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SS-JAANE TU KAHAN HAIN-THREAD 1(NOTE-PG131) (Page 10)

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Posted: 29 November 2011 at 11:46pm | IP Logged
awesome update
love their cute little talks
finally both got their friend
waiting for the next part

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Posted: 30 November 2011 at 4:31am | IP Logged

cute little story . jaldi update do

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updating...ready for the next!!!
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Edited by ishanidhi08 - 01 December 2011 at 3:50am

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                                                  part 3

                        scence- khurana mansion

maan and geet was very happy...finally they got there friends...whom they were searching..secret they joined their hand...to pray to babji..and giving him big vala thank you!!...in such a way that ther other was not able to see...one talk!!

even baba ji  would be happy to see them...finally his two most wonderful creation ...had got what they wanted...he used  to see that how both from there heart used to ask him...he himself was so over whemled by there gesture that finally he had to fullfill there wish...but he knowed that it was there first step...they had to go way!!

maan and geet was simling

at the same dadi came to the hall with pammy

maan saw them...he wanted to show and thanks his dadi for giving him a friend!!

dadi and pammy was tallking to each other

maan  came running to them

leaving geet there

by seeing maan running in such a way..dadi quickly went to his knee to ask him...she thought must be maan very sad...but what she saw was really shocking...she saw maan similing ...happy infact very happy..like he had never being...now she was curious to ask!!

maan came running to dadi maa..and quickly kissing her cheeks

dadi maa was shocked again

not only dadi maa but also   pammy

on other side  rano was very happy to see the love between both of them

her eyes went in search of geet

geet was little far from her...she quickly signalled her to come close and also to be quite

geet quicly followed the order

dadi  was so shocked that she cant even wait for a sec to ask

dadi- kya huin maan?? ap etna khush kyun hain??

maan was breathing heavingly

maan- daaadiii maaa'

dadi- first just relax

maan finally relax

dadi maa- ab bataiya??

maan- dadi maa..ap thik khate tha..baba  ji ne mera friend ko baje diya

dadi maa was shocked and curious

even rano and pammy

dadi maa- kaun beta

maan signal backwards

dadi raised her head to see...but was shocked to see

dadi maa- there is no one!!

maan also seen at the back with fear and he didnt see her

but as he was turning her head to see dadi maa again he saw that HIS sweetu was standing with her mother

  • dadi maa-kya huin maan??

maan- dadi maa there she is my friend...sweetu

again dadi maa and pammy followed the  hand ...they saw a little girl standing with rano

she was indeed very beautiful and cute

maan- dadi maa...apko humari friend kaise lagi??

maan- sweetu come na...meet My dadi!!

dadi understood that she was rano daughter...but

ya she was in confusion ...if raj came to know about it

she quickly saw towards pammy...who stand still in shock

maan ran to sweetu..to bring her near dadi maa

at the same time rano was  totally shocked!!

where as dadi shaked  pammy

dadi maa( aside)- pammy...pammy!!!

pammy- hain maa!!

dadi maa- ye larki...

pammy- i knw ..ki ap kya kahana chahati hain...yahi ki she is rano's daughter

dadi maa nodded

pammy- par agar enko pata chala tho...ye tho pura ghar sir pe autha langa!!

dadi maa- mujhe pata hain..pammy

but after so many years i have seen maan so happy!!

pammy ' ji par??

dadi maa- kya kiya ja sakta hain...hosakte hain ye babaji ki  wish ho!!

pammy- par  agar??

dadi maa- worry not...mein huin na...i will not allow anyone to come between their frienship!!

to lighten pammy mood ...she said dramatically

dadi maa- when dadi is here why do you fear!!

pammy and dadi giggled!!

where as rano was in a mixed emotion

maan brought geet in front of dadi maa

maan- sweetu ye meri dadi hain

geet nooded with a smile

maan- sweetu tum kuch kyun nahi bol rahi ho??

geet- mummy ne mana kiya hain!!

maan- dont worry sweetu...meri dadi maa hain na voh apki mummy ko apko nahi daath ne dengi!!

maan said proudly!!

dadi maa was amazed that in such a short span of time..there friendship was so strong!!

dadi asked geet

dadi maa- tho apka naam sweetu hain??

geet nooded negatively

maan- arre nahi dadi maa..uska naam geet hain..mein usse sweetu bulata huin...aur voh mujhe prince!!!

now all three..rano , pammy and dadi maa was super duper amazed by there frienship!!!

...

part- 3 ' finished

part 4- geet talking to dadi

          what will dadi do to save their friendship??

...

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will update when ever possible!!

 happy reading...

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Edited by ishanidhi08 - 01 December 2011 at 4:39am

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Posted: 01 December 2011 at 4:56am | IP Logged

love to see both of them happy... sweetu and her prince... what next



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lovly upd...
lov it
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Posted: 01 December 2011 at 5:50am | IP Logged
wow..amazing update.
thx
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awesome part dea
loved it

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