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SS-JAANE TU KAHAN HAIN-THREAD 1(NOTE-PG131) (Page 27)

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Posted: 03 May 2012 at 12:09am | IP Logged
Its really awesome dear.
Loved this possessive maan. 

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Posted: 03 May 2012 at 2:40am | IP Logged
awesome update
loved it
add me in ur pm list...

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Posted: 09 May 2012 at 8:56am | IP Logged
Pls update soon dear...
Waiting...

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Posted: 12 May 2012 at 10:01am | IP Logged
oh oh...sweetu in trouble...

continue soon...

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Posted: 17 May 2012 at 1:40am | IP Logged

 

PART-10

 

 

 

she tried to talk to him..but he came and kissed the same place where that boy that touch her and went away..

maan was not listining to her...

maan(thought)-how dare he talk to my sweetu..she is my..and on top of that touched her ..i hate him..if he come in front of him again i will kill him..and she was smiling..babaji i will not talk to her...and i will not let her leave now...

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GEET ran after him...but he was too quick..he went to his room...and took out his homework and started doing it...

geet slowly peeped in his room and saw him...trying to concentrate on his work...

she slowly slowly took little step towards him..and poked his shoulder...

geet- prince

she said ever so softly...but maan anger was out of control..he was not even noticing her...

geet-prince suno nah...he came to give my copy..we is my school mate..and we are friend..

"friend" made him more voilent..he thought

maan- my sweetu can only be my friend..aur kisi ki nahi...only my and my

maan gave her angry glare and she gave him baby face...

geet- sry prince..

no reaction

geet- prince u know  got very good  for writing 'a' and 'b'..

maan smiled from inside..but still keeping straight face

geet- prince today na...i missed u so so much..

maan was just going to say "me to"..but kept a straight face

geet- came and kissed his cheek...no change..than other cheek still no change...

geet made a puppy face

maan was enjoying the attention..

geet sat on bed to think bout the next trick

and maan was notcing her expression..

maan(thought)-she looks so cute and adorable...

nakul came to geet and said

nakul- geet beta...jao mummy bula rahi hain..apko ghar jaane hain khaana khane...

and that was it..for maan..

maan  stood from his chair..and shouted

maan- sweetu kahin nahi gaye gi...voh yahi rahe gi..samjhe ki nahi ap..

geet was justing going to say- prii...

but in return she got a glare...maan hold her hand  and  made her sit on bed..nd made her eat his lunch...

rano and dadi maa came running...

dadi maa- ye kya ziidd hain maan...aur ap ye kya kar rahe hain..geet ko ghar jaana tha kahana kahne..fir voh a jati

maan- ab geet kahin nahi ja rahi..dekhiya usne kahana bhi kha liya...aur voh mera saath he rahe gi..

dadi maa- zidd mat kariya beta..geet ja ayi mummy ke saath...

geet was not knowing..whom to follow...one way...his prince was angry and other way her elder and his dadi maa is saying something to her

maan hol tightens..

...

what will geet do now??

geet should follow??

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Edited by ishanidhi08 - 17 May 2012 at 1:42am

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Posted: 17 May 2012 at 1:50am | IP Logged
Flow of emotions in this part is at peak.kids of this age always b much possessive about things which r wery dear to them but what makes them to b more n more possessive.they don know.Lik Maan for him Geet just belong to her.This feeling is not called lov.they r too young but more then that no lust in feelings just eternal not physical.How they gonna mold themselves from friends to lovers hav to wait


Loved very much 


Edited by Jass.KN - 17 May 2012 at 1:57am

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Posted: 17 May 2012 at 2:07am | IP Logged
possessive Maan...poor confuse Geet

i am eagerly waiting t see how Geet manaofy's her prince

awesome update dear




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Posted: 17 May 2012 at 2:12am | IP Logged
awesome update loved it

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