Chaand Chupa Badal Mein


Chaand Chupa Badal Mein
Chaand Chupa Badal Mein

ff: The promise of love(chapters 50,51,52) (Page 78)

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Posted: 06 July 2011 at 11:42am | IP Logged
Amazing dear!!! Wht a chapter !!! Really so damn romantic!!! Thanks for a wonderful fest!!!

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Posted: 06 July 2011 at 12:15pm | IP Logged
so romantic and cute update dear.Blushing...loved itHug...update soon
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Posted: 06 July 2011 at 12:55pm | IP Logged


The next day early morning nivi got a call from viren.. "kal
raath ki baath yaad hai na…??"

"kaunsi…??" asked nivi in an innocent tone..

"so you don't remember..well then i will ask dadi permission
to take you out.."

"pehle pooch lo..phir sochoongi…"

Viren went straight to dadi and asked whether he could take
nivi out as he wanted to show her something..viren asked it so innocently that
dadi couldn't say no..

Nivi didn't know of it until dadi asked her to get ready
as viren will be here any moment..

Nivi was so happy that dadi gav her permission and she was
not at all surprised as viren could do anything..

Nivi wore a light pink salwar suit..a shade lighter than

She looked at the mirror and she took her time to get
dressed as she wanted to be at her best..

Finally she said bye to dadi and came out..

Nivi saw viren waiting for her..but this time on his

Viren looked dashing as ever..

He asked nivi to sit behind nivi was about to sit
viren said.. "sambhalkar baitna..tum vo pehli ladki ho jo viren sood ke bike ke
peeche bait rahi I'm not used to riding the bike with a girl behind
me..u just be careful.."

"I would say you better be pehli bike hai
jiske peeche niveditha sharma bait rahi I'm not used to this..tum zara
sambhalke chalana.." said nivi with a cheeky grin on her face..

Viren loved niviz answer..he started the bike while nivi
asked.. "where are we going..??"

"you will know soon…"

During the bike ride nivi decided that viren was a rash
driver..he used to take quick turns..halt suddenly.. and sometimes drove at a
much too high speed..and every time viren did something lik that nivi held on
to viren as if her life depended on it..

finally nivi said.. "if this is how you ride with someone
behind you..then cant think of wat you will do wen u drive alone.."

"wen I'm alone none of this happens..becoz there wont be
you behind me to hold me tight.."

Nivi couldn't believe that viren purposely did it..and she
made an annoyed face..

finally viren stopped the bike and said "welcome to our

Nivi knew the soods had a farmhouse just outside
shimla..but nivi had no idea that viren was taking her here..

Viren led nivi inside and took her to a room and asked her
to wait..

Nivi smiled and nodded..

She looked around the room and saw a packet on the bed
with a red rose and a card on top saying.. "if you don't mind..i would love to
see you in this.."

Nivi opened the packet to find a red party gown..elegant
and rich..nivi loved it instantly..

Nivi had never thought of wearing a gown..but she wanted to wear it today..just
because viren wanted her to..

Nivi changed and looked at the mirror making sure everything
was perfect..

The packet also had a pair of earrings and two
bangles..but nothing for the first nivi thought that viren might have
missed it.. but then again viren was sharp that nothing could be missed by
him..she was thinking that mayb viren doesn't want her to wear a she
removed the one she was already wearing..thatz wen nivi hear the flute being

Nivi couldn't stop herself.. she began to walk towards the

When she opened the door she found that viren had made a path
scattered with rose petals and nivi knew that this was the path to be taken..

Nivi went out and into the lawn..there was a flight of
steps leading to the lawn..

Nivi slowly raised the long gown a bit while coming down
the stairs..she walked with the charm and grace of a princess.. as soon as she
placed her foot on the lawn the whole lawn was lit up..

Nivi looked around..the whole lawn looked so beautiful and
nivi loved wat she saw and that was clear on her face..the shine in her
eyes..the smile on her lips..

Nivi saw in the middle of the lawn..a table set for two..

Nivi went near the table and looked around..but viren was
nowhere she called out.. "viren please aajaao na.."

Nivi felt someone stand close behind close that
she could feel the breath on her back..

Nivi knew it was viren and she turned around to see viren
dressed up in a red shirt and black waist coat..stunning as ever..nivi got lost
in his eyes..

Viren left nivi in the room and went to do the last minute
preparations..he was here earlier in the day getting things ready..

Viren wondered whether nivi will wear the dress..he
decided to wait..after awhile he played his flute..he knew that nivi will soon
come to him at the sound of the flute..

He was right..

he looked on as nivi came out..looking around..viren
watched as nivi climbed down the stairs slightly lifting the gown to avoid
falling..viren was blown by her beauty..everytime viren saw her he thought this
was the moment she was the most beautiful..and the next time wen he saw her, he
was again bowled off..

The charisma was so alluring..viren wondered is this how
princesses are or is this wat angels look
like..viren had a sudden urge to run to her..but he waited and wen nivi
set foot on the lawn he switched on the lights..wat viren felt when he saw the
look on niviz face as she saw the whole lawn light up was more than wat viren
could explain..niviz face gleamed with happiness and viren felt that nivi was
the most brightest of all the lights..

Then viren heard nivi calling him..he couldn't wait
anymore..he slowly went and stood behind close that he could hear her
take deep breaths wen she realized his presence..and wen she turned around to
look at him..there was so much love in her eyes that viren wished that if he could
stop time..

Edited by daffodils06 - 07 July 2011 at 3:52am

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daffodils06 Goldie

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Posted: 06 July 2011 at 12:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kinha123

beautiful chapter jez Hug

thank u dear..
daffodils06 Goldie

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Posted: 06 July 2011 at 12:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Alphabet26

jez wow ... wonderful chapter... viren was searching for nivi...Embarrassed nivi is also good she went home to wish viren alone... waiting for your next chapter want to see what will viren plan for the next day evening..Day Dreaming 

glad that u liked it dear..thank u for reading..viren defntly hav plans for the evening..
daffodils06 Goldie

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Posted: 06 July 2011 at 1:00pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Alphabet26

Originally posted by daffodils06

thank u dear..and dont worry about raj..that chapter is closed..Smile

i am so happy jez that raj chapter is closed...Wink

yes dear..closed that present hav no twists in mind..

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Posted: 06 July 2011 at 1:01pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Resh_kinhafan

enjoyed it a lot diiiBig smile...nivi's surprise bday party rocked!!!!
viren buying gifts for nivi on his every bday is very sweetSmile!!!
really loved all the lines which nivi wrote Big smileBig smile!!!
waiting for the next part...viren's wish made me smile...NivRen alone again...see dii i'm blushingEmbarrassedEmbarrassedLOL!!!!
luv uHug

thank u sweety..glad that u enjoyed it..luv u too sweety...Hug
daffodils06 Goldie

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Posted: 06 July 2011 at 1:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by rshree1182

Jez..awesome chapter dear.. Nivi's surprise party for Viren and Viren and Nivi in black Day Dreaming..

thank u dear..always wanted to see both of them in black..together..

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