This content was originally posted by: Krishnaluv94I thought you were working on an update? Kya hua tera vada? Voh kasam, voy irada? Yes, I'm in a singing mood today, I don't know why though
Same here. Today we went to Home Depot to return shingles. Shingles?! Anywho, halfway is better than none! 😊 Are we all here or on Shaheda's thread. I'm getting confused.This content was originally posted by: Limerance
Working on being the key words. LolI swear with it being summer and nothing to do my mother makes sure I have more than enough to keep me occupied. Yesterday it was Lowe's and yard work and today it was Best Buy. But good news is I have half of it completed!
This content was originally posted by: arabianpakiOMG!! look I see her! She's here! She's here! ...😆 ..jk
I know what you mean .. my mom's just the same way! With her its more of clean the basement...or the garage! I swear to god there's nothing to clean..its all junk! But nooo we can't throw it away, we have to keep it..or give it to charity! And though the charity people come and collect it themselves, every 2 months, we ALWAYS forget the date! Just now, I made her tea.. and she's like, I believe your done with your school stuff... start cleaning each closest! I told her I have things that dad told me to do😉... so not true! ..and so I'm here ..lol
So back to the point... Can we please get an update in the near future?!
This content was originally posted by: sharmake11dadi damn good with
playing cupidcoffe date super geet tellingmaan what she sees in his eyesmaan really amused with herwonder what happen to piyu motherto loseit sounds like maaneet friendshipbrewing its both of them can soothone another pain & sorrowi hope maan pour out his &secrect hisholding up so his heart lighted upsimply wonderfullove itlooking foward next partdam ur good with suspensekeep up sweetymuahwith bear hugthanks 4 pm
This content was originally posted by: Krishnaluv94Have any of you read WhiteFantasy's My Only Exception or Heartbeats of a Prisoner?
That is true. I've cut down my FF-reading to the best ones.This content was originally posted by: arabianpaki
nope... but then again..I don't read to many FFs.. just a few of them! Otherwise I would be here 24/7...
This content was originally posted by: 6thElementHey Limerance,
Have been meaning to comment, but sorry couldn't get to it earlier.
I'm loving your writing style. Simple and quite detailed. I always feel its the most difficult to keep it simple and still have the audience hooked. And you have already done it. Hats off.
Scene lengths are very crisp and just right. Emotion depiction is great and makes me get into their heads easily.
Piyu is cute...she is the best. (Of course I do love M&G, but the younger one is cuter 😆) After a long time I'm reading a M&G FF (apart from Moksha ofcourse) and its proving to be fresh breath of air in terms of your story telling style. Geet's dilemma, that she was put under, is definitely novel in the FF world. I hope you could do an update with her in the actual crisis.
Great updates Limerance.
Can't wait to find out how you are going to treat the story...
Hasini
I'm truly grateful for your wonderful comment Hasini. It means a lot to know that my work is interesting to you. When I started writing this I wanted to make sure that it was different from what is already out here and at the same time relay-able enough for people to understand. As for my writing style being simple I'm glad that you described it as that because it's exactly what I was going for. Writing is a way for me to get away from all the confusion of life so I like to go in the opposite path and keep things sweet and simple.
All the characters in the FF will have an very important part to play so I'm glad that you like Piyu. She's one of my favorite to write for also. As for Geet's dilemma it will play a very vital role in the FF. The whole process will be slow and the pace of the FF might also seem like that but I hope it holds your interest enough to continue reading.
Once again thanks for the feedback it means a lot and I'm so sorry I couldn't get around to replying back sooner I've just been busy. I hope to see you around and my name is Minal by the way :)
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