SS-JAANE TU KAHAN HAIN-THREAD 1(NOTE-PG131) - Page 4

Posted: 12 years ago
awesum start..
but maan's father s such a khamand person..
excited for the meeting of 2 li'l kids..
Posted: 12 years ago
loved it 😊
pls add me in your buddy list
Posted: 12 years ago
MAAN WILL FINALLY GET A PLAYMATE, BUT HIS FATHER WILL THROW A FIT
Posted: 12 years ago
awesome...
 
raj is so disgusting...
 
ohh so geet is going to be maan's near & dear friend...
 
lovely...
 
continue soon...
Posted: 12 years ago
awsum update
eagerly w8in 4 da nxt update 
plzz cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey isha,
intresting itro
pls add me to pm
Posted: 12 years ago
intersting ss
awesome update
continue soon
thanks for the pm
Posted: 12 years ago

                                              PART-2

                                                  chawl

rano  panacking

rano-  kal geet ko bari haveli le jana hain!!

rano- bagwaan kare...meri  geet unha achi laga...ye naukari bahut zaruri hain..mera lliye!!

geet came crying

geet(sob)- mummy ..muuummmy!!!

rano- kya huin meri pari ko??

geet- mummy..mummy..koi  geet  ke saath nahi khelta!!

geet- geet ko sab chirata hain...mummy god ji na mera liye koi friend kyun nahi baja??

rano- nahi geet...bagwaan nee apke liya bhi ek friend jarur baja hoga!!

rano wiped her tear...and made her sit on the lap

rano- bas voh right time ke wait kar rahe hain...apke friend ko baje na ka!1

said with the smile

geet- voh time kab ayaga mummy??

rano- voh tho bagwaan ko hi pata hain..ap unse pray karo ki voh usse jaldi baje..apke saath khel na ke liye!!

geet- kya bagwaan ji meri baat suna ga!

rano-  hain beta..dil se mano gi..tho kyun nahi suna ga...vaise bhi geet unki pyari se beti hain na!!

geet  quckily ran to a small puja

geet- babaji..mein geet huin...mummy ne bola ki agar mein apse dil se mangu..tho ap mera friend ko bhej denga

geet- babagi plzz na mera friend ko jaldi se baje do na!!..mujhe uske saath khelna hain!!!

geet- plzz..baba ji!!

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                                in haveli

maan- dadi maaa

maan- dadi maa

dadi maa came running to maa

she saw maan very very sad

dadi maa- kya huin maan..ap etna udass kyun hain??

maan- dadi maa..apne kaha tha ki meri dost bahut jaldi aya gi..par voh tho abhi tak nahi ayai!!

dadi maa- beta..agagi..babaji ne sahi waqt socha hain uske anna ke...tab tak u hav to wait!!

maan- acha thik hain dadi maa!!

he left whole heartdely!!

dadi maa never seen maan very happy..but can be done his father is so rude!!

dadi maa- baba ji..maan ki dost ko baje digaiye!!

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                                     next moring

rano pancking

rano- geet beta jaldi se tyaar ho ga!!

rano took out best cothes for geet

rano and geet was ready to go to haveli

rano- geet beta..ap humari haar baat manti hain na??

geet- ji maa

rano- beta aj hum jahan ja raha hain...vahan bahut bare log rahata hain

geet- pariyun ki kahaniyo jaise??(fairy tale type??)

rano similed- hain geet...voh log jo bhi tum se pucha ...acha se answer dena!!

geet- ji mummy!!

rano- aur sir nicha kar ke answer dena!!

geet- gi!!

finally thay reached haveli

 

maan was sitting on  the stairs in the hall...

thinking ki aj uski dost ayagi

(isha says- dont worry maan...dekho voh agayi!!)

 here rano and geet entered haveli

raj was already out to office

servant- kya kaam hain

rano- voh bari madam ji ne bulaya tha!!

servant- ruko...mein puch kar ata huin

servant to ask dadi maa

 while they were standing

 

maan gaze reached at the door

he saw geet and thought

maan- kahin ye voh tho nahi..meri dost??

maan quckily ran towards her with a smile

...

rano was staning little away from geet

maan- tum kaun ho??

geet was little scared

(isha say- geet dont be scared..dekho tumhare friend agaya)

geet- mein geet huin..ap kaun hain??

maan- mein eis haveli mein rahata huin...mera naam maan hain!!!

geet with 'o' expression

geet- ap enta bari haveli mein rahata hain??

maan- hain

with a proud

maan- tum mujhe ap ap kar ke kyun bula rahi ho??

geet- maa..na bola  ki bare logo se sir guka ke...izzat se baat kar ta hain!!

maan- thik hain..par mujhe ye ap ap nahi pasand

geet- tho mein apko kya bulauin??

maan- ruko mein soch tha huin!!

geet- kya mein apko prince bulauin??

maan- acha hain...but prince kaise??

geet- ap etni baari haveli mein rahata hain...just like fairy tale ke prince ki tarah!!

maan- hehehehe

maan- thik hain...mein tumha kya bulauin!!

maan- sweetu??

geet- bahut acha hain!!

jumping happily!!

maan- can we be friends??

geet- voh kya hota hain??

maan- uske matalb hota hain...kya hum dost ban jaye??

geet ' hain!!!

finally their friendship start...but they dont know that their pure friendship had to go under hardships!!!MANY HARDSHIP are waiting for them...they had to be very strong to stand against this world for thier friendship!!!

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part-2 ' finished

part3- (phele i need very long long comment than updates...hehehe)

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thank u all for there sweet comment

isha truly have to say that she is touched by your gesture!!

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sry for the mistake!!...

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Edited by ishanidhi08 - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
love their cute little talks
finally both got their friend
waiting for the next part

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