FF-Sleeping with the Enemy Prt18 Pg131(July 22) - Page 35

loved it...😃

Originally posted by: christmas

loved it!!...

these two are something else...even when they fight they hold such attraction.

the whole going over the pictures as forgetting that they're suppose to be fighting, and the subconscious effort from arohi abt strawberries, all brilliantly done. almost implies that perhaps they werent always enemies as they think...

did feel bad for arohi when she had the conv with her dad after he refused her money. she wasnt technically wrong in her argument to him...

you write brilliantly...

had totally forgotten about abhi...and just when they were on their way to a bit of  truce...

looking forward to what the future holds for the two...

thatz was rlly gud!
pleazz post soon:)

thanks...for the...

gosh...3 weeks without net was terrible...missed all the new ff's :( :(

That was an awesome piece of work.  The way you described the intensity of emotions between them, is simply fascinating.  Looking forward to your next update, now that Abhi has shown himself, it is going to be interesting how his presence is going to  affect their next move.

Edited by lara3110 - 12 years ago

God,I loved that update so much I read it 3 times!😃
First of all, thank you for making the update so long!
And second,I love how many different emotions were shown in this,particularly from arohi!
Her anger and frustration at her dad,I did feel bad for her here
Her anger then lust then confusion in arjun's office😳😃
Her protectiveness with the strawberries 🤗
Her and arjun reminiscing about their childhood memories,LOVED THIS SCENE,SO SWEET! 😍
Their conversation about furthering their relationship 😆 Well arjun is a guy😆
"Sleeping with the enemy is not something i plan on ever doing!" Yeah sure! 😆 loved that line😃
And then the club scene! It was like 'yes,finally!knew they both had to give in at some point'😆😳
But then abhi came. 😕

And arjun with the happy feeling following the strawberry thing,the uncontrollable lust,the seducing😳😃

So yeah,i LOVED this update,you wrote it amazingly!

Really love how the story is going! 😃
please update again soon and with an equally long one!😊

And looking forward to the RNBDJ update! Can't wait!😊

Really luvly update.i superluved arohi character in this ff.their hate is developing in luv in such amazing way.plz try to update it early.abhi entrance will make them guilt on their relationship for now as both r attached with abhi so much.abhi matter will help them to make emotional bond btw each other which they r denying not to hav it btw them.update soon plzzz.

absolutely mind blowing update..could feel every emotions...God Bless...

awesome !!!!