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:: Pregnant Gunji Ke Nakhre Epilogue @ 8 :: SG OS (Page 6)

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 7:38pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by SajanRox11

Arrey Waah! Heart Lovely OS dude.. ur FIRST OS is ROCKING!
thank youu so much for the PM!
Super! keep writing more.. and OMGG Heart ed SG scenes!
Hey!! Hug
First of all, let me tell you that I loved your "Arrey Waah!" LOL
Thanks a lot for your lovely comment...glad you liked it!! Embarrassed
Whenever any ideas will struck my mind, I'll surely write it!! Big smile

Originally posted by Joseph_A

Reserved !!Embarrassed 

*Edited* :

Awesome OS...I loved it...simple but so,attractive.ClapTotally  Wonderful piece of work..SaJan sweet n simple conversation is main attraction of this OS...Very-well written Parts...Clap
Both parts were too GoodClap.Thanks for P.M.

-JosephHeart


Hey Joseph!! Hug
Glad you liked my OS...thank you so much!! Embarrassed
Anything related to SaJan is obviously attractive!! Heart
Anyways, thanks once again!! Big smile

Originally posted by SM_317

heyy bidzHug
wow awesomeee part...Embarrassed
sajan were soo adorable..Embarrassed
aawww samrat is such an adorable hubby,,Day Dreaming
gunjan was choo chweett..
beautifully written..Thumbs Up
plzz do write more on sajan..
thanks of d pm
luv
shreya..
Hey Shreya!! Hug
Thanks for your lovely comment!! Embarrassed
Samrat is the ideal hubby and Gunjan is obviously very cute!! Heart
Glad you liked it...thanks once again!! Embarrassed
Will surely write more!! Big smile

Originally posted by preety88

awww sweet update and ending..sajan were really cute
Thanks for your lovely comment preety!! Glad you liked it!! Embarrassed



Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 27 May 2011 at 7:40pm

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 9:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Bidz_cutegal

Originally posted by SajanRox

Res!!!
^Edited^

Hey BidzHug

Yeah! I'm first!!!Party

Congratulations on your new  update!!HugParty I feel like dancing!!Dancing Okay, I am ROFL 

So you finally updated!!Embarrassed!! I was waiting for it!Big smile [Desperate Soul..ROFL]

 You wrote it flawlessly with perfectionClapClap'

I really liked the OS!Big smile Aww'. Shooo cute!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

The way you expressed Gunjan's mood swings was amazing..!!ClapEmbarrassed
 
Samrat and Gunjan came out of the house without changing. That was only because Gunjan was really impatient to eat the ice cream. Samrat opened the door for Gunjan. Gunjan sat inside the car at the front and Samrat sat at the driver seat. He started the car. While driving, Gunjan lovingly rested her head on Samrat's shoulder. Samrat smiled and held Gunjan by her shoulder. 
And Khushi ke asu scene was damn cute...!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
" Woh main yeh soch raha tha ke kuch der pehele tum kitne gusse mein thi aur abhi tumhare aakho mein aasu! Tumhe mood aise swing karenge, I never thought so!"
 
I really loved the line "Biwi hone ka kya advantage hai! Thake huye ghar aao phir biwi sevaa karti hai. Waah! Humari life toh dhanya ho gayi!" Embarrassed 
 
"All of a sudden, Samrat grabbed Gunjan's waist which made her shiver. It's been 1 year of marriage, still when Samrat touched her, she felt butterflies in her tummy. Both shared a cute eye lock" ...!!! How romanticEmbarrassed..!!
 
Aww my poor Samrat had to go to Delhi at midnight!!Ouch 
 
The people at the airport!LOL
Samrat and Gunjan both entered to the airport. Everyone was staring at them like they were watching the 8th wonders of the world. That was to happen. They came in airport wearing their night dresses. Samrat was wearing a red colored t-shirt and a black pajama and Gunjan was wearing a sky blue gown. 
 
But then can Sam get any cuter??Embarrassed
 
Samrat [smilingly and lovingly]- Kisi ne sach hi kaha hai. Jhutha khaane se pyaar barta hai.
Gunjan [blushingly smiled]- Haan! Aur humara pyaar humesha aisa hi rahega.
Saying that, she hugged Samrat. After they broke their hug, they kept eating those 3 ice creams. After 2 were over, they shared a single ice cream and stared at each other lovingly. Their eye lock session went on. <333EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
Hayyye!! I am drooling over this scene...!!!
 
Gunjan brought her mouth near Samrat's ear and said, "Hum dono ke life mein jaldi hi ek farishta aane waala hai jo hum dono ko mummy-papa bulaayega."

Samrat's jaw dropped. After a moment of shock, he smiled broadly. Suddenly, he took Gunjan in his arms, stood up and started twirling around in excitement. 
 
Thanks for the PM!!Smile Even though I read before recieving it!WinkLOL
 
I loved the second part to the core!!! From start to end..ClapClap

Amazingly expressed with cute nok-jhoks between the mood swings!!LOL 

Samrat and Gunjan's love is eternal... There is no end to it..!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
"I hope you all liked it and this could satisfied you all!! Tongue"
 
I am still not satisfied..Ouch I wanted moree...!!!Cry
 
Joking!!ROFL But still if you can manage, then do write a prologue to it!!Embarrassed
 
Thanks a ton for the update...!!!Smile
 
Do write more and more on our love SAJAN!!Blushing
 
I will be waiting for themm...Day Dreaming
 
With love from NivritiHeart
 
P.S:: Bahut zyada lamba hogaya na??Confused
          Sorry!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
         But you asked for it so here is it..!!Embarrassed Ab tumhe bhi aise detailed replies dene honge!Big smile
 
P.P.S:: And thank God mere daar se tumne jaldi update kardiya...!!!ROFLROFL Warna seriously I would have popped out of your computer screen and killed you!!DeadROFLROFL
 
And you rock!!ClapClap Keep writing more and more!!
 
"Mogambo Khush Hua!" is update se!ROFL

Hey my sweet friend and desperate soul Nivi Hug
Jasoosi karogi toh first toh hogi e naa!! LOL
Let me dance with ya!! Oyee Balle Balle!! DancingDancing
You are the desperate soul without doubt!! ROFL
Thanks dear!! Glad you liked it!! Big smile
Loved your detailed comment, seriously!! Embarrassed
Yup!! Sure!! You will get such comments in your writings too!! Big smile
I am glad that I could make Mogambo happy!! LOL
Sure!! I'll write more!! Big smile

Love.. Bidz!! Embarrassed
BidzHug..
I am glad that I could make Mogambo happy!! LOL
Agar itna sweet part dogi to Mogambo to kya Gabar bhi khush hojayega!ROFL
You are the desperate soul without doubt!! ROFL
And you are free to call me 'DS' aka Desperate Soul!Wink
Sure!! I'll write more!! Big smile
I will be waiting...
Yup!! Sure!! You will get such comments in your writings too!! Big smile
Really?? WOW!! Now I will have to update!LOL
Love.. Bidz!! Embarrassed
Love u 2!! 
 
-- Nivriti

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 12:27am | IP Logged
amazinggg dear too gud.
awww... samrat is so sweet .
vryyy nice updt dear.
u rock.
thnxx for  d pm
luv u
vritika

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 5:43am | IP Logged
Awesome os. Loved it a lot. U have written very nicely. Aww...sam took gunjan to delhi in midnight! How sweet! He loves her a lot! Sorry, for late comment. Please, do write more. Add me to ur pm list and do pm me whenever u write. Thanks for pm

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 11:38am | IP Logged
heyyy dear...d 1st part was amzinggg
lovvved it oll
it was funnny 2..lolzzz
cont sooon
n
do pm me wen u update nxt..:)

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 12:00pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ar_sajan4evr

heyyy dear...d 1st part was amzinggg
lovvved it oll
it was funnny 2..lolzzz
cont sooon
n
do pm me wen u update nxt..:)


Thanks!! :)
Second part is on page four!! Will wait for your comment on that!! :)
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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Bidz_cutegal

Originally posted by SajanRox11

Arrey Waah! Heart Lovely OS dude.. ur FIRST OS is ROCKING!
thank youu so much for the PM!
Super! keep writing more.. and OMGG Heart ed SG scenes!
Hey!! Hug
First of all, let me tell you that I loved your "Arrey Waah!" LOL
Thanks a lot for your lovely comment...glad you liked it!! Embarrassed
Whenever any ideas will struck my mind, I'll surely write it!! Big smile
 
Hey !
 
ROFL you like my "Arrey Waah!" ROFL
I always say it when I like stuff!
Do write more!

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 12:42pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by karantakiar

amazinggg dear too gud.
awww... samrat is so sweet .
vryyy nice updt dear.
u rock.
thnxx for  d pm
luv u
vritika


Hey!! Glad you liked it!! Big smile... Thanks a lot!! Embarrassed... Love.. Bidz Hug

Originally posted by gnaneswari

Awesome os. Loved it a lot. U have written very nicely. Aww...sam took gunjan to delhi in midnight! How sweet! He loves her a lot! Sorry, for late comment. Please, do write more. Add me to ur pm list and do pm me whenever u write. Thanks for pm


Thanks a lot for the appreciation dear!! Means a lot to me!! Embarrassed
Hey thats absolutely fine!! Smile Yup sure!! Will PM you whenever I write!! Take care!! Love.. Bidz Hug

Originally posted by Bhawna_arti

Lovly os.


Thanks dear!! Embarrassed



Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 28 May 2011 at 12:42pm

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