.

Maan (self talk):  Hmm... Geet se apne dil ki baat kasie kahu.. Do din baad uska birthday hai sochta hoon usi din apne feelings ke bare mein usse saaf saaf keh du. Haan yeh thik rahega. Par mujhe kuch is tarah ye baat kehni padegi ke geet ko mere pyar ki gehrai ka ehsaas ho aur saath hi mujhe is baat ka bhi khayal rakhna hoga ke meri baato se wo mujhse naaraz bhi na ho. Main nahi chahta ke usse meri wajah se kisi bhi tarah ka dukh poucche.

Maan comes across a music store. He gets an idea and goes and purchases an empty cassette from the shop.

KHURANA MANSION

Maan places Geet's photo in front of him. Puts the cassette in the tape and starts recording his confession.

(Sorry guys right now I am not going to tell u how maan expressed his feelings for Geet. U know it has to be very special.  I promise u that I will disclose the confession at the right time in front of the right person in my future updates.)

Maan stops the tape and removes the cassette. He gift wraps the cassette. Kisses Geet's photo and goes off to sleep.

Next day

Yash : Shayad maan sahi keh raha tha Meera zaroor nervous ho gayi hogi. Main bhi na ek number ka bevakoof hoon koi bhi ladki pehli mulakat mein thodi na kisi ajnabee se ghul milkar baat karegi.  Khair jo ho gaya so ho gaya aaj main uske ghar jaakar usse surprise detha hoon. Kya pata is baar kuch baat aage badh jaaye.

Yash reaches Meera's house. He rings the door bell

Meera opens the door

Yash: Hello, kya meera ghar par hai?

Meera: Ji aap?

Yash: O sorry I forgot to introduce myself. I am RJ Yash and if I am not mistaken tum Pari hona Meera ki best friend?

Meera (shocked to see Yash but quickly stabilizes herself) Haan sahi pehchana main hi Meera ki best friend Pari hoon. Pls come inside.

Yash: Thanks

Yash: Meera ghar par nahi hai kya?

Meera: Haan actually wo kuch kaam se bahar gayi hai bus kuch der mein lautthii hi hogi.

Yash: O tho thik hai main chalta hoon

Meera: Maine kaha na wo thodi der mein aa jaayegi aap yaha uska wait kar sakte hai

Yash: Are u sure? Mera matlab hai aapko koi parechaani to nahi hogi na?

Meera: (smiles) Pareshani kis baat ki aap Meera ke friend hai tho aap mere bhi friend hue.

Yash: Ok in that case agar main aapka friend hua tho aapko meri ek baat manni padegi

Meera: Wo kya?

Yash: U have to call me by my name ye "aap" bahut ajeeb sound karta hai.

Meera: In that case Yash ye baat tumpar bhi utni hi laagu hoti hai jitna ki mujhpe.

Yash: Well said Pari. I am impressed

Meera: Achha Yash tum thode der wait karo main tumhare liye kuch khane ke liye laati hoon.

Meera goes to the kitchen. Yash admires the house

Meera comes out.

Meera: Yash dekho main tumhare liye kya banakar layi hoon

Yash: Cheese grilled Sandwich!!! O Pari jaanti ho ye tho mere favourite dishes mein se ek hai.

Meera: Jaanti hoon.

Yash: Kya? Jaanti ho  wo Kaise?

Meera: Wo actually Meera ne bataya tha.

Yash: O achha.

Meera: Waise Yash tum itne gaur se is kamre ko kyun dekh rahe the?

Yash: Main kya koi bhi dekhega. Is kamre ko itne khoobsurati se sajaya hai ke kya kahu. Waise is kamre ki sajawat kisne ki hai?

Meera: Wo maine

Yash: Wow Pari u r amazing yaar jitna accha cook karti ho uthna hi achha ghar ko sajati bhi ho.

Meera: Well thanks for the compliment Yash. Lekin isme meri itni taareef karni ki zarurat  nahi hai yeh tho mera kaam hi hai. Main ek interior decorator hoon.

Yash: O wow

Meera: Acchha Yash tum batau Meera ke saath tumhara date kaisa tha?

Yash: Haan acchha tha. (changes the topic) Khair tum batau kya tum mera show sunti ho?

Meera: Ye bhi koi pucchne ki baat hai. Main tho tumhara show galti se bhi miss nahi karti. Aur jaante ho jo tumne apne show pe wo naya segment start kiya hai na jisme tum aur geet Youth related problems discuss karte ho wo tho mera top favourite hai.

Yash: Wow Pari hum dono mein khafi similarities hai who segment tho mera bhi favourite hai.

Yash feels very comfortable with Meera ( whom he thinks to be Pari) They go on talking for several hours and Yash starts admiring the innocence and simplicity of Meera.

Yash: Ok Pari tho ab main chalta hoon. Agar waqt mila tho main kal tumse milne zaroor aaunga. Hope u won't mind

Meera: Main kyun mind karne lagi infact muhjse tumhare saath time spend karne mein bahut khushi hogi.

Yash: Ok Pari see u soon

Meera: Bye. Take care.

YASH LEAVES.

 MEERA IS EXTREMELY HAPPY

 PRECAP 1: Yash: " Maan jaante ho uski simplicity hi uski sabse badi khoobsurati hai"

PRECAP 2: Maan: " Geet tumhare aakhon mein ye moti acchee nahi lagte"

 
Pls frnds do comment. Bhale hi aapka dil mujhpar sade hue tamatar ya ande pehkna chahe (since i did not reveal maan's confession) tab bhi aap comment karke apne dil ki puri bhadaas mujhpar nikal sakte hai. But frnds do comment
 
PART 7: PAGE 28
 


Edited by piya- - 09 July 2011 at 2:50am

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 3:00am | IP Logged
hey yaar...loved the Update Piya...it's so nice...totally cool and awesome! poor Yash...

Me first! Yippee!!! Balle Balle...lovely...!...I was telling about the previuos Update and look me first in this Update...chalo achcha...let me read first!

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OMG...what a lovely Update! loved it tons... Yash-Meera convo was super sweet and Maan's part was adorably as well...waiting for Maan's confession! hope Geet understands him...hey yaar...convert this to an FF...don't make it short...it's really cool! loved it... Wonder what will Yash do when he comes to know about "Meera" and the most funny thing was...he came to meet "Meera"(Pari) and then after meeting "Pari"(Meera) he got completely lost and went away without meeting "Meera"(Pari) yash seems to be soo cutee!


Edited by CIDMaaneetNaksh - 01 June 2011 at 3:07am

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 3:22am | IP Logged
wow amazing update.. very curious to kanw abt maan's confession... liked yash  n meera.. continue soon

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woww awesomeee
but short
but anyways its awesome

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lovely update

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