FF-Sleeping with the Enemy Prt18 Pg131(July 22) - Page 95

amazing as always...  

Amazing!!! Had been waiting for this update forrr sooo longg!!!! Thanxx Raman!! That was awesome...

Cant wait till the Honeymoon update!! Its gonna so HOT!!!!! Loving every bit of it!!! =)

Thanxx!!! =)

raman dat was fabulous...
I loved ur update...so aru s gng to be a maasi n also stsrtng a new business...gd one..
I hope she will succeed in her wrk..as far as arjun s dere wth her..

Okay Di, wow...that  was just too too awesome...

thanks for update
it was awesome
loved it
don't end it soon

  Out of all the other million things I've said to you about your writing, I don't think I've said this well enough: the flow! The care you give each moment that Arjun and Arohi spend with each other is what makes your work so splendid! I think so many of us take your super long updates (I'm realizing this now, that I have also started writing my own FF) for granted. I mean it's so easy to just write a few lines about a moment, and then skip to the next chapter/ part. But you never do that. You give each chapter such flow and consistency, and so many beautiul moments- that it leaves me no choice at the end, but to write a whole mega paragraph worth of appraise!   ;)

Hey Raman!

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Hey Raman!

 

Thank you so much for the update and PM!!

 

Your FF's awesome and I just love the flow! I also love the way you bring in characters with a purpose and once that is met, they are given a logical exit! Superb! Your writing's amazing and I get so engrossed in it that I become oblivious of the world around me! LOL!

 

BTW, aren't Arjun and Arohi supposed to be somewhere in North America? You mentioned Mumbai and Aria in your FF, so wondering if you had confused RNBDJ with SWTE😕 

Anyway, not a big deal!

 

Thank you so much for entertaining us with your lovely writing 😃

Waiting eagerly for your next update 😍

Not a problem at all!! And where they live is not a big deal, WHAT they DO is more important😉🤣

Gr8 update again, as i said b4 you are an amazing writer with fantastic ideas, plz keep writing. I'm really looking forward for the honeymoon chapter. I'm sure you are going to make the update very romantic 😳 you are very gud and u r a rockstar⭐️ take care