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FF(MANEET): DIL MIL GAYE Thrd1 upd prt 21 pg 141) (Page 123)

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when are u updating dear?????????
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Originally posted by silkyarora

when are u updating dear?????????
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monday dearTongue

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fab update
finally maan knows that geet heard his confession...
wow maan iz gna make geet confess plzz cont soon x

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awesome update.
finally maan kws.
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Thank you friends for your support and encouragement. Friends right now I m suffering from flu and hence I m not in a condition to reply to your comments m really sorry for that. Here is the next part. Hope u enjoy it.

Love 'Piya

PART 20

 

Geet reaches her house. She changes her dress and then remembers that she was supposed to give a miss call to Maan

The mere thought of Maan itself was enough to bring a glow on Geet's face.

Geet: (self talk) Oye Geet apne emotions par control rakh. Aaj pehle hi tune apna banabanaya plan bigad diya tha. Wo tho shukhra hai baabji ka ke sahi waqt pe mujhe yaad gaya ke apne dil ki baat Maan ko abhi nahi batani hai warna aaj tho meri pol hi khul jaati (Geet learn to control your emotions you had almost ruined your plan today )

Geet: Cha lab fatafat se Maan ko ek miss call de deti hoon' ( ok let me first give a miss call to Maan)

She gives a miss call to Maan

Maan calls her back

Geet: Are Maan maine tumhe miss call de diya tha na iska yahi matlab hai k main ghar sahi salamat pouhachh chuki hoon tho phir tumne phone kyun kiya? ( Maan I gave u a miss call na which means that I have reached home safely then what was the need to call me back?)

Maan: Geet main manta hoon k tum ghar pouhchne k baad mujhe miss call dene wali thi magar ye kab decide hua tha ke main tumhe phone nahi karunga?

Geet: Achha batau kyun phone kiya? ( ok so tell me what's the matter?)

Maan: Mujhse tumhe phone karne k liye koi khaas reason ki zarurat nahi hai Geet (I don't need a special reason to call u)

Geet: Achha ji mujhe bevakoof samaj rakha hai kya? Pehle jab main phone karti thi tab humesha kaam ka bahana banathe the aur ab keh rahe ho ke tum mujhe aivi phone kar rahe ho' Aisa toh ho hi nahi sakta ke Maan Singh Khurana apna keemati waqt yuhi zyaya kar de ( O really do u think I m a fool or something? Whenever I call u, u r always busy n now u want me to believe that d great MSK has simply called me without any special reason)

Maan: Geet tum bhi na meri kisi baat ka vishwas hi nahi karti (Geet u never seem to trust me)

Geet: Mr. Maan Singh Khurana ab mujhe emotional blackmail karna bannd kardo aur mudhe par aaou  ( Stop d emotional blackmail Mr. MSK and come to d point)

Maan: Achha baba sunno maine tumhe thanks kehne ko phone kiya hai ( Ok dear I wanted to thank you)

Geet: (confused) Thanks kis baat ke liye (Thanks for what?)

Maan: Geet tum wakai mein great ho tumne meri zindagi mein khushiyaan bekkher di aur tab bhi anjaan bann rahi ho (Geet u r really amazing yaar u filled my life with happiness n still u want me to believe that u r absolutely clueless regarding the incident)

Geet: Main kuch samjhi nahi Maan ( I didn't get u Maan)

Maan: Are tumhi toh ho jisne meri zindagi mein pyar ke rang bhar diye' tumhari wajah se toh mujhe yeh ehsaas hua ke mujhse bhi koi mohabbat karta hai' aur jaanti ho usse paakar mujhe kitni khushi mili hai isse main lafzo mein bayan nahi kar pa raha' I love her so much (Geet u r one who has filled my life with the beautiful colours of love' its totally b'coz of u that I have realized that someone really loves me a lot' I can't express my feelings I simply know that I am very happy that she is now a part of my life' Oh I love her so much)

Geet: (smiles) Maan wo bhi tumhe behet chahti hai ( Maan she also has the same feelings for u)

Maan: Jaanta hoon (Yes I know)

Geet: Kya jaante ho tumhe kaise pata chala (What? How come?)

Maan: Ofho geet tum bhool gayi tumhi ne toh bataya tha aur phir uska call bhi toh aaya tha (Geet u yourself had me informed me and I had got a call from her as well)

Geet: (confused) Maine bataya tha aur ye  tum kiske phone ki baat kar rahe ho?

Maan: Aur kiski, apni girlfriend "khawb" ki

Geet: Kya? Khwab ? ye kaha se aa gayi?

Maan: ye tum kaisi baate kar rahi ho geet tumhi ne tho pure office ke saamne meri secret admirer ke baare mein mujhe inform kiya tha aur jaanti ho tumhare jaane ke baad jaise hi main apne kamre mein gaya tab mujhe uska phone aa gaya' wow kitni surili aawaj hai uski' jaanti ho geet uski aawaj mein ek aisi kashish ke jise sunkar koi bhi deewana ho jaaye ( Geet u yourself had announced in d conference room in front of d entire office staff abt my secret admirer n u know what as soon as u left I got a call from her' wow what a melodious voice')

Geet is getting irritated

Maan: Uski baato se toh aisa lag raha tha jaise k main usse kahi saalo se jaanta hoon' lagta hai mera usse koi bahut purana rishta hai'she knows me so well' I think she is perfect for me ( I really felt that I know her from the very beginning it seems that there is definitely some connection amongst us' I think she is perfect for me)

Geet: What? Perfect' wo tumhare liye perfect kaise ho sakti hai' tumhare liye agar koi perfect hain toh wo sirf m' (stops in between)

Maan: (smirks) Kya kaha tumne mere liye kaun perfect hain?

Geet: Wo chodo tumne aise kaise usse bina dekhe hi pasand kar liya? Kya pata k wo kaisi dikhthi hogi uska rehen sehen kaisa hoga' wo tumhare layak hogi bhi ya nahi? ( How can u accept her just like that?)

Maan: Ye kya baat hui geet pehle tum khud hi uske baare mein mujhe inform karti ho aur ab jab main usse accept karna chahta hoon tab khud hi tum hum dono love birds ke beech mein deewar bankar khadi ho rahi ho? O God logh sach kehte hain mohabbat karnewalo ka toh ye saara zamana dushman hi bann jata hai ( This is ridiculous Geet first u yourself play cupid between the two of us by informing me abt her n now you r acting like a stumbling block between two love birds)

Geet: Kya? main tumhare love story ke beech mein deewar bann rahi hoon' Maan jao main tumse kabhi bhi baat nahi karungi' phir aana mere peeche mujhse maafi mangne' tab main tumhe pata chalega k geet ko naaraz kake tumne kitni badi galti ki hai  ( What u think that I am an obstacle in your love story fine then I won't talk to u)

Maan: Very Good main bhi unn logo se koi rishta nahi rakhna chahta jo ke meri khushiyoon se jalte ho' badi mushkil se toh meri life mein koi special person ne entry li hai aur usme bhi tumhe problem ho rahi hai' jao main bhi tumse baat nahi karta ( Very good even I don't want to talk to those who r jealous of me n my happiness)

Saying so he cuts the phone

Geet: (shocked) Phone kaat diya' mera phone kaat diya

Geet throws her mobile on the bed and starts moving here and there in the room

Geet: Hey babaji ab ye kaunsi nayi aafat aan padi. Maine toh uhi Maan ko pareshan karne ke liye ek naam bol diya tha "khawb" ab ye jeeti jaagti khwab kaha se aa gayi mere aur mere maan ke beech mein ( O God now what is this new problem. Just for the sake of troubling Maan I had mentioned the name "khawb" )

Geet: (thinking) Ye naam toh maine conference room mein liya tha aur waha pe mere alawa sirf ek hi ladki thi aur wo hai Tasha. Haan wahi hogi jisne mauke ka fayda utakar chauka maarne ki koshish ki hai' Haiyo rabba ye kya ho gaya main toh aivihi maan ko pareshan kar rahi thi aur' ( I had mentioned this name in the conference room n there besides me there was only one girl n that was Tasha. OMG this means Tasha is the one who is taking the advantage ofthis situ)

Geet: Nahi aisa nahi ho sakta Maan sirf mere hain' main kisiko bhi unhe mujhse cheen le jaane nahi dungi' lekin main kya karu' maine toh Maan ko naaraz kar diya (No this is not possible' no one can separate me from my Maan' bt right now Maan is angry now what should I do?)

Geet: Haan  Geet aise time mein josh mein nahi balki hosh se kaam lena hoga'Ab mere Maan bhi na kitne bhoole hain uss chudail ki khuffnak aawaz unhe surili lag rahi hai'

Geet: Haan pehle toh mujhe Maan ko manana hoga are unke saath rahungi tabhi toh unhe har buri bala se bacha paungi' aur uss Tasha kitoh khair nahi' Mere Maan pe dore daal rahi hai' Tasha ki bachhi I won't leave u (ok I need to pacify Maan first so that I can stay with him and protect him from that Tasha)

Geet: Kal subah hote hi main Maan ko mana lungi. Haan yahi thik rahega

Khurana Mansion

Maan: (very happy and satisfied) Main jaanta hoon Geet tum iss waqt gusse se tilmila rahi hogi aur saath hi ye soch rahi hogi ke tumhara jhooth sach mein kaise badal gaya' aur main ye bhi jaanta hoon ke tum mujhe apne aap se dur jaane nahi dogi iss liye zaroor kuch na kuch plan karogi' aur tum chahe jo kuch bhi karo iss baar main tumhe tumhare hi plan mein phasa dunga' tum bahut hi jald meri baho mein hogi ( I can very well understand your current state geet m sure u must b thinking that how come your lie got converted into a reality' I know u r very possessive abt me n hence u will surely cm up with some plan ' whatever d case dear this time u your self will get entangled in your plan' very soon u will b in my embrace)

Meanwhile,

Yash returns back. He enters his house

Yash: (self talk) Pata nahi maine apna kya haal bana rakha tha. Main bhi na ek number ka bevakoof hoon uss jhoothi ladki Meera ke wajah se main kyun apni life barbaad karu  

Yash: Pata nahi Maan aur Geet mere bare mein kya soch rahe honge unn dono ko bina bataye hi main chala gayatha. Khair jo hua so hua ab aage se main uss Meera ka zikr bhi nahi karunga (from now onwards I m nt going to think abt Meera' I didn't even inform Maan n Geet that I was leaving')

Yash: Kal se hi main radio station phir se join kar lunga waha Geet se mulakat bhi ho jaayegi aur kaam hone ke baad Maan se bhi mil lunga ( I will rejoin Radio Station from tomorrow n then I will meet Maan as well as Geet)

Precap1 : Geet: "Kya? Tumne usse propose bhi kar diya?"

Precap 2 : Meera: "Yash meri baat toh suno"

 PART 21 : PG 141



Edited by piya- - 09 July 2011 at 3:12am

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Fantastic part 
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great update dear
nice plan by maan
continu soon

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