MG FF: Quantum of Solace -Thread One- - Page 14

Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by Limerance



Oh movie night, huh? Sounds like fun. Did you not have work today? You usually aren't on around this time. As for the chapter you are ahead of me I have nothing ready! Haha. 


Yes going to watch Ready...Salman the Bad Boy...My entire family is his Fan...
Yes i'm at work, but its not bad today.  I saw you and Krishna thats why I'm around.  Well I had some bits and bite here and there so, hoping once I put that together I should have a decent chapter ready...

Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by Newdime




Yes going to watch Ready...Salman the Bad Boy...My entire family is his Fan...
Yes i'm at work, but its not bad today.  I saw you and Krishna thats why I'm around.  Well I had some bits and bite here and there so, hoping once I put that together I should have a decent chapter ready...


Oh cool I heard Ready is a good movie. And your entire family is an Salman family? That's good no fights then! In my house it's always a war bc some are Salman fans while others like myself are SRK fans. Haha. 
Oh is Krishna on now I didn't know. And I'm sure you will figure the update out soon and will be wonderful like always!
Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update, hanks for the Pm and do continue soon.
Posted: 12 years ago
dadi damn good with
playing cupid
coffe date super geet telling
maan what she sees in his eyes
maan really amused with her
wonder what happen to piyu mother
to lose
it sounds like maaneet friendship
brewing its both of them can sooth
one another pain & sorrow
i hope maan pour out his &secrect  his
holding up so his heart lighted up
simply wonderful
love it
looking foward next part
dam ur good with suspense
keep up sweety
muah
with bear hug
thanks 4 pm
 
Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Limerance,

Have been meaning to comment, but sorry couldn't get to it earlier.
I'm loving your writing style. Simple and quite detailed. I always feel its the most difficult to keep it simple and still have the audience hooked. And you have already done it. Hats off.

Scene lengths are very crisp and just right. Emotion depiction is great and makes me get into their heads easily.
Piyu is cute...she is the best. (Of course I do love M&G, but the younger one is cuter 😆)  After a long time I'm reading a M&G FF (apart from Moksha ofcourse) and its proving to be fresh breath of air in terms of your story telling style. Geet's dilemma, that she was put under, is definitely novel in the FF world. I hope you could do an update with her in the actual crisis.

Great updates Limerance.
Can't wait to find out how you are going to treat the story...
Hasini
Edited by 6thElement - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update...curious to know Maan's past...n also Daadi's antics to bring Maan n Geet together😆
Posted: 12 years ago
Hi minal I just read all 4 parts. Beautiful name u chose for ur ff and lovely story line.
Plz add me to ur pm list. I wud luvvv to read more so do update soon.
Posted: 12 years ago
😃great storyline!!! can't wait for them to get to know each other better. 

love it!! please update soon👏
Posted: 12 years ago
nice FF!! im adding you as my buddy.

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