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SS-JAANE TU KAHAN HAIN-THREAD 1(NOTE-PG131) (Page 12)

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Posted: 14 January 2012 at 12:43am | IP Logged

                                                                   PART-4

                      SCENCE- KHURANA CONSTRUCTION

 

Dadi maa- acha tho apka naam geet hain...bahut pyara naam hain apka!!

Geet- sukriya  bari malkin!!1

maan- tum enko bari malkin kun bula rahi ho??...ye tho dadi ma hain!!!

geet- mummy ne bola tha ki...asa he boluin!!

maan- NAHI..mein dadi maa bulata huin tho ...meri sweetu bhi dadi maa bulaya gi!!!

with angry expression

dadi maa and other were getting more and more  suprise with each passing second..

maan  breaking the silence which was prevailed

maan- hain na dadi maa...meri sweetu apko dadi maa bula sakti hain na??

dadi maa(affectionally)- hain kyun nahi...jaise mein apki dadi maa..vaise unki bhi!!1

maan (happily)- suna sweetu...tum bhi dadi maa bula sakti ho..aur tum vahi bulao ji!!

geet- thiek hain prince...jaise tum chaita ho!!

maan- good!!

at this point of time all other present there want to faint..but some how controlled them

dadi maa- geet beta ap kis class mein hain??

geet(cutely)- mein 1st class mein huin dadi maa...mein na abc parna shuru kar diya hain!!

dadi maa smiled at her innocence

dadi maa- acha..very good geet beta!!

maan- akhir voh meri sweetu hain...!!

dad maa and rano finally laughed...

and rano just smiled

dadi maa- acha apki sweetu tho bahut pyari hain...jaiya and apni room dikhaiye apni sweetu ko!!

maan happily- chalo sweetu...

geet seen towards rano for approval...which was not left unnoticed by dadi maa

rano moved her head postively

both maan and geet left!!

dadi maa (st)- bahut pyari bachi hain..aur sanskari bhi..eska alwa mein maan ko  etna khush mein phele baar dekha hain...uski khushi se bare ke mera liya kuch bhi nahi hain...esa liya mujhe agar apna hi beta ke against kara hona para tho mein kar hongi!!

pammy(st)- maan ke janam se le kar ab tak mein usko etna khush nahi dekha...apna  bache ko etna khush dekhna ke liya...meri akhen(eye) taras gayi thi...ab aur nahi..etna saal tak mein maan ko dukhi hi dekha hain...par ab nahi...agar uski khushi uski sweetu ke saath hain tho mein enki frienship ke liya..apna pati ke against kari rahuingi!!

 

dadi maa and pammy..looks towards each other...they know ki wat they have to do!!

dadi maa- rano apko humne kaam par rakh liya hain..kal se kaam par agaiya ga...

rano ' ji!!

dadi maa- geet ke saath...rano beta!!

rano was very happy to hear that ...she had tears in her eyes

rano- gi!!!

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part 4- finished

part 5- maan very posseive and insecure about HIS sweetu!!

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Edited by ishanidhi08 - 14 January 2012 at 12:56am

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loved ur updates dear...:)
they r really awsum...:)
update soon

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brilliant update dear...
loved swetu and prince convo..
continue soon

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part 4
lovely part...
Maan is so possessive of his sweetu...
cont soon...

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                                                      PART-5

                               KHURANA MANSION

 

Maan pulling  geet towards his room

maan- chalo jaldi sweetu...mujhe tumhe apna kamre dikhana  hain!!

geet- hain prince...mujhe bhi tumhare karmra dekhna hain

maan bumped to a man

man- arre maan baba..ye kaun hain?

Maan- nakul kaka ye meri sweetu hain...meri friend!!

Nakul- ohh tho ye apki dost hain sweetu..ap kaise hain sweetu!!

maan- nahi nakul kaka ye sirf meri sweetu hain..ap esa sweetu mat kahiya..apke liya ye geet hain...samjhe ap!!

in posessive tone

nakul- thik hain maan baba...tho geet beta ap kaise hain??

geet- mein  achi huin  ji...aur ap kaka??

nakul- hum bhi...acha ap dono kamre mein jaiya..hum apke liya kuch snacks laate hain!!

maan and geet noded

and they went off

nakul(st)- pheli baar maan baba ko asa dekha..babaji kare enki jodi salamat rahe..chalo nakul beta kaam pe vapas...bare saab ke ana ke time ho gaya hain!!

maan and geet entered  the room

maan quickly ran and switched on the lights...

geet was astonished ...the room was very beautiful and filled with so many toys

maan- kya huin sweetu..asa kya dekh rahi ho??

geet- hum tho apke kamre mein jane vala tha na..tho fir hum yahan kya kar rahe hain??

maan (suprised)- matalb??

geet- arre prince dekho na...ye tho koi toys ki dukaan lag rahi hain!!

with cutest baby face!!

maan laughed loudly!!

maan- oh god sweetu...tum kitni cute ho...ye mera hi kamra hain sweetu!!

geet with 'o' expression

geet- achaa...etna bare kamre aur etna sare toys...ap tho sahi mein prince ho!!

maan- hain meri sweetu...aur hain sweetu ab se ye tumhare bhi toys hain!!

geet- sachi mein??

maan- hain sweetu sachi muchi..par hain sirf hum dono ke toys..samjhe!!

geet- ohhhkkk!!

and they started playing with the toys

three pair eyes were also seeing all this

they were totally shocked

they were none other than dadi maa,pammy and rano

pammy ' dadi maa apne dekha na...

dadi maa- hain dekha..jo maan kal tak apne toys kisi ke saath nahi share karta tha..yahan tak ki vicky kke saath bhi nahi voh..aj...

pammy- dadi maa ek baat tho paki hain geet ki mera maan ko humare pass vapas la sakti hain

dadi maa- sahi kaha apne

hearing dadi maa and pammy convo...rano was totally shell shocked!!

nakul came and served them snacks...

they were eating less and playing more with the snacks...

bichara nakul was the target..his whole uniform was messed up...

and then

rano- bari malkin..ab hume  chalna chaiya...mein kal se auingi!!

dadi maa and pammy seen the time ...and noded as time of raj coming back was there

they all entered the room

maan and geet smiled and them

geet quickly ran to rano and hugged her by her waist

maan done the same as his sweetu

he quickly ran to pammy hugged her

this brought tears in her eyes and even dadi's!!

rano- geet...chalo beta ghar jaane ke time ho gaya ...kal schul bhi hain na!!

this  diverted maan attention to rano and geet

maan( angryly)- nahi meri sweetu  kahi nahi jaye gi...voh mera saath rahe gi!!

dadi maa- maan beta..humari baat suniya...

maan- nahi hume kisi baat nahi sunni...sweetu mera saath rahe gi bas...

and he left the room angryly

geet quckly ran behind him

leaving three people in tension...

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part 5- finished

part 6- will maan let geet leave with rano or raj will see all this??

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so here is another part...i was very happy that u all are liking it...so i cant stop myself form writing one more part,,,,keep liking and commenting..ho sakta hain..u will get one more update.

sorry for mistake

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Edited by ishanidhi08 - 14 January 2012 at 5:30am

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lovely updates

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Fantastic  update...
loved  to see maan and sweetu's  growing bonding...
please update soon...

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