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Posted: 04 August 2012 at 7:33am | IP Logged


Geet-prince, mom has not eaten anything.

maan- so what, mom you also eat here

rano- son, i have made food, and that will be wasted, if we waste food than god will be angry from us

maan- buut

geet- i promise i will come fast, please prince

maan- ok

geet- thank you prince and started jumping

rano and dadi left and geet kissed maan's cheek

and  maan was again happy.

maan- ok go now, come fast i am waiting

geet- ok, promise

and geet went away

maan was sad again, he lie on bed and closed his eyes, his life was boring without geet, his sweetu. he thought he has to do homework and remembered about sameera.

maan(thought)- that joker dont leave me for a second also, oh god pitty me

and started doing his homework.

he heard a knock, he thought geet was back.

and ran to open the door. but became disappointed when he saw dadi.


dadi- maan beta see who has come to meet you

maan- vicky

dadi- ya maan vicky will be staying with us..

maan smiled and welcomed him to his room, which shocked vicky and he saw towards dadi, dadi was equally suprised.

maan- come vicky.

vicky(thought)- what happened to bro, he never allowed me in his room, and now calling me that to so sweetly, baba ji i am scared now.

vicky entered room and smiled, and saw that room was clean, at this hour

vicky(thought)- ye kya ho raha hain, bro room,clean at this hour..

maan- what happened vicky

vicky- nothing bro

maan- so you are here

vicky- yes, for your birthday, bhai you will be 8. so big

maan- no worry, you will also be one day

maan and vicky heard a payal sound, maan smailed, he know sweetu was back..

geet  entered the room

geet- i am back prince

maan- so finally you came, you took so much time

geet- sorry prince, voh i have to do my homework also

but maan didnt listen

geet- sorry prince

maan in fake anger

geet- sorry prince, i am sorry pleaseh

maan still showing fake anger

geet kissed his cheek and said

geet- sorry nah prince

maan smiled.while they heard a thud sound, they saw towards the source, vicky had fallen

vicky was totally shocked after seeing the scence. he rose up and reached them.


vicky- hey i am vicky, maan's brother

geet smiled

geet- hi am geet, maan's sweetu.

vicky shake hand with geet

vicky – friend

geet- friend

maan didnt  like it, he thought geet to be his only, but he was hating it to share it with is own brother.

geet- prince kya hua?

maan- nothing, with little anger

geet(thought)- fir gussa, uff baba ji etna gussa kyun diya unko, haar samay gussa, babaji bachana apni bachi ko

vicky- lets go and play in garden

geet- ok

maan was hating it he thought geet will only agree to his like and demand

they went to garden and decided to catch catch

vicky was denner

he started running , he thought to catch maan , but was scared

so he started catching geet, geet was running like anything and was enjoying

maan was hating it. suddenly he heard the cry,he saw geet  got hurt and  ran to him

maan- ye kaise huin, in angry tone.

geet- voh mein gir gayi, choti chot hain, i am going to maa

maan- chup bilkul chup

and picked her to his room, vicky tried to help but maan was hell angry and said

maan- stay away from her, she is mine just mine, see because of you she got hurt, leave now

vicky started crying, geet felt bad for vicky

geet- prince clam down

he gave her to angry glare, vicky left still crying

maan took geet to his room and called everyone, he shout in top his voice, every one ran to his room.


hope you like it

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one more part coming...

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Edited by ishanidhi08 - 04 August 2012 at 7:37am

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Remya_Pillai IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 23 December 2010
Posts: 14935

Posted: 04 August 2012 at 7:49am | IP Logged
omg!such a possessive maan..
loved geet's cribbings to babaji...
cute update..

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tamanna1391 IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 17 March 2011
Posts: 25163

Posted: 04 August 2012 at 7:52am | IP Logged
geet vicky friendship maan jealous geet got hurt now maan angry

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-BlushaLicious- IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 29 June 2010
Posts: 29317

Posted: 04 August 2012 at 8:08am | IP Logged
Awesome Part !! :D !!

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mansi.tripathi Goldie

Joined: 26 April 2011
Posts: 1848

Posted: 04 August 2012 at 8:30am | IP Logged
Awesome update...
maan J
maan shouting on vicky
mysteriousmilli IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 02 April 2010
Posts: 16605

Posted: 04 August 2012 at 8:40am | IP Logged
wonderful update...loved it...
8 years old and so much possessive...ShockedLOL
waiting to know the next...
freya123 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 24 August 2010
Posts: 3746

Posted: 04 August 2012 at 8:52am | IP Logged
beautiful  part
nehakapoor7 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 08 February 2011
Posts: 7975

Posted: 04 August 2012 at 9:00am | IP Logged
lovly update,...

thanks a lot.. u updated this FF.. i was egarly waiting for it.. just loved this little possessive Maan.. & angel Geet & cute Vicky..

update soon

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