AnYa FF: Jiya na Jaaye Pt 7 Pg 11 - Page 6

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Part 6

 
Navya picks up the phone and says, 'Anant, tum? Kya hua?' Anant says, 'Kuch nahi, Navya. Main aise hi pouchna chahta tha ke tum theek se pohoch gayi.' Navya is confused and says, 'Tum neeche tak chodkar gaye, Anant. Main neeche se upar toh aa hi sakti houn.' Anant hits his hand on his forehead and says, 'Navya, tumhara ajeeb hai. Jab bolna hoga tab kuch nahi bologi aur jab bas sunna chahiye toh sawaal karogi.' Navya smiles resting her head against the wall and closes her eyes enjoying Anant's voice. They both are silent for a while and just feel tranquil in the moment. Navya opens her eyes and says, 'Anant... Bohot raat ho gayi hai. Tum so jao.' Anant says, 'Neend kaha aati hai aaj kal.' He closes his eyes thinking that he should not have said that when Navya asks, 'Kyun? Tumhari tabiyat theek nahi hai?' Anant smiles at her innocence and says, 'Aisi baat nahi hai. Bas yun hi.' Navya says, 'Maa kehti hai ke raat ko garam doodh peekar sone se acchi neend aati hai.' Anant asks, 'Tum peeti ho?' Navya says hmm and there is a smile in her tone. Anant feels elated listening to her and says, 'Thanks for the idea, Navya. Ab tum so jao, doodh peekar.' They both put the phone very reluctantly. Anant goes over the conversation and gets out of his room in high spirits to go in to the kitchen.
 

Anant reaches the kitchen and prepares milk for himself with a light smile on his face. He goes in to the hall looking at his glass when he looks up to see his elder brother looking at him. Manoj says, 'Anant, tum, Anant Vajpayee dudh pee rahe ho?' Anant is embarrassed and does not say anything. He goes and sits next to Manoj unable to meet his eyes. He just quietly starts to sip the milk but is unhappy doing so. Manoj says, 'Kiski baat sunkar yeh kar rahe ho?' Anant is still looking down and Manoj continues, 'Bohot khaas hogi ke jo ladke ne apni maa ka kaha nahi maana woh uski baat sun raha hai.' Anant is shocked and looks up saying, 'Bhaiyya... aisa...' Manoj smiles sadly and says, 'Anant, tujhe kya lagta hai ke maine college mein kuch nahi dekha? Duniya dekhi hai maine aur tujhe bhi dekh raha houn. Jo ladayi tu mann hi mann larh raha hai uska nateeja janta hai na?' Anant is taken aback by his brother's direct approach and says, 'Kya?' Manoj places his hand on Anant's shoulder and says, 'Haar mere bhai, haar. Do pal chhup kar baat, kuch lamhon ki mulaqaat se zindagi aage nahi barhti. Tum waqt chura rahe ho lekin tumhe yeh waqt ko haasil karna hai, Anant.' Anant is able to get his brother's signal but wants to be sure and says, 'Bhaiyya, main baba ka virodh...?'

 
Manoj looks at Anant and says, 'Virodh aur apni baat samjhane mein fark hai, Anant.' Anant asks, 'Par bhaiyya, aapne toh khud Baba ki marzi se shaadi ki. Kya aap khush...' Anant sees the answer in his brother eyes and realises the truth. Anant says, 'Matlab aapki poori zindagi...?' At that moment, Rama comes in and says, 'Ka debhar jee? Itni raat gaye ka baatein chal rahi hai? Aur aap bhi jee, abhi bhi kitabein? Kauna farak nahi parhne wala. Aapki zindagi aisi hi rahegi.' Manoj looks back at Anant with a sad expression and then leaves with Rama. Anant goes over his words and thinks, 'Main bhaiyya jaise ho jaouga? Unhonein Baba aur Papa ki baat maan toh li lekin aaj woh nakhush hai. Bohot nakhush. Main aisa kaise hone doun?' He breaks out of his thoughts and finds that he has finished the milk. He smiles at the glass and says, 'Kya kya karvaogi mujhse, Navya? Tumhari har baat manne ka dil karta hai. Tumhare bina kaise rahouga? Hamari kahani itni toh nahi ho sakti na?' He goes over their moments together and smiles at the proximity they shared at the picnic. He thinks, 'Sacchai se muh nahi morha jaata, Navya aur usoolon ko kabhi kabhi badalna parhta hai. Yeh baat maine samhji hai aur sab samjhege.' He looks on with a determination in his eyes.
 

Navya is gaping at Anant in shock and he says, 'Bhoot kaha hai, Navya? Aise kyun dekh rahi ho?' Navya is struggling to find words and says, 'Anant... Yeh... Mmain?' Anant rolls his eyes and says, 'Haan Navya, tum! Zindagi mein kabhi kabhi barhe kadam uthane parhte hai aur agar tum apni behen ke liye nahi kar paayi toh khud ke liye toh kabhi nahi kar paogi.' Navya is confused with his statement and says, 'Lekin mujhe khade hone ki kya zaroorat hai?' Anant says, 'Main keh raha houn, iss liye. Is that a good reason?' Navya does not say anything and Anant smiles. Navya is surprised and says, 'Tum muskura kyun rahe ho?' Anant sits next to her and says, 'Bataoun?' Navya nods and Anant says, 'Manzil jab dhundhli ho toh dil mein darr aur uncertainty rehti hai. Ek baar manzil saaf nazar aaye toh darr kaisa, Navya?' Navya is looking down and asks, 'Toh tumhe manzil dikh gayi?' Anant is looking at her endearingly and gently says, 'Dekh toh raha houn.' Navya's head snaps to look at him when he quickly turns his head towards his car and says, 'Meri car. Jis mein tumhe mere saath chalna hai.' Navya starts to hesitate when Anant stands up and puts his hand out. He says, 'Main tumhare saath houn, Navya. Ab bhi darr lag raha hai.' She looks at his face and sees her fear ebbing away. She takes his hand and walks to the car thinking, 'Mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai ke meri zindagi ki daud mere haath mein nahi hai. Yeh Anant kya kar raha hai?'

Edited by eternal_maaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...fantastic...loved each bit...and the final..."Main tumhare saath houn, Navya. Ab bhi darr lag raha hai."..i want to see that in the show too yaar...i really think the cv's should take tips from u too...this is awesome...
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Posted: 12 years ago
I love the way how you write.. Beautifully written :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow , I don't  have enough words to express how brilliant this update is. I am craving for each and every scene and dialogue to happen in real in the serial.Can't point out my favourite  scene/dialogue as all are best . simply awesome update. You have great ideas and you put them into words so nicely. 👏 waiting eagerly for the next part now...just can't wait 😊