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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: nosi

awesome part ...thanx 4 pm

  U r always welcome😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: mona1992

Awesome

Thanks😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: luvdhrishti

amesum update
Cud u plz sen my pm wen u update

 
Sure i definetly send u a Pm😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
[QUOTE=hopehot]lovlely plz pm me[/QUOTE
 THANKS and i will surely send u a pm😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: rs12345

awesome update

thanks for the pm

 
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: knirwal

wowww

awesomeee
bt y did meera do such a thing of describing herself as pari
reallly sad for her
n hope geet gets 2 see her prince charming face 2mrw mrng


u will cm to know abt it in the next part😛
Posted: 12 years ago
Wowww what an update superbb Poor Girls :P:(precap seem very  interesting cant wait for the next one update afcttt!
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Posted: 12 years ago
 
Banner: Shivangi (CIDManeetNaksh) and Sthuti
 
Hello frnds. Thanks a ton for ur appreciation and encouragement. Frnds initially I had decided that I would be wrapping up this OS within 5 or 6 parts but now I would be extending it upto 10 parts. I promise that everyone of u will love the end initially there might be some twists n turns but I ensure that I will give a perfect and a beautiful end to this story.  I hope that I continue to get ur love and support. Thanks

Part 4

Yash:  Bye..

Maan:  Yash call already end ho chukka hai.

Yash:  Haan janta hoon

Maan: ( smiles)

Yash: Guys tum logo ne sunana jo description Meera ne diya usse tho yahi lagta hai ke she is extremely beautiful.

Maan:  Not only beautiful lekin jis tarah se usnne saare sawalo ke perfect answers diye hai usse ye bhi saabit hota hai ke she knows u very well. U r indeed very lucky Yash.

Yash:  Thanks dude waise let me tell u that ke main aap dono ko humare usual hangout place mein aaj nahi mil paaunga. U know  I have a date today and uske liye mujhe abhi se khafi saari taiyaariya karni hai.  U know na I have to look perfect.

Maan:  Haan baba pata hai. Ab apne date ka dindhora peetna band kar. Waise Geet tum tho shaam ko aa rahi ho na?

Geet: ( coming out from her thoughts) Hmm.. Wo Maan actually college ke thode assignments pending hai  aur submission ka date bhi nazdeek aa raha hai. Tho main soch rahi thi ke 2-3 dino mein wo kaam khatam kar du.  So shayad main aaj Coffee House na aa pau... I hope u don't mind Maan.

Maan:  It's  absolutely  fine Geet. Tum aaram se apne assignments complete kar lo infact agar tumhe meri kisi bhi tarah ki help ki zarurat ho tho mujhe zaroor batadena.

Geet: (smiles) Off course Maan & thanks for understanding me.

Maan: U r always welcome dear

MEERA'S HOUSE

Pari: Hey Meera u did it yaar. Maine radio pe  tera show suna. U were just too good. Meera... Meera... kya hua?

Pari: Meera tu ro rahi hai... What happened dear pls tell me.

Meera: Wo Pari Yash ka phone aaya tha...

Pari: Haan tho kya usne tujhse koi battameeji ki?

Meera:  Nahi aisi koi baat nahi hai...

Pari: Tho kaisi baat hai.

Meera: Yash mujhse puch raha tha ke main kaisi dikhthi hoon.

Pari: Bus itni si baat. Are wo isliye puch raha roga thaki wo tujhe shaam ko aasani se pehchaan sake. It's a blind Date right usne tujhe kabhi dekha nahi hai to wo tujhe kaise pechchanega?

Meera: Usne bhi yahi kaha

Pari: Tho tune description de diya na?

Meera: Haan lekin ek problem hai.

Pari: Kaisi problem?

Meera: Maine usse apna nahi balki tera description de diya.

Pari: (shocked) What!!! R u gone crazy meera... tune aisa kyun kiya?

Meera: Wo actually main nervous ho gayi thi

Pari: Kis baat se nervous?

Meera:  Pari tu jaanti hai na ke main looks mein kuch zyaada hi simple hoon, na hi mujhme koi fashion sense hai aur na hi koi style. Mujhe ye darr tha ke kahi Yash mujhse milkar naaraz na ho jaaye. I m sure mujhe koi bhi ladka pasand nahi kar sakta aur sach kahu tho aaj tak is baat se mujhe koi farak bhi nahi pada lekin agar Yash ne mujhe reject kar diya tho main ye seh nahi paaungi.

Pari: Ye tujhe kisne keh diya ke tu khoobsurat nahi hai? Meera tu laakho mein ek hai teri saadgi hi tera sabse bada plus point hai. Stop underestimating urself.

Meera: Tu meri best frnd hai na isliye tu aisa keh rahi hai.

Pari: Oh shut up Meera aur pehle ye soch ke ab is problem se bahar kaise nikle?

Meera: Soch liya

Pari: kya?

Meera: Pehle ye promise kar ke tu mera saath degi.

Pari: Ok agar isse tujhe khushi milti hai tho ye le I promise ab bata karna kya hai?

Meera:  Aaj Yash ke saath Date par tu Meera bankar chali ja

Pari: (shocked) What!!!!

Meera: Dekh Pari tune mujhe promise kiya hai ke tu meri help karegi

Pari:  Lekin Meera is se tho situation aur bhi complicated ho jaayega.

Meera: Koi complications nahi hoga. Sirf ek din ki tho baat hai mana mat kar yaar, dekh agar main Yash se milne gayi tho usse ye lagega ke maine usse jhooth kaha aur main ye bilkul bhi nahi chaahti.

Pari: Magar...

Meera:  Pls Pari mere liye

Pari: Ok... But I m warning u Meera isse mamla sulajne ke bajaye aur bhi ulaj sakta hai.

Meera: Thanks yaar...

YASH'S HOUSE

Yash (selftalk) : O ho kuch samaj mein nahi aa raha ke main kya pehnu. Ek kaam karta hoon Maan se baat karta hoon uski dressing sense kafi achhi hai.

CALLS MAAN

Maan:  Tho Yash Date ki taiyaari ho gayi?

Yash: Kaha yaar, teri help chahiye thi

Maan: Haan bol

Yash: Mujhe samaj mein nahi aa raha ke main kya pehnu

Maan: Is mein na samajnewali kaunsi baat hai kuch bhi pehnle (smiles)

Yash:  Are yaar aaj mere life ka pehla Date hai aur main chahta hoon ke Meera par mera impression achha ho. Chal ab mazak karna band kar aur meri help kar.

Maan:  Achha jo tere paas ek black colour ka suit hai na wo pehenle usme tu khafi handsome lagta hai.

Yash: Thanks yaar, chal ab main phone rahkta hoon.

Maan: Ok best of luck and do let me know ke tera 1ST Date kaisa tha

Yash: ye bhi koi kehne ki baat hai. Chal bye and take care.

GEET'S HOUSE

Geet is very upset

Savitri: Kya hua bete aap itni gumsum kyun hai koi pareshani hai kya?

Geet: Nahi tho aisi koi bhi baat nahi hai.

Savitri: Geet aap jhooth bolne ki nakamiyaab koshish kyun kar rahi hai. Agar aap hume batana nahi chahti to keh dijiye hum yaha se chale jaate hai.

Geet:  Nahi maa aisi koi baat nahi hai

Savitri: tho kaisi baat hai bete

Geet: wo actually

Savitri: Bete hum aapki ma se pehle aapki ek achhi saheli hai aap bejijak humse koi bhi baat kar sakti hai. Ab hishkichana chodiye aur kya baat hai wo humhe bata dijiye.

Geet: Wo mumma actually kal show mein maine ek contest announce kiya tha jiske winner ko Yash ke saath ek date pe jaane ka mauka milega. Mujhe pura bharosa tha ke Yash ko mujhse behtar aur koi ladki nahi jaanti magar aaj show ke pehle caller meera ne chutki bajate hi saare sawalo ka jawab de diya aur wo ye contest jeeth gayi. Bus thabhi se pata nahi kyun mera dil baitha ja raha hai. Mumma mujhe to Yash ke liye khush hona chahiye par pata nahi kyun main khush nahi hoon. Aisa kyun hai ma?

Savitri: Bete , humhare khayal se iski 2 wajah ho sakti hai. Pehla to ye ke aap Yash ke liye fikarmand hai ke aapki wajah se unke life mein koi galat person na aa jaaye jo ke future mein unhe kisi bhi tarah ki takleef pouchaane  ka kaaran bane...aur doosara...

Geet: Dusara kya ma

Savitri:  Aur dusara ye bte ke aap Yash ko mann hi mann chahane lagi hai.

Geet: Mumma do u really think ke I love him?

Savitri:  Nahi bte ye aapko decide karna hai. Hum bus yahi salah de sakte hai ke Pyar aur aakarshan (attraction) inme bahut bada antar hota hai. Koi bhi faisla lene se pehle apne aap ko thoda waqt dijiye. Kya pata aapke is problem ka solution kismat khud aapke saamne le aaye.

Geet:  Ji...

Meanwhile, KHURANA MANSION

Maan: (self talk Holding geet's photo) Janti ho geet aaj ek din tumse mulakat nahi ho payi aur aisa lag raha hai jaise aaj ke din kuch bhi acchha hua hi na ho (smiles) Ab kya kare meri zindagi ko tumhari aadat jo ho gayi hai. Meri har subah ki shuruwat tumhari meethi aawaj se hoti hai aur har shaam tumhare pyari si muskurahat dekhkar khatam. Khair aaj tumhari photo se hi kaam chala leta hoon. Kisses the photo. Goodnight geet. Photo ko seene se lagakar maan goes off to sleep with a sweet smile on his face.

 PRECAP 1: YASH MEETS HIS DATE

PRECAP 2: Yash: "Maan tu geet ko apne dil ki baat bata kyun nahi deta"

Edited by piya- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
simply beautiful!!! ðŸ˜Š thanks for the pm! plz update soon!