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nehakapoor7 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 3:32am | IP Logged
waiting for update

jssood IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 3:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ishanidhi08

guesss what...?????

kayaa dear aaj koii 1st April to nahii hai naa????

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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 4:37am | IP Logged

where is the update...


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angelwords Goldie

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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 4:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jssood

Originally posted by ishanidhi08

guesss what...?????

kayaa dear aaj koii 1st April to nahii hai naa????

hmm..let me check, nahi tho aj nahi hain 1st april WinkEmbarrassedLOL
par kyun??Wink

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angelwords Goldie

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Next day

maan woke up, he dressed himself for school, and ran downward for breakfast.

dadi and pammy was shocked, they accepted opposite reaction from him, while raj was giving a smirk that he won

raj- you see maa, that girl is nothing for him, after all he is my son

dadi and pammy was silent, was not able to understand maan's  behavior, maan came running to breakfast table

maan ' good morning all

raj , dadi and pammy wished them to..

vicky also came and wished all

vicky- yesterday's party was so good,  but i wanted to see geet's gift, bro what was her gift

raj gave an angry glare to vicky for reminding maan of that stupid girl

maan suddenly stop eating and yesterday's event came to his mind, a tear escape from his eyes

maan gave  angry glare to raj and said

maan- dad why you talked to my sweetu like that, i hate you dad

raj- this is the way to talk to your father maan, i know its because of that stupid girl..

maan- she is sweetu, my sweetu that

and reached dadi and said

maan- dadi you told me once that god made a friend for everyone, for me also, who will be specail..i know its sweetu, than is dad stopping  me to meet dad?? geet will come  na dadi??

raj- maan that friend is sameera , he is also a girl, rich, well mannered, than what's the problem? forget that stupid girl??

maan shouted

maan- no no no, that stupid sameera is nt my friend..she can never take my sweetu's place, please dad i want sweetu

raj- this boy is impossible, listen for the last time maan, forget that stupid girl, and you are not meeting her, if you will do it than i will send you to hostel, remember

and went away

maan ran to pammy and hugged her

maan cried

maan- mom*sob**sob* i wannnttt*sob* *sob* sweetu plz...she will come nah?

pammy was totally blank, maan ran to his room and locked it

pammy and dadi stood helpless, they can't understand what to do..

its 2 hrs..

maan didn't came out of the room..

pammy and dadi was hell worried...

they knocked his door

dadi- maan beta please open the door]

pammy- maan plz open the door

dadi- maan i promise , i will help you to meet your sweetu, you want your sweetu na?

the clicked, maan opened the door..dadi and pammy saw him..

all pale, and eyes were red due to crying,

maan- dadi sachi you will

dadi- haan beta i will

and touched his forehead

dadi- maan apko tho fever hain

pammy- kya

she also touched his forehead ,it was burning...

and made him lie on bed and called doctor, doctor gave injection and he slept

pammy- bas maa, i will not let him to destroy my child's happiness, i was tolerating because i didn't want any stress in house, but this is too much

dadi- i know beta, but it will lead to nothing, i know agar essa  huin , then he will send maan far away from us from geet, i know what he wanted maan to be, he wanted maan to be his copy in every case, but it will not happen, their friendship is pure and will last forever...

pammy- what should we do?

dadi- geet ko maan se milvana pare ga, ek vahi hain jo maan ko samjhe sakti hain

pammy- yes, you are rite maa

dadi laughed

dadi- how ironic na, that 5 year old girl can handle him all alone, its magic, god's magic..

pammy also smiled

dadi- ok listen to me now...

they continue making plan...


maan woke up, fever was down, but he was like a lifeless soul, something if you think over something you will feel how can that happen?, in such a short period of time, they had unbreakable bond, they understand each other, that thousand of mature people can't do, they have something special in their friendship that cannot be understood ,pammy came inside with soup for maan, she sat beside him, she saw same old maan, how remain alone ,sad..she softly said

pammy- beta ye soup pilo?

maan ' sweetu ayi?

pammy- beta she will come, you drink it

maan- nahi first sweetu

pammy- beta please, for us, for sweetu

maan started drinking it and finished half

pammy one more spoon near his mouth

maan- nahi ,ab i will drink when sweetu will come

and sat as an arrogant child

their was a knock on door, maan thought it was geet, he saw sameera their

sam- maan i heard you were not well, namesta aunty

pammy- namesta beta

and went away

sam came near maan

sam- i was so worried for you, how is you now?

maan- fine, thanxx

sam- no need to thanx, friendship me no sorry , no thank you

maan was least interested in her talk

sam- maan you know you are my first friend, the girl that surround me are for name sake, they are their because i give them expensive gift, but you were the first person who didn't look that who is my father, what gift i gave you, sorry i know you find me chipku type, but i am not, voh actually you were my first friend so i get excited..and that gift truly saying it was given by mom, she said to me to say it...

and laughed

maan also smiled

sam- so friends? i will not do that things again so chill

maan- i thought we already were friend

they shake their hand..and smiled to each other...


next- will maan- sameera friendship will have an effect on geet- maan's friendship?

          will geet importance will be less? will maan slowly forgot geet? 

         will dadi maa successes  in making maan and geet meet??


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waiting for big big comments...

want double update- fill till page 99


 note- plz can anyone make a banner for this story???Smile




Edited by ishanidhi08 - 28 August 2012 at 5:07am

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tamanna1391 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 4:50am | IP Logged
realy hate raj dadi pammi planning for maneet sameera is not bad i think this friendship will effect maneet

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mandy15 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 5:12am | IP Logged
awesome updtae dear:)

plzzz yaar dont make their friendship to suffer ... i want  to see maan  always crazy for sweetu..:)

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punam2712 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 August 2012 at 5:53am | IP Logged

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