Originally posted by: Bidz_cutegal
Have patience, Nivi! Sabar ka fal mitha hota hai! π
Originally posted by: Bidz_cutegal
Have patience, Nivi! Sabar ka fal mitha hota hai! π
Originally posted by: preety88
Wonderful update...gunjan emotional blackmailing samrat was cute...cont soon
Originally posted by: ekta_monaya
OMGGG...!!!!!
Superbbb OS dear...OMG!! I just love it so so so so so much...its FABULOUS...!!Wah! Kya Nakhre the hamari gunjan ke...π π& Beachara Samrat...has to bear all the mood-swings...π€£& Judwaa Bacche??? Andar fighting???...God, Samrat is damn hillarious...π€£ π€£ π€£i cant stop my ROFL's after Reading that...π€£ π€£& God, He's so NAUGHTY too...π³"MAINE JO KARNA THA KARDI"...βΊοΈ& Nupur ka effect to sachme bechari par poora h, By God...!!warna Gunjan & aisi Emotional Black-mailing...?!π& Mango Icecream? Delhi waali???i dunno how will Samrat manage this...π³Sachme Mood-Swings wer so WIERD & DANGEROUS...π³Poor Samrat...π πm really vry eager to read the next part...plzzz cont soon...plzzz...Gosh! i really cant wait for the next part to see wat happens...plzzz update vry vry vry soon...& thnk u sooo much for the PM dear to this wonderful OS...i cant thnk u enuf...π€& plzzz PM me wen u update...plzzz dont forget coz m really vry eager...π³ur a FABULOUS writer...really Mind-blowing...π π πGr88888888 Job dear...ππΌplzzz do cont soon & thnk u so much for the PM...πLuv,Ekta...π€
Originally posted by: SajanRox
Hey Bidz...π€Jaise 'Meri Billi mujhse meow' waise hi meri lines mujhe ko sunarahi hai?π‘π²But what can I do? π³"Intezaarrr Kabtak hum kare bhala??? Tumhe [OS!] pyaar kab tak na kare bhala?? Zindagi Do Pal Ki!!"π€£π³So Please Update by TOMORROW or I'll pop out of your screen and kill you with a knife!π‘πSo gear up your brain cells and write the next part!πLove Nivritiβ€οΈ
Originally posted by: Bidz_cutegal
π€£ π€£ π€£You really made me scared, Nivi! πI have no intention to get myself killed by you! πSo I am updating now! πTumhare darr ne mujhe subha ke 8.55am baje utha hi diya update karne ke liye! π€£
Hey Bidzπ€,
Yeah! I'm first!!!π₯³
Congratulations on your new update!!π€π₯³ I feel like dancing!! Okay, I am πππ€£
So you finally updated!!π³!! I was waiting for it!π [Desperate Soul..π€£]
I really liked the OS!π Aww'. Shooo cute!!π³π³
Amazingly expressed with cute nok-jhoks between the mood swings!!π
Originally posted by: SajanRox
Res!!!
^Edited^Hey Bidzπ€,
Yeah! I'm first!!!π₯³
Congratulations on your new update!!π€π₯³ I feel like dancing!! Okay, I am π€£
So you finally updated!!π³!! I was waiting for it!π [Desperate Soul..π€£]
You wrote it flawlessly with perfectionππ'I really liked the OS!π Aww'. Shooo cute!!π³π³
The way you expressed Gunjan's mood swings was amazing..!!ππ³Samrat and Gunjan came out of the house without changing. That was only because Gunjan was really impatient to eat the ice cream. Samrat opened the door for Gunjan. Gunjan sat inside the car at the front and Samrat sat at the driver seat. He started the car. While driving, Gunjan lovingly rested her head on Samrat's shoulder. Samrat smiled and held Gunjan by her shoulder.And Khushi ke asu scene was damn cute...!!π³π³" Woh main yeh soch raha tha ke kuch der pehele tum kitne gusse mein thi aur abhi tumhare aakho mein aasu! Tumhe mood aise swing karenge, I never thought so!"I really loved the line "Biwi hone ka kya advantage hai! Thake huye ghar aao phir biwi sevaa karti hai. Waah! Humari life toh dhanya ho gayi!" π³"All of a sudden, Samrat grabbed Gunjan's waist which made her shiver. It's been 1 year of marriage, still when Samrat touched her, she felt butterflies in her tummy. Both shared a cute eye lock" ...!!! How romanticπ³..!!Aww my poor Samrat had to go to Delhi at midnight!!The people at the airport!πSamrat and Gunjan both entered to the airport. Everyone was staring at them like they were watching the 8th wonders of the world. That was to happen. They came in airport wearing their night dresses. Samrat was wearing a red colored t-shirt and a black pajama and Gunjan was wearing a sky blue gown.But then can Sam get any cuter??π³Samrat [smilingly and lovingly]- Kisi ne sach hi kaha hai. Jhutha khaane se pyaar barta hai.Gunjan [blushingly smiled]- Haan! Aur humara pyaar humesha aisa hi rahega.Saying that, she hugged Samrat. After they broke their hug, they kept eating those 3 ice creams. After 2 were over, they shared a single ice cream and stared at each other lovingly. Their eye lock session went on. <333π³π³π³Hayyye!! I am drooling over this scene...!!!Gunjan brought her mouth near Samrat's ear and said, "Hum dono ke life mein jaldi hi ek farishta aane waala hai jo hum dono ko mummy-papa bulaayega."Samrat's jaw dropped. After a moment of shock, he smiled broadly. Suddenly, he took Gunjan in his arms, stood up and started twirling around in excitement.Thanks for the PM!!π Even though I read before recieving it!ππI loved the second part to the core!!! From start to end..ππAmazingly expressed with cute nok-jhoks between the mood swings!!π
Samrat and Gunjan's love is eternal... There is no end to it..!!π³π³π³"I hope you all liked it and this could satisfied you all!! π"I am still not satisfied.. I wanted moree...!!!πJoking!!π€£ But still if you can manage, then do write a prologue to it!!π³Thanks a ton for the update...!!!πDo write more and more on our love SAJAN!!βΊοΈI will be waiting for themm...πWith love from Nivritiβ€οΈP.S:: Bahut zyada lamba hogaya na??πSorry!!π³π³But you asked for it so here is it..!!π³ Ab tumhe bhi aise detailed replies dene honge!πP.P.S:: And thank God mere daar se tumne jaldi update kardiya...!!!π€£π€£ Warna seriously I would have popped out of your computer screen and killed you!!π€’π€£π€£And you rock!!ππ Keep writing more and more!!"Mogambo Khush Hua!" is update se!π€£
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