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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 August 2012 at 5:10am | IP Logged

where is the update Isha...

there is some problem with button not working sorry...

tamanna1391 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 13 August 2012 at 5:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ishanidhi08

tonight update...Big smile
will be waiting
angelwords Goldie

Joined: 13 November 2010
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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 1:33am | IP Logged


THE  party was at its full swing, the elders were at one side, while all kiddos was on toher side, so it was easy for dadi maa to handle raj and sweetu problem.

maan came down, dressed  like a handsome buy in his black suit, he was looking dashing, pammy and dadi smiled seeing maan , while raj was proud seeing maan.

all came one by one to wish  maan, but  maan's eyes were waiting for one, off course his sweetu.

maan was gazing the door when he felt, someone poking his shoulder, he thought it to be geet, he quickly turned and saw joker, opss sameera

sam- happy birthday maanu

maan- thanks

and went some other way, but sameera was following him, maan was totally irritated, firstly because his sweetu hasn't come till now, and lastly because of this joker, sameera

sam- maanu  you look handsome yaar

maan- again thanks

and again went to other direction, when he bumped to vicky

maan- bhai  bacha le joker se

vicky was happy seeing maan talking to him like this

then he saw sameera and understood who is the joker

sam- hey vicky

vicky- hello sameera di

sam- what di? i dont look that old, call me sam

vicky- ok sam

sam- thats like my boy

vicky- my boy, she paaka need a docter, bro was right joker

and started smiling

sam- where is your bro?

than vicky saw maan hiding behind the pillar and requesting him to do something

vicky- bhai has gone to meet my bari dadi

sam- ok(sadly)

and she went away with her friends

maan- thanks yaar

vicky- i can understand bro

vicky and maan- joker

and both saw each other and started laughing

dadi and pammy to see their relationship growing, they thanked babaji


rano  and geet entered the mansion from back, rano went to help nakul and others

while geet went to maan's room and kept his gift

and cutely prayed

geet- babaji please please prince ko mera gift acha laga, please baba ji

and went downstair

she saw dadi maa and pammy, she went to them

dadi- geet beta you came

geet nodded and stood their

dadi- beta you want to say something

geet nodded and cutely said

geet- dadi can i talkto prince today, please, i want to wish him

pammy and dadi smiled

dadi- yes

geet was happy gain, and call dadi near her, dadi bent and she kissed her cheeks and went away

dadi- pagli


geet was searching for maan, but he was not there, she bumped to sameera accidently

sam- hey you, cant you see

geet- i am sorry

sam- its ok, go away

geet- hmm

and went away

geet saw maan with vicky, he was laughing with him, she was happy

she reached them, maan and vicky were lost in their world and failed to see geet

she reached them

and said softly

geet- prince..

maan and vicky saw the source, and became happy

maan came forward and hugged her

 and kissed her cheek , geet too kissed his cheek

geet- happy bday prince

maan smiled and

maan- thanks sweetu

vicky was sliently watching them, he also wanted to talk to geet, but scared of maan

geet  asked maan cutely

geet- prince can i talk to vicky pleease

maan- ok

geet and vicky  was happy

vicky- came forward

vicky- hello geet

geet- hello bhaiya

maan dont know why but liked that and vicky was over happy, because he didn't have any sister

vicky- bro what happend

geet- kya huin prince

maan- why are you late sweetu, i was waiting for you

geet cutely

geet- sorry price, i was preparing you gift, thats why i was late, sorry

maan- than where is my gift

geet- you will get it

maan- when?

geet- soon

meanwhile sameera came back and saw maan, vicky and that girl together

she reached there

sam- maanu, what are you doing here with these kid?? come join us

maan was again irritated

maan(thought)-koi aur kaam nahi hain, always behind me

and saw vicky for help

vicky- dee voh kya hain nah, he wanted to spend some time with us

maan was shocked , how easily he said, what he was dieing to say, but sam is sam

sam- baad mein, abhi chalo, we all are waiting

maan  was pulled my sameera  and maan whole-heartedly went, with the thought of killing sam

he was standing with his so called friends

he saw vicky and geet laughing and enjoying, he also wanted to join them, then he saw dadi, he aksed for help

dadi- kids, go and have refreshments

all the kids went, and dadi  winked him, he smiled and ran to vicky and geet

maan- sweetu, what are you doing

geet- vicky was acting like you, so i was laughing

she said innocently , while maan smiled with her confession and gave a glare to vicky

vicky was sweating

dadi made an announcement

dadi- lets cut the cake


next- *    geet's  gift

         maan want to make geet eat cake , but raj?

         sameera showing off?? anything new?

hope you like it

waiting  for replies

next part on pg-74

do comment and hit like button

waiting for your big comments..






Edited by ishanidhi08 - 14 August 2012 at 1:37am

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pari1689 Goldie

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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 1:44am | IP Logged
lovely update...
sam to maan ke piche hi pad gyi.

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Sonia.KN IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 15197

Posted: 14 August 2012 at 1:54am | IP Logged
It seems this party is for adults. All kids r behaving more then their age.Just Geet seems innocent and without any jealousy in her.But the physiological side of this is true these things happen in kids too.Lov war jealousy and u did justice with it.When u gonna bring them up Big smile.Wanna see Great MSK over possessive Big smile 

Loved it 


Jass Nagra

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jssood IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 4690

Posted: 14 August 2012 at 1:57am | IP Logged
thanx for pm
love prince and sweeto bounding

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KasiKasi IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 3930

Posted: 14 August 2012 at 2:02am | IP Logged

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Remya_Pillai IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 14935

Posted: 14 August 2012 at 2:25am | IP Logged
Lovely part...
Loved the growing bond b/w vicky and maan...
sam s hell irritating..

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