Kitani Mohabbat Hai - 2

India-Forums

   
Kitani Mohabbat Hai - 2
Kitani Mohabbat Hai - 2

FF-Sleeping with the Enemy Prt18 Pg131(July 22) (Page 47)

-sia- Goldie
-sia-
-sia-

Joined: 30 October 2010
Posts: 1428

Posted: 15 June 2011 at 2:15am | IP Logged
gosh...3 weeks without net was terrible...missed all the new ff's :( :(
this one looks like an interesting one..gotta read it now...  Plz add me to ur PM list :)

lara3110 IF-Rockerz
lara3110
lara3110

Joined: 27 March 2011
Posts: 8170

Posted: 15 June 2011 at 3:09am | IP Logged

That was an awesome piece of work.  The way you described the intensity of emotions between them, is simply fascinating.  Looking forward to your next update, now that Abhi has shown himself, it is going to be interesting how his presence is going to  affect their next move.

Good Luck.
 
Thanks for your PM.
 


Edited by lara3110 - 15 June 2011 at 3:09am
silverleaves Senior Member
silverleaves
silverleaves

Joined: 17 March 2011
Posts: 328

Posted: 15 June 2011 at 3:24am | IP Logged
God,I loved that update so much I read it 3 times!Big smile
First of all, thank you for making the update so long!
And second,I love how many different emotions were shown in this,particularly from arohi!
Her anger and frustration at her dad,I did feel bad for her here
Her anger then lust then confusion in arjun's officeEmbarrassedBig smile
Her protectiveness with the strawberries Hug
Her and arjun reminiscing about their childhood memories,LOVED THIS SCENE,SO SWEET! Day Dreaming
Their conversation about furthering their relationship LOL Well arjun is a guyLOL
"Sleeping with the enemy is not something i plan on ever doing!" Yeah sure! LOL loved that lineBig smile
And then the club scene! It was like 'yes,finally!knew they both had to give in at some point'LOLEmbarrassed
But then abhi came. Confused

And arjun with the happy feeling following the strawberry thing,the uncontrollable lust,the seducingEmbarrassedBig smile

So yeah,i LOVED this update,you wrote it amazingly!

Really love how the story is going! Big smile
please update again soon and with an equally long one!Smile

And looking forward to the RNBDJ update! Can't wait!Smile

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

arta

tanu111a Goldie
tanu111a
tanu111a

Joined: 01 November 2009
Posts: 1442

Posted: 15 June 2011 at 3:30am | IP Logged
Really luvly update.i superluved arohi character in this ff.their hate is developing in luv in such amazing way.plz try to update it early.abhi entrance will make them guilt on their relationship for now as both r attached with abhi so much.abhi matter will help them to make emotional bond btw each other which they r denying not to hav it btw them.update soon plzzz.

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

silverleaves

Anupa28 Goldie
Anupa28
Anupa28

Joined: 07 October 2005
Posts: 2029

Posted: 15 June 2011 at 3:45am | IP Logged
absolutely mind blowing update..could feel every emotions...God Bless...
...Sheher... Goldie
...Sheher...
...Sheher...

Joined: 21 March 2011
Posts: 1547

Posted: 15 June 2011 at 4:45am | IP Logged
awesome !!!!
thanks for the long update :-)
-Nili- Goldie
-Nili-
-Nili-

Joined: 03 February 2011
Posts: 2002

Posted: 15 June 2011 at 4:53am | IP Logged

*claps* 4 dis1 ClapClapClapClap luvd it..Big smile arohi is really a wild cat TongueROFL it vl be interesting to see her falling in love wid arjun EmbarrassedDay Dreaming 

luvd d scene where both of dem recall der childhood seeing der childhood pix Embarrassed absolutely awsome update..Smile
PemaKarpo IF-Dazzler
PemaKarpo
PemaKarpo

Joined: 30 June 2010
Posts: 4267

Posted: 15 June 2011 at 5:07am | IP Logged
I really like your FFTongue Especially your dialouges! They are super goodTongue The chemistry between Arjun and Arohi is almost tangibleApprove Very naughty FF thoughEvil SmileCoolLOL Really looking forward to the next partBig smile

Go to top

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Kitani Mohabbat Hai - 2 Topic Index

  • Please login to check your Last 10 Topics posted

Check these Celebrity also

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index