SS-JAANE TU KAHAN HAIN-THREAD 1(NOTE-PG131) - Page 12

Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part ...
 
docontinue soon
Posted: 12 years ago
nice dear
pmme
and sammera entry
itni jaldi
nahiii
Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...πŸ‘πŸ‘
loved it very much...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ β€οΈβ€οΈπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
dis much bond b/w dem whn dey r kids only...im thinking wht will happen whn dey will b young...geet abhi se apni prince ko aise manane lagi...hiii...mein marjavan...
thank u very much fr such a lovely update...πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ
waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
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Posted: 12 years ago

                                                      Part – 7

Khurana mansion

A black BMW entered the house

Followed by another

It stopped at the door of the mansion

Quickly servants came and opened the gate of the car

Here came the owner of the house MR RAJ SINGH KHURANA with his business patner

MR ABHAY CHOPRA..both the man walked towards the door

Another BMW opened there came a lady dressed in evening gown and 7 year old girl dressed in princesses  frock MISS SAMEERA CHOPRA…

All of them entered the KM…

 

In maan's rrom

Dadi maa- maan beta..maan beta

Maan came running while shouting

Maan- aya dadi maaa

Maan came and stood in front of dadi maa

Dadi maa- maan beta ap hums eek promise Karen ga??

Maan-kya dadi maa??

Dadi maa- beta humse ye promise kariya ki ap apne dad ko apki sweetu ke bare mein kuch nahi bataiya ga..!!

Maan-asa kyun dadi maa?? Hum dad ko kyun nahi bata sakte!!

Dadi maa- voh kya hain na beta apke dad ko hum right time pe surprise den ga…

Maan- sachi dadi maa…thiek hain mein dad ko kuch nahi bataunga..yeh na humare secret hoga!! Shshshsshhh…

Dadi maa smiled and said

Dadi maa- hain beta..shshshshssshhh!!

 

 

In the hall of KH

Raj – mr chopra plz make ur self comfortable…!!!!

A servant came and accidentally the water fell on abhay's shirt

A sudden anger came in raj

Servant- I mmm sssrryyy sir..

He was very scared

Raj angrily stanched the tray and thrown it on the floor..breaking it with a loud sound

Servant got hell scared

Dadi maa and pammy came running to the spot

Mrs rani chopra became very angry

Mrs chopra- u low class people…ek kaam bhi nahi kar sakte sahi se…kuch nahi kar sakta tum log!!
raj- u are rite mrs chopra.. these poor people are good for nothing…(to servant) tumhe pata the cost of this shirt is more than ur salary how will u pay it…hain bolo!!

Servant was crying contiously…

Dadi maa was coming before to speak but

Mr chopra came and spoke

Mr chopra- its all rite Mr khurana..accident ho gata hain…he has not planed it…koi baat nahi…(to servant) its ok..agli baar dhayan se kaam karna…thiek hain…(he wiped his tear and hugged him) don't cry…its kk..aga se yaad dhayan se kaam karna..now go and clean the mess!!

Servant- I mmm sssoorrryyy sirr!!

Mr chopra- mein kaha na its kk..jao varna ab mein gussa ho gauin ga(and started laughing)

Servant smiled and went to clean the mess

While all other was shocked

Raj- mr chopra ye apne kya kiya…he had spoiled ur  expensive shirt and u just said him its kk

Mrs chopra- exactly!!

Mr chopra- mr khurana he to is human and human only make mistake…we should forgive them!!

Mr chopra- leave it mr khurana…whr is ur son..wat was his name..ya maan??

Raj – he must be here only…pammy go and call him!!

Pammy- ji!!

Maan came down running

He was very happy(reason u knwπŸ˜‰)

Raj- hera come my son maan

Maan same forward and shocked to see some new face

Maan-dad ye kyun hain??

Raj- beta they are my business partner

Maan- bussseeenesss paaateeneer

Raj and all other laughed

While maan made a baby face( aww…how cute he must be looking at that timeπŸ˜³πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‰)

Raj- maan ye chopra uncle,ye aunty and ye apki new dost sameera

Maan looked towards sameera

Sameera was smiling and smiling and smiling

Maan(st)- ye enta smile kyun kar rahi hain…am I joker..nahi nahi I am not..yahi hogi joker..!!

Maan also smiled back

Raj- jao maan beta sameera ko apna room dekhao

Maan smiled

Maan (st)- eis joker ko mein apna room kyun dekhauin…babaji kahan phasa diya apne!!

They moved towards maan room

 

 

Chawl

Rano and geet entered

Geet was on cloud 9 and was already missing her prince

But was happy ki she will meet him tomm also

Rano- chalo geet jaldi se change karlo..mein kahana batanati huin

Geet like a good child followed all the words said by her mother

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Part – 7     finished

Part -8    "nakul kaka ye kya  bakwass kar rahi hain"πŸ˜²πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰

               "pata nahi maan babu"😲

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HAPPY VALENTINES DAY to all dears

Luv uh all

And luv and miss u maaneett!!

Will update in this week only..!!

Till then happy reading..

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Edited by ishanidhi08 - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
sameera toh ab se maan par fida ho gayi..
luvd chopra's character..
cute part..
Posted: 12 years ago
really sweet story.I read it in few minutes.I really say refreshing.thanx for pm plz update soon 
Posted: 12 years ago
Happy Valentine's Day...

part 7
nice part...
here comes the Sameera kid...
cont soon...
Posted: 12 years ago
awsome
continue soon...

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