I'm always so overwhlemed after reading your work... but I'll still manage to say something. As always great job done. Word choice, details, scenes, all of it! I think this part is really important for the storyline, as the "jealousy mode" will help make room for their unresistable feelings for each other. I can't wait until the next part! Thanks for being so consistent while posting the parts, you are always on it!!
awesome awesome awesome...!!!! luved it especially this line- "You're mine." "And only mine." Unless you file for divorce which I
know you won't." "I won't tolerate any other man touching you."
"Especially not your ex boyfriend." continue soon plz...
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