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ff: The promise of love(chapters 50,51,52) (Page 7)

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CHAPTER 7

The practice was goin on..two friends of raj were sitting in front of viren..they didn't notice viren in the bac..
"hey varun there is chance for a treat today..raj is defntly gonna loose this bet.."
"wat bet.."asked the other..
"hey look herez the girl.."
"raj keh raha tha ki woh ladki raj ko mud ke dekhegi'pagal hai vo..the girl hardly knows him.."
"chalo hamein kya..??"
viren looked in the ground for the girl in blue and saw nivi and sasha coming along..viren looked at raj and saw him staring at nivi..nivi was in blue..
viren was also looking at nivi along with the others to c whether she will look at raj..
but nivi didn't look at raj..
niviz eyes were searching for viren..nivi saw the others but viren was not there..she looked a little ahead and found viren looking at her..she smiled at him..
raj was waiting for nivi to turn around..he knew that he was fooling himself as nivi didn't even know where he was in the ground..she didn't even know that he was in the field..
then raj saw nivi smile and looked at the direction of her gaze and saw viren..raj got angry..
viren looked at raj and saw raj was looking at nivi and then him..the ball was kicked to raj and all of a sudden he aimed the ball at nivi and hit it hard..
nivi smiled at viren and saw him lookin somewhere else..nivi found nothing new as it was expected from viren, there was very little chance that he will return the smile..
it was suddenly that something hit her hard on the leg and she lost her balance and fell on the ground..at first she felt everything around her moving in circles..then she felt a seering pain on her leg and she cried out in pain..tears were rolling down from her eyes..every body started gathering around her..Sasha was calling out to nivi..but she couldn't answer..
she couldn't stand the pain..she closed her eyes tightly..she heard viren asking her.. more like scolding.. "y did u have to walk close to the field..??couldnt u watch where u r going..??y didn't u move wen the ball came??tumhara dhyan kahan rahtha hai??"
she didn't open her eyes..as she didn't want toc an angry viren in the midst of this..
it was then that she felt somebody lifted her up..was it viren??she didn't open her eyes to look..wat if it is someone else..
viren saw raj hitting the ball at nivi and before he could do anything he saw nivi fall and cry out in pain.. he ran down from the gallery and before going to nivi, viren went to raj and said "tumhe tho mein baad mein dekh loonga.."his eyes were red with anger..
he ran to her and saw her crying in pain with her eyes shut tightly..he began to ask her y she had to walk close to the field and so many other things that came to his mind...
even before viren realized wat he was doing he bent down and took her in his arms..
everybody was tensed but nobody noticed an extra line of worry on virenz face..
at first nivi didn't open her eyes..viren was worried tosee nivi in pain..he kept on loking at her..
nivi slowly opened her eyes and saw viren with a tensed face..for a second she forgot her pain wen she saw the look on virenz face..she closed her eyes as she remembered something..
a look on wat nivi saw..
it was a park and some kids were playing there..a little girl was sitting in the bench and watching the boys play..one of the kids hit the ball and the ball fell on the little girl and she began to cry..a boy ran to her calling out niveditha..
r u ok??y did u hav to sit here..can't u see others r playing??y cant  u be careful..
The boy turned around and yelled at the boy who hit the ball..
The little girl looked at the boy with surprise in her eyes..thinking if viren was worried for her then y did he scold her..
just then her dad came and took her in his arms and went away..nivi looked at viren with her head on her dadz shoulder..viren looked bac at her..
nivi came bac to the present and for a split second nivi felt like this was her childhood friend viren..
she stared as if trying to confirm her doubts..but she couldn't think straight.. the pain was building up..
It took viren a second to realize that nivi had stopped crying..viren looked at her and saw her looking at him with an odd expression as if she was not here..but somewhere else..he called out to nivi with a worried voice and asked.. "wat happened??"
Nivi looked at him asking in an innocent voice.. "kya saare viren aise hothe hain..??"
viren didn't understand wat she was asking.. "kya keh rahi ho tum..??"
Nivi shook her head saying "nothing.."
She was taken to the hospital..the doctor said nivi is ok.. he gave her medicines for the pain and some balm and said that nivi just needs to give her leg some  rest..She will be okay by the next day..



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So nivi remembers viren... hope nothing happens to nivi's leg, hope viren take nivi to collage next day...Wink

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cool..loved both the chapters.. I am enjoying this 3rd angle - Raj..

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CHAPTER 7

The practice was goin on..two friends of raj were sitting in front of viren..they didn't notice viren in the bac..
"hey varun there is chance for a treat today..raj is defntly gonna loose this bet.."
"wat bet.."asked the other..
"hey look herez the girl.."
"raj keh raha tha ki woh ladki raj ko mud ke dekhegi…pagal hai vo..the girl hardly knows him.."
"chalo hamein kya..??"
viren looked in the ground for the girl in blue and saw nivi and sasha coming along..viren looked at raj and saw him staring at nivi..nivi was in blue..
viren was also looking at nivi along with the others to c whether she will look at raj..
but nivi didn't look at raj..
niviz eyes were searching for viren..nivi saw the others but viren was not there..she looked a little ahead and found viren looking at her..she smiled at him..
raj was waiting for nivi to turn around..he knew that he was fooling himself as nivi didn't even know where he was in the ground..she didn't even know that he was in the field..
then raj saw nivi smile and looked at the direction of her gaze and saw viren..raj got angry..
viren looked at raj and saw raj was looking at nivi and then him..the ball was kicked to raj and all of a sudden he aimed the ball at nivi and hit it hard..
nivi smiled at viren and saw him lookin somewhere else..nivi found nothing new as it was expected from viren, there was very little chance that he will return the smile..
it was suddenly that something hit her hard on the leg and she lost her balance and fell on the ground..at first she felt everything around her moving in circles..then she felt a seering pain on her leg and she cried out in pain..tears were rolling down from her eyes..every body started gathering around her..Sasha was calling out to nivi..but she couldn't answer..
she couldn't stand the pain..she closed her eyes tightly..she heard viren asking her.. more like scolding.. "y did u have to walk close to the field..??couldnt u watch where u r going..??y didn't u move wen the ball came??tumhara dhyan kahan rahtha hai??"
she didn't open her eyes..as she didn't want toc an angry viren in the midst of this..
it was then that she felt somebody lifted her up..was it viren??she didn't open her eyes to look..wat if it is someone else..
viren saw raj hitting the ball at nivi and before he could do anything he saw nivi fall and cry out in pain.. he ran down from the gallery and before going to nivi, viren went to raj and said "tumhe tho mein baad mein dekh loonga.."his eyes were red with anger..
he ran to her and saw her crying in pain with her eyes shut tightly..he began to ask her y she had to walk close to the field and so many other things that came to his mind...
even before viren realized wat he was doing he bent down and took her in his arms..
everybody was tensed but nobody noticed an extra line of worry on virenz face..
at first nivi didn't open her eyes..viren was worried tosee nivi in pain..he kept on loking at her..
nivi slowly opened her eyes and saw viren with a tensed face..for a second she forgot her pain wen she saw the look on virenz face..she closed her eyes as she remembered something..
a look on wat nivi saw..
it was a park and some kids were playing there..a little girl was sitting in the bench and watching the boys play..one of the kids hit the ball and the ball fell on the little girl and she began to cry..a boy ran to her calling out niveditha..
r u ok??y did u hav to sit here..can't u see others r playing??y cant  u be careful..
The boy turned around and yelled at the boy who hit the ball..
The little girl looked at the boy with surprise in her eyes..thinking if viren was worried for her then y did he scold her..
just then her dad came and took her in his arms and went away..nivi looked at viren with her head on her dadz shoulder..viren looked bac at her..
for a split second nivi felt like this was her childhood friend viren..
she stared as if trying to confirm her doubts..but she couldn't think straight.. the pain was building up..
It took viren a second to realize that nivi had stopped crying..viren looked at her and saw her looking at him with an odd expression as if she was not here..but somewhere else..he called out to nivi with a worried voice and asked.. "wat happened??"
Nivi looked at him asking in an innocent voice.. "kya saare viren aise hothe hain..??"
viren didn't understand wat she was asking.. "kya keh rahi ho tum..??"
Nivi shook her head saying "nothing.."
She was taken to the hospital..the doctor said nivi is ok.. he gave her medicines for the pain and some balm and said that nivi just needs to give her leg some  rest..She will be okay by the next day..

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nice chapters,,,,,, continue soon...

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Your FF is getting really interesting... Can't wait for NivRen to find out that their are childhood friends. Please continue writing. Thanks dear for 2 great chapters:)

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Originally posted by dyhardfan

Your FF is getting really interesting... Can't wait for NivRen to find out that their are childhood friends. Please continue writing. Thanks dear for 2 great chapters:)
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