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angelwords Goldie

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 8:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Jass.KN

jaane tu kaha hai Ishu 


angelwords Goldie

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 8:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nishnal

Update kab doge...updatng likha hua hai 3 days se plz jaldi updte do na... Cry Confused

JUST 30-35 MIN MORE...Wink

angelwords Goldie

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 9:32am | IP Logged



"prince prince...prince", i heard her voice

"sweetu kahan  ho tum" i asked her

"princeee..."..i see her going away from me...

i shouted "sweeetttuuu".. i raised my hand to reach her, but she was gone.

i woke up from my dream, i was sweating, same dream from last 10 years is haunting me, i am away, far away from my sweetu but my heart is for her, my heart and soul wished her to be safe..i didn't go home because i was very angry with my dad, i didn't even know where is my sweetu now, how she look?? . i stood up from my bed and reached by wardrobe and took out a paper and hugged it and kept it safe near me heart...this was the most special gift in world.

these ten years were like hell for me, i wanted to reach my sweetu but no light was there to show the way, i asked mom where is rano maa, she told me dad has thrown her out and they left the city. today i am 18, i am waiting for a letter, a letter which is sent by my sweetu every year. once, dadi maa told me that a letter was there in my name, i asked her to open it, she whispered a name "sweetu". she told me it was sent by sweetu to wish me, but no address number nothing.

in this 10 years i wait for this day like anything, i wait for her letter, he cute talk, her wishes which were from heart, i am MAAN SINGH KHURANA for rest of the world, but for my sweetu i am still her prince.. i haven't talked to dad from last ten years, it is not like he didn't try to reach me, but when he wwanted to talk to me, i just cut the call, i know he still say bad about my sweetu, i once heard him saying "pagal ho gaya hain maan, usse gawar ke liya apne pita se muhh pher raha hain, usse lark ne kuch nahi kiya uska liya, but meina , meina usse maan singh khurana banaya". i hate him, just because of him i am not near my sweetu, yes he is true that he made me maan singh khurana, but he lost maan, a quiet innocent maan. i hate that man, but i love my maa and dadi, i know they feel the pain,when i told him, i will never come back..BUT really i don't want to see that man again,but what about my sweetu?? will i ever meet her again.

i quickly freshened up and heard a knock on door, i opened the door and saw sameera there.

he hugged me and kissed me on my cheek

"happy birthday maanu"

"thanks darling"

"so whats the plan?" she said

"anything you wanted"

" for now a treat will be good"

" done, sameera  has the post master came"

"oh gain that mala gapna of post men, akhir usme asi kaun si baat hain"

"nahi dear, usme nahi hain par tume tho hain" and winked

" maan, the post master came" i heard someone say

i left sameera and ran to post master.

i quickly took the letter and hide it

"what happened" sameera asked, while coming towards me

" nothing, actually i will meet you after sometime, i have to call dadi dear" i said

"yup sure maanu"

i reached my room and quickly locked it. i took out the letter and opened it

there was a beautiful writing

i read...


kaise hain app?? happy happy birthday to you, babaji humsha apke saath rahe...prince, pata nahi ap kaise dikhta honga. the key which you gave me is still with me as your possession, now you are 18, big and adult, but i am still 16, i also want to 18 with you, par asa kaise ho sakta hain. you take care of youself na, kisi se fight tho nahi karta(maan nodded negatively).want my prince to be the best. aur ap dieting- sieting maat kariya ga, samjhe, this is not good for health, hain baba i know what you want to ask, i am fine and maa also, take a deep breath and calm down(maan did it excatly) you know prince i topped again, i want my treat( maan asked what) kya? bas apki ki khushi..(maan smiled), be happy always and take care.. dadi maa, maa aur bade shaab se no fight samjhe, (maan made baby face), this baby face will not work, samjhe, aur hain ( maan made face as if saying-what now)batati huin, gusse ko control kariya ga..

chaliya, happy birthday again

hume yaad rahiya ga , next year bhi

apki sweetu

how can i forgot her, she is my sweetu,

he saw the last line and smiled

hain pata hain, you will never forget me, but warn karne mein kya jata hain...bye

(meina sunna 18 hota he, boys drink, don't  you dare, varna i will not write the letter)

maan quickly nodded negatively and made baby face, because he was actually planning for it...

"ye sweetu bhi na, achi tareka se jaanti hain mujhe", he made a baby face, but can't ignore the request of his sweetu. he again made baby face..


next- pg 118


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Edited by ishanidhi08 - 03 September 2012 at 9:52am

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awesomepooja IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 9:52am | IP Logged
Fantastic part isha..
Maan n sameera r frnz or lovers.

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pari1689 Goldie

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 9:56am | IP Logged
lovely update...

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nishnal Senior Member

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 9:57am | IP Logged
Its too gud ya...lovd also aftr 10 long yearz he still misses his sweetu so much...the lttr part was out of the world awesme...mindblowng...plz update nxt part soon ya waitng... Smile Wink

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monika1992 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 9:59am | IP Logged
Awesome...plz Sweetu aur Prince ko mila do

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ritzy09 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 10:09am | IP Logged
oh so cute...loved Sweetu's letter and Maan's sweet
but SameeraAngry...why is she there...hata saawn ki ghata ...please

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