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ff: The promise of love(chapters 50,51,52) (Page 6)

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Posted: 02 June 2011 at 6:52pm | IP Logged
Awesome...
new entry loved it...Wink

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Very interesting! Loved all your chapters.  I like the Raj angle -- it will drive Viren nuts!

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I happened to this new FF today..read all the chapters..its beautifully written..

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Great to hear that u r writing an ff

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Originally posted by Alphabet26

wonderful chapter, oh no raj and viren both fell for nivi, i think we'll get some dishoom dishoo, b/w them for nivi LOL

yes somthing lik that...
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Originally posted by minu2011

Very interesting! Loved all your chapters.  I like the Raj angle -- it will drive Viren nuts!

yes sweety thatz my idea..want to drive viren nuts...
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CHAPTER 6

In the evening after class sasha and the others were waiting for nivi..
Payal was telling the others.. "wonder wat happened at home today..panditji was coming to fix the date of the engagement.."
viren and the others started making fun of payal and varun..
nivi came and joined them..she looked at viren and smiled and then asked the others "shall we go??"
"yes.. we were just talking about the engagement hope itz in the coming week..so that u will b here nivi.."said sasha..
"yes I hav only two weeks here..after that may b I'll never get the chance to com bac.."
viren felt bad at the last line..he looked at the others and he knew that the rest felt the same..it has been only a short time since she joined them..but she has now become a part of their gang..viren slowly walked and stood beside nivi..
Viren was thinking of something and he suddenly asked "somebody giv me a phone.." and before anybody could say anything he asked "nivi.. can u giv me ur fone for a second..need to mak an urgent call..there is something wrong with my phone.."
he turned away and dialed a number.. that's wen he saw raj coming towards them or may b nivi..viren quickly disconnected the fone & turned around and said.. "hey nivi and sasha I'm going in ur direction, I'll drop u.."
he gave back niviz fone, took hold of her hand and said.. "com on sasha I'm in a hurry.."
nivi didn't understand wat was the hurry all of a sudden and on top of that..viren was holding her hand..nivi was surprised as to y she felt warmth with his touch as if she knew him earlier or did her hand knew his hand that well that it didn't sweat in his hands..
saaketh followed them saying.. "i'm also coming..wait for me.."
while getting in the car viren looked around as he was sure raj will b somewhere near watching them and he was right..
Later in the night nivi and sasha were watching tv wen sasha's fone rang..her face lit up and she was all smiling..nivi asked wat is it with her eyes..
"five days from now itz payal and varunz engagement…I'm so happy.."
"me too.."and they spent som more discussing abt shoppin, dresses and jewellery..
The next day nivi and sasha left for college together..
nivi was abt to enter her class wen somebody called her from behind she turned around to see it was raj.. "finally.. I thought I wud never get to c u alone.."
 "sorry I didn't get that.." nivi said
"oh itz nothing.. just wondering as to y the others keep on wandering around u..they never leave u alone.."
"they r my friends and I enjoy their company..excuse me..i hav class.."
"hey tak it easy…u seem offended..did I hurt u..??let me mak up for it..letz hav coffee…"
"sorry I don't lik coffee thank you.."and she got inside the class before raj could say anything else..the expression on rajz face was not at all good..
Nivi was not at all liking the way raj was trying to b nice to her for no reason at all..at first she thought of talking to sasha about it,bt then thought wat wud she tell sasha..may be this is how raj is..
Nivi's classes got over early..she called sasha to check whether she was free..thatz wen nivi knew that they were going to the football field as saaketh had a game today..
she wanted to meet the others specially viren..she wondered wat will be virenz reaction wen he sees her..
itz rare that somebody irritates nivi or gets annoyed at her..even if somebody irritates her..she prefers to stay away from them..this is the first time she feels like meeting the person who keeps on annoying and irritating her..
sasha said that she wil wait for nivi in the canteen..
sasha was talking to the others wen she noticed raj and one of his friends looking at them as if keeping a watch on them..
"hey guys..is it me or hav u all noticed that raj seems to b present where ever v are..i saw him in the morning wen nivi and I came..then I saw him in the canteen..looked like he was searching some one.."
every one turned to look at him..and raj moved away from there confirming sashaz doubt..
viren all of a sudden asked "where is niveditha..?? didn't see her today.."
thatz wen sashaz fone rang it was nivi..sasha told her about the game and said that she will wait for nivi in the canteen..
the others left to see saaketh practice for the big game..
viren decided to sit alone as he didn't want to create awkward scenes wen he met niveditha..
but viren doesn't seem to understand that somthings are meant to happen..and they will happen no matter wat..

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thank you all for ur wonderful comments..ijust updated anothr chapter..do read and comment..

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