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SS-JAANE TU KAHAN HAIN-THREAD 1(NOTE-PG131) - Page 43

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Posted: 11 years ago
jass- sis, ab bas karo..thank you for this,wil be back with update in an hour..pakka..
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Nice part dear..
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PART-16

maan was holding the knife to cut the cake, all surrounded the table ,while geet and rano stood  at far most ciner,

rano- apne prince ko wish kiya?

geet- yes mom

rano- unke gift?

geet- unke room mein hain..

maan was cutting the cake while all where singing the song, maan feed each one, from dadi maa to vicky, but his eyes was searching for one , his sweetu, he took a cake piece and started walking towards geet, ih his way sameera was also standing, she thought its for her, but maan crossed her

he went near geet  and feed her cake

geet- happy bday prince

maan- thank u sweetu

while sameera was hating it

raj- maa who is that girl??

dadi maa started sweating

dadi maa- she is grand daughter of my old friend

raj- hmm,

and someone called him, he went away, mean while dadi took a breath

the cake was distributed in the gathering

maan- sweetu, why are you sad?

geet- apko pata hain prince, my school is going to picnic

maan- thats good

geet- but i am not going

maan- but kyun?

geet- i dont have that much amount

maan- bas enti si proble, and drag her

maan went to his room, fail to see the gift, open his closet and took out money and a spare key

maan- here take it, and this key also

geet- nahi its not right

maan- what is wrong? see jo tumhare hain, voh mera hain, jo mera hain voh tumhare

geet nodded cutely

two eyes were also seeing this, that was of raj, he went away

sameera reached there

sam- hey maan, tumne tho apne gift dekha he nahi

maan was again irritated

he reached the gift, he opened it and saw a pen

sam- you liked it na, it most expensive pen, i brought it for you

maan-ye kya karta hain

sam- matalb

maan- esma kya special hain

sam- nothing

maan- tho fir esma special kya hain, this also write like other pen

sam was embarrassed

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all guest were gone, rano was also preparing to go

she reached the hall and saw nakul

rano- kaka, geet kahan  hain?

nakul- voh

when she heard

raj- geet kaun?

rano- sahib, meri beti geet

raj- voh yahan par hain

rano-ji

dadi and pammy also came

geet , vicky and maan also reached there

geet- mummy and ran to her

raj saw her

raj- she is your daughter

rano-ji sahib

raj shouted angrily

raj- ye mera ghar mein kya ho raha hain, this lower class girl with vicky and maan

dadi- voh beta she is a friend

raj- maa, people like them do not deserve our frienship,i told you nah, i dont want them near maan, then why the hell she was thier

dadi- beta- she is just a friend like sameera

raj-she can't be sameera, she is just a filthy girl

dadi- shut up raj, i told you, they too are human being, behave

raj- they desreve this only

with all this nosies, geet started  crying

raj- she is not innocent, i saw her taking money from maan,this was the plan of her and her mother

maan- dadi, i gave her money she didnt ask me

dadi- i know beta

raj- listen maan, you will have no talking with this girl, and she is not allowed here

maan- no dad, she is my friend

raj- sameera is your friend, not she

maan- no that joker is not my friend

raj- wow, now he is using filthy language like them..

dadi- chup ho gayiya  raj

raj- nahi, she is not allowed here, agar ye larki eis ghar mein dekhi tho i will fire all, and you will also not bring your daughter here

rano nodded through her tears..

maan- nahi sweetu will not go anywhere

and he held her hand

but to late, raj drag him to his room and looked it

geet was continously crying,she was just crying, she was in very bad state..

and they went away...

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            maan seeing geet's gift

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Edited by ishanidhi08 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh that was vry painful to read . continue soon .
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Posted: 11 years ago
painful update raj bas... hope maneet will not separate



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Posted: 11 years ago
😭😭

hope maaneet will not separate
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Posted: 11 years ago
fantastic updtae dear:)

i hate this raj😡
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maan's papa is such a ... ''@#*&+=)@''...!!!!Edited by ZAHRAN99 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ooopppsss yeh toh total filmy scene hogaya yaar,rich father standing between 2 innocent frnds.poor geet & maan,cant do anything...pls cont soon 2 reveal wats next.
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Posted: 11 years ago
poor geet...😭😭😭...very painful part...
maan's dad😡😡😡
waiting to know the next...